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Escribe una reseñaI wasn’t expecting this kind of story development, but it was entertaining. This novel puts a classic VR twist on the Naruto story, but in a much darker sense. The main cast is interesting with Arthur being at the center of some huge controversy. The grammar is excellent as well, only a few issues here and there. Only thing missing is a little clarity, the first few chapters were heavy on the exposition but other than that it was nice overall.
Amazing story, it has hooked me from first chapter!, The world building is immersive, and the character development is outstanding. Kudos to the author 👌
I ain't gonna lie, what intrigues me the most with this book is the writing quality, and after each chapter, you just want to keep reading.
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This book is a captivating exploration of life's possibilities, filled with hope and inspiration. It masterfully delves into themes of self-discovery and the power of choice, leaving readers with a renewed perspective on their own lives. With its imaginative storytelling and emotional depth, it’s a must-read for anyone seeking a heartwarming and thought-provoking experience.
The story plot is familiar to the series Naruto and I did not expect it to be this good....not gonna lie it was the standard for novels and has to have good writing quality. The Story was not that unique but still the execution of the novel was good that it made me impressed. The dark side was......it was slow in pacing and it was a long read...though the more the better for others 😉
I really like the the story, reading this novel makes it obvious that the writer is a christian, and I really love the way he has with his words. The writing as nice and describes the story very well. Summary: Just read the story You'll love it
Mannn! I thought this was gonna be some typical Naruto transmigration story, but man, it's a long way from it. The book is actually really dark and cold, which definitely caught me off guard. I am still barely into the chapters, but I really love how the author molded the lead personality around the "survival of the fittest" mindset and completely changed his character. I look forward to seeing other characters, like Alex, Campbell, and others-what roles or powers they've inherited. Definitely planning to keep reading!
Really came as a surprise and really should be more popular. MC is a very pragmatic character and willing to go far for his goals. not just in the sendse of killing but he uses cunning, tactics and trickery too. it's a bit fast paced but not enough to give whiplash. overall a great read
I love the way the author darkens the world. A new POV in the world of Naruto is certainly not a bad idea as it engages many Naruto fans to read it. As always, I admire the author's writing style. But, despite compliments, there are some criticisms. Like, the chapter length is too much. The pacing is slow, and the author explains every event of Naruto even though it may not be important.
It's excellent 👌. But it hardly feels like a fanfic of Naruto. But if tou consider it as an individual novel, then it's good. Characters are very realistic, but these counterparts don't match the OG characters in Naruto. At least, the ones who interacted with Main Leads. Their names are also strange as they possessed bodies which already have had their identities. So shouldn't their name be Japanese or at least resemble Japanese instead of American? While the story isn't very fast paced, but MLs are getting stronger at alarming speed. And for some reason, ML Otsutsuki clan is Konohagakure. Shouldn't he be in space with Toneri or even at the Otsutsuki clan? And how is he learning jutsus? Why is like a complete normal shinobi? And Otsutsuki's should look different from humans, so why isn't he questioned? And seeing a Jesus follower, especially in Naruto anime seems really odd. Well, it's not Naruto anime. In the starting, the antagonist I will say, explained that it's a world similar to Naruto, but not Naruto. So all my previous points are invalid. But I just wanted to share my thoughts. I hope you enjoy this novel further and it does well in the future.
I liked the writing style and progression of the story. The characters are interesting in their own ways and the overall concept of the narrative is enjoyable to read. However, I don't know whether this is fanfic or since I've never read one. But Naruto's lore is mentioned a lot in the story
Pros: I think your storytelling is great. The way you let the facts sink in is also great. But for a Naruto fan, some parts of the explanation may feel boring. Having watched Naruto myself years ago, I think the way you have darkened the universe is something many old Naruto fans would want. Cons: First of all, even if you mentioned somewhere in the synopsis or the review that it isn't a fanfic, it gives a fanfic vive. I don't know about the future chapters but for now, the pacing of the story is quite slow. I know that the words for the details to sink and to give info just in case someone with zero knowledge of Naruto reads it; it is also important to minimise those words to a bare minimum so that it feels like the story is progressing quickly. If you planned the slow pacing, I can't say much about it.
