A Hentai System in the World of Danmachi

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ParodyGirl

If you liked the previous version, I'll try to make even more chapters smu*s in this version. Be prepared!!! I'll also try to make the story more entertaining and with decent interaction between the characters. It's not certain that I'll manage that, but I'll try.

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Arnab_Panday

A full 5 star from me. Hope it will be as enjoyable as the previous one and maybe more. I think you should make the MC a bit more positive or at least not villain. And definitely not mind control. Also, maybe increase the word count per chapter?

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Drunk_Hermit

Great potential until... 1. let's eat out a prostitute 2 i got a prostitute pregnant 3 the prostitute 's part of my harem but it's still a prostitute

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Lord_Azathoth

Baby, it's Sunday!!! 40 chapters accumulated... Gonna read’em all.🔥🔥🔥 I hope you've impregnated some good ones in this story...😅

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Nova255

before i start reading this. i just have one question is the MC a beta and submissive and get push around like the last novel?. because if it is this is not my cup of tea

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Katanexy

I've known the author for a while (as a close friend) and I know how hard he works! So 5 stars! (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o)

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Kyaa_

You know what would be funny? If he bangs Bell’s Aunt

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Artoriapendraragon

way better than last fic you write also I'm rooting for Freya aswell please make it happen 🥺🥺🥺

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Kronos_

A great story with good development, I guarantee you won't regret it hehe

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NanoLOA

Letting it marinate some more, if it’s anything like the last version I don’t doubt it’ll be a good read.

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Raja_Sihir

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Aris82

this danmanchi fanfiction is very good. even without the smut part. so try this one to thoose interested.

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I_Love_Hina

when freya?

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Takumoto

Thanks for the re-writing!!

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Zarion116

I need 1000 more chapters of this. Please please please please. This fanfic hits the spot. It’s got a decent protagonist. Used the source material well…in my opinion.

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Railson_Mateus

Bem melhor que a versao anterior. Nao que fosse ruim, mas realmente a parada de controle da mente e chato pra caralho. Ansioso pra quando aisha descobri a gravidez.

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applo43

okay let's see what we got here...........

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SoloMorn

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MajiSeason2

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LovesTheRiddle

It's better than the previous version. I hope you don't drop this novel .