True Magician (FatexDxD)

LV 5

Whtvr

MC is forced to help Issei babysit him. He has everything, true magic, summons servants at will, and probably can solo dxd verse but he can't do that since apparently, Alaya said he can't do that. That's what you need to know, I can't read further

LV 4

Bored_Reader_111

MC is forced to help Issei and can't change the plot much even with two true magic in his hand so what's the point of coming to dxd world just for the plot to continue like in cannon .

LV 13

Caedus_Aldric

too much wrong with it premise was good but the way it was written and then doglicking for issei really soured my reading experience

LV 4

Aerian

I would give it a negative review if I could, simply because the author seems to misunderstand the grandeur of true magic. Introducing him to the 'High School DxD' universe is akin to placing a level infinity boss with maximum stats in a level 1 map, without considering all of his additional powers. I've only read two chapters, and there would be several layers of infinity if we included all his other abilities.

LV 4

Helia_King

While it’s good it’s also annoying to read with you mixing “ and - for speech.

LV 4

RandomFateFan

This is an interesting idea, that was completily wasted. My homies would call this IDP( Interesting Idea done Poorly) The forcing mc to help Issei and not letting he change to much just sucks, both in concept and in paper, there is also the issue of mc being just boring. (It shows that i fin't read, the reason is that i was reading it with wattpad)

LV 1

wororrin

I just say - get him Boyz! Hero become Alaya dog. Become a nanny for Isei... whats a ANY point of taking care of a stupid schoolboy who is synonym of nothing... Whats a point of force-stopping development of the story; FORBIDDING the hero from changing canon.... give hero infinity powers and strength, but ban him from act...

LV 3

Mamamesta

I haven't read any of this, but from the reviews I need someone to confirm that the Mc is Issei's bootlicker or not? And they don't change the plot in some way and I don't see the harem label which means that Issei will get everything

LV 11

Febfew

5,3,2,2,2 Sorry author, but this plot is super strange and the comedy wasn't great. But the grammar and number of words are ok. ......................

LV 4

RS_1

not as entertaining as I was expecting. mc is op to the point there's no motivation to achieve something, he's just there to watch

LV 4

Aady_Shrestha

I swear to god web novels readers are just the worst. They won’t appreciate a story where the main character isn’t using his op powers to dominate everyone and create a harem. This story feels like a breath of fresh air compared to other fics. Although not perfect and yes Mc is forced to help out Issie, majority of the time the story isn’t focused on that. The author does a good job in keeping the story interesting. Yes the mc is Op but he also has heavy restrictions which keeps the story from being bland. In Conclusion, this story is an under appreciated fic with great potential so pls give it a chance to read.

LV 14

CrimsonRoseDevil

The moment I saw the of "quotation" I knew there was no way I was going to turn off my brain to enjoy this.

LV 1

Kell_Kewyo

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LV 4

KarasAdamas

I have to say that this is the type of Fate DxD fic that I have been looking for and so far, I really like it. The MC is endering and different from what I'm used to and his actions feels very mischievious but not illogical. It's still in its early stage and there's obviously a more detailed background to him that just hasn't been revealed yet for story reasons. But despite all the positives that I have for this fic, there is an obvious glaring problem. This book is very obviously translated, and has the occasional errors and missuse of certain words. Like instead of saying Peerage, the word used is "entourage". Instead of Saint Graph, this book says "Holy Graph", they say "The Ophis" instead of just Ophis, and some others. It's not so bad that it makes the book unreadable, but it feels like a very easy to solve issue. Other than that, I would say that I look forward to the next chapter.

LV 4

Daotianshen

The writing is not prefered by webnovel readers you should change it like " is for characters talking and ' is for them to say in their thought.

LV 3

Cardinal_Direction

The author clearly has no understanding of Fate. This is evident in how they made True Magic seem like something you could buy at Walmart. Plus, the story is painful to read, and the characters feel completely out of place.

LV 5

Kiyan

Interesting idea but was ruined with the whole can't change the plot or else thing, him having to help issei beat the final boss when he could easily do it himself is just stupid.

LV 5

LastGod

MC forced to help protag and that just bascially makes the the same story as the anime with one more character. this isnt about the MC anymore this isnt about his story its just issie's story told from someone elses pov in a more convoluted manner.