I am an otaku and I love animes. I am really fascinated by the work. I would like to read more about it. I originally came here to supprot a fellow writer but it seems that I am hooked. So, I look forward to have a good read!
Очень классно спасибо тебе автор :) Надеюсь ещё будет такие сюжеты удачи тебе и ещё ты в каком стране Иииииииииииииииииииииииииииииииииииии
Writing quality is great, world (Excellent) Character design and story development is 5 star, but one thing; I am not so sure but why ain't this book popular? Most authors don't write like this.
wow it's awesome I like how author decided to go to the depth of Bible and extract meaningful quotes . writing is also impeccable . and author also described the background of the world very neatly. he explained many things that most author avoid . you guys should give it a shot
The writing quality is great, along with the background of the world. However, the MC is simply weird. As a Christian myself, to kill indiscriminately is something that is against what is natural for us, yet Arthur lives and breathes by that very paradox. His penchant to murder for the sake of it quickly got old. I mean, his first thought of seeing naruto was to rip his throat out... I'm disappointed in how this fanfic turned out.
Its a good book, I like the premise of the underdog hidden power trope but the story has a couple plot holes like mc being able to get kekkai genkais just by injecting blood into his body, If that was the case everyone and their dog would have like ten kekkai genkais. Maybe it has something to do with him being clanless like hiruko (creater of chimera technique) so his compatibility is super super high like 99% high? I liked the use of the non cannon kekkai genkais and the fact mc read the plot a million times before selecting his clan. It has lots of chapters and is a solid read
It's known that there are many fan fics about popular anime and movies. However, this stands above them all. Picturing the environment during an entire series of naruto is not a simple feat, and the development of characters are also stable. I suggest this to all anime fans, it's a new step towards greatness.
Masterpiece work but underrated. It may be my selfish wish but, i need more updates Author san. Moreeeeeeee.
As someone desperate for good fiction on Webnovel, I can confidently say this hits every spot. It's a 10/10 story. The idea is fresh, the writing quality is top-notch and the MC has a layered character.
Maravilloso todo. Me encanto que el protagonista fue cristiano. Hace mucho tiempo no veía historias así como estas, en la que el protagonista sea villano y piense que el mundo es un infierno.
its explaining the story really well, also its one of the further! it would actually be cool if the author adds a scene when they get back in the time and trying to undo the war, I most likely advice to read this this is a masterpiece also reallt well written the author knows what he does!
Waited till now to write this review. By far the best fiction I've read in a while. It's written well and I love the MC. Villain novels are my favorite since they don't incorporate oblivious MC's. This MC's cool, level-headed and doesn't make rash decision. Author literally wrote an amazing premise to keep the story rolling. Don't forget about us when you get famous Akito!
I admire the concept and the plot of the novel. Quite intriguing and captivating with each chapter bringing more our of the story. love it.
Craziest novel ever! Like, author writes better than most. He not even famous? Craaaazy! The story has good pacing. MCs not like the ignorant ones you read about. This guys trapped in a virtual world and becomes the villain against 6 others trapped with him. At least you think theyre trapped. Best part about this novel. It has actions mystery and drama! 😗
Shameless review here. Greetings everyone. Path of War both is and isn't your typical adventure story. Arthur Bennet, our main protagonist, is a devout Christian. This alone is enough to tell you there will be quotes taken directly from the King James Version Bible. It's important to note from the outset that this isn't anime fan fiction. To be exact, it's not fan fiction at all. While the setting is based on the popular Naruto franchise, the story takes a sharp turn into a brutal survival tale. Once our main character participates in a groundbreaking VR experience offered by Elysium, a high-tech company, his excitement quickly fades as he discovers a horrifying truth: the pain within the simulation is agonizingly real, despite assurances of a light pain response. Now thrown into this virtual prison, he's going to try his best to escape by becoming the world's main villain. The story as a whole is crafted as a suspenseful narrative that explores the dark side of virtual reality as well as man's true evil nature. We see the main character grappling with this new world, forced to adapt and fight for survival in a world that's foreign to him. If you're looking for a lighthearted adventure, this story isn't for you. However, if you enjoy thrillers with a touch of science fiction and an anti-hero protagonist thrust into extraordinary circumstances, then this might be a book worth checking out. Just be prepared for excellent story-telling and multiple characters to help drive the plot. Last but not least, please, for what sanity is left in this world, read the preface!
