Naruto, Be My Son

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HoriOtnasus

good novel I hope you will continue it and not stop writing this novel. Because i love it and there are rarely novels about Whitebeard in the Naruto world.

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Wachdog

This is Chinese, a very unfortunate thing, it doesn't matter, I will try it because I love One Piece and Whitebeard. Anyway, I just hope it's something good, it's a shame that I don't have the writing skills to do my own work.

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sin_of_memes

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Syrr

Usually, I'm not too fond of translations because they're usually done poorly, but the writing quality of the original author is good and the translation is done exceptionally well, except for some slight grammatical errors, I find the story to be a very entertaining read, currently, the stability of updates is good, currently once every day. I don't know how many untranslated chapters remain or if the untranslated version of this is still receiving updates, as this is usually what ends translations, but Chinese authors are actually built different, so let's hope that doesn't happen.

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Joaquin_Bonilla_2031

looks good, writing seems fine and wish there was more updates! So keep those chapters coming and don't drop!

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Everythingonurmind

This is surprisingly good. Like you know what white beard is? A father figure, a family you can rely on. And what alot of Chracther in the Naruto verse lack is a family. So it is both wholesome and action packed.

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STEVIOL_GLY

YES good story, dont drop it. update regularly, kill root. dont make whitebeard go beta and spam conqueror haki with everyone you meet . . . . . . . . .

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TheSleepySilverW

Love it😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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BoredSoHere

I would have liked the character of whitebeard more fleshed out but unfortunately it's been very poorly constructed .. Whitebeard once sailed with Rocks and was friend and enemies with Roger and garp and you can't be one if you only have brawn but not the brains.. Only when he was old and had lot injuries that he left the command to Marko to increase the time he can stay so that his crew can strengthen and look after themselves after he has passed away!! Whitebeard is powerful character with enough mind, wit, cunningness in his bones to make even Sengoku prepare multiple measures stacked kn each other to ensure his fall and be almost failed if not for akainu and blackbeards schemes.. anyone good writing but I hope the character were more fleshed and had depth in them..

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Geno_hunter

im having fun reading this novel. Continue this awesome job 😁

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Exxyy

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Gratiz_

This fanfic is pure gold! You have to read it! Though we need a lot more chapters. Author, please work as hard as naruto on these chaps! You can do it, dattabeyo!

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Jad04238

great story. I always enjoy reading stories about whitebeard.

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SirJuan_Juan

Great Story, so far 😁 I love it and enjoy the interaction between Whitebeard and Young NarutoYou, too, will love this story

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DaoistpeRN2t

Illogical things, the strength of the beard is exaggerated, twice the strength of the ninja, it seems as if he cannot defeat Whitebeard, despite the ninja's defense is weak, but their attack is strong, I do not deny the strength of the beard and his full strength with awakening is almost equal to the peak of Hashirama and also equal to Madara with the Rinnegan, but The ninja countries also have their different powers, ninjutsu, sealing, and assassination... and if the beard is strong, they will gang up on him like Madara, I see that they have become dogs for pirates, also Naruto's exaggerated strength, unconvincing arrogance. He takes this, steals this, and challenges those who are stronger than him, if we say Kisame plays with him. Jiraiya does not want to harm him, but Orochimaru is different. I do not like annoying and arrogant children like this. The problem is that one year has passed, and the matter is that the tailed beasts steal, kill people, and attack villages. In the end, they bothered me with family affection, but those who killed them did not have a family. The generation is slandered a lot, even though it is wrong in me. Naruto's right, but Naruto has become worse than him now.. The third generation, Danzo, Obito, Yagura, are all weak? But they made you defeated like dogs. If you write something, write something logical. Without the system in the ninja world, you would be destroyed. Whitebeard comes and destroys the villages while they watch. This is not the mentality of the ninja villages. The ninja world is different from the mentality of the pirate world.. even if Whitebeard had the jounin gathered on him and whatnot. Above he died while he was injured. Also, I do not deny Naruto's physical talent, more consolations, but I doubt his ninjutsu talent. Also, the Nine-Tails is not weaker than Whitebeard. How much I hate novels that underestimate the Nine-Tails, whether he is skilled due to the Sharingan, or Hashirama with the wood style, or the Uzamaki seal.. all of them. Restricted in terms of endurance and destruction, the Nine-Tails are stronger than them. At least 50% of the Juubi's chakra is allocated to the Nine-Tails. If it were not for him, Naruto would never have been a match for Sasuke. They are the culprits and the Kyuubi's bellum. If it were not for Madara, the Kyuubi would not have chosen to reconcile with Naruto. And without the Kyuubi's approval. Naruto will never become a gensuriki. I don't like an arrogant or foolish Naruto. The middle is the best. The idea of ​​the novel is beautiful, but unfortunately the content is illogical in relation to the world of ninja. The beard is not all-powerful to cover everything in the world of ninja. If they had summoned the first, second, and fourth Hokage, he would have defeated Whitebeard. Don't say they can't. The technique exists, and it's not difficult to find someone who masters it, and the First Hokage is not weaker than Whitebeard.

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Artem_5195

Kaguya you will be my Wife!!!!))your children are my children) hahaha. ............ . ............................ .............. .. . . . . ... . . .. . . .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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STEVIOL_GLY

my 2nd review for the well being of this good novel (and an extra chapter hopefully) . . . . > . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Mito_Jomar

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Daoist_Dan

Fantastic concept, great scenes, and an equally good translation. I can't wait until this has a 100 chapters translated!____________________________