I wasn’t expecting this kind of story development, but it was entertaining. This novel puts a classic VR twist on the Naruto story, but in a much darker sense. The main cast is interesting with Arthur being at the center of some huge controversy. The grammar is excellent as well, only a few issues here and there. Only thing missing is a little clarity, the first few chapters were heavy on the exposition but other than that it was nice overall.
Amazing story, it has hooked me from first chapter!, The world building is immersive, and the character development is outstanding. Kudos to the author 👌
I ain't gonna lie, what intrigues me the most with this book is the writing quality, and after each chapter, you just want to keep reading.
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This book is a captivating exploration of life's possibilities, filled with hope and inspiration. It masterfully delves into themes of self-discovery and the power of choice, leaving readers with a renewed perspective on their own lives. With its imaginative storytelling and emotional depth, it’s a must-read for anyone seeking a heartwarming and thought-provoking experience.
The story plot is familiar to the series Naruto and I did not expect it to be this good....not gonna lie it was the standard for novels and has to have good writing quality. The Story was not that unique but still the execution of the novel was good that it made me impressed. The dark side was......it was slow in pacing and it was a long read...though the more the better for others 😉
I really like the the story, reading this novel makes it obvious that the writer is a christian, and I really love the way he has with his words. The writing as nice and describes the story very well. Summary: Just read the story You'll love it
Mannn! I thought this was gonna be some typical Naruto transmigration story, but man, it's a long way from it. The book is actually really dark and cold, which definitely caught me off guard. I am still barely into the chapters, but I really love how the author molded the lead personality around the "survival of the fittest" mindset and completely changed his character. I look forward to seeing other characters, like Alex, Campbell, and others-what roles or powers they've inherited. Definitely planning to keep reading!
Really came as a surprise and really should be more popular. MC is a very pragmatic character and willing to go far for his goals. not just in the sendse of killing but he uses cunning, tactics and trickery too. it's a bit fast paced but not enough to give whiplash. overall a great read
I love the way the author darkens the world. A new POV in the world of Naruto is certainly not a bad idea as it engages many Naruto fans to read it. As always, I admire the author's writing style. But, despite compliments, there are some criticisms. Like, the chapter length is too much. The pacing is slow, and the author explains every event of Naruto even though it may not be important.
It's excellent 👌. But it hardly feels like a fanfic of Naruto. But if tou consider it as an individual novel, then it's good. Characters are very realistic, but these counterparts don't match the OG characters in Naruto. At least, the ones who interacted with Main Leads. Their names are also strange as they possessed bodies which already have had their identities. So shouldn't their name be Japanese or at least resemble Japanese instead of American? While the story isn't very fast paced, but MLs are getting stronger at alarming speed. And for some reason, ML Otsutsuki clan is Konohagakure. Shouldn't he be in space with Toneri or even at the Otsutsuki clan? And how is he learning jutsus? Why is like a complete normal shinobi? And Otsutsuki's should look different from humans, so why isn't he questioned? And seeing a Jesus follower, especially in Naruto anime seems really odd. Well, it's not Naruto anime. In the starting, the antagonist I will say, explained that it's a world similar to Naruto, but not Naruto. So all my previous points are invalid. But I just wanted to share my thoughts. I hope you enjoy this novel further and it does well in the future.
I liked the writing style and progression of the story. The characters are interesting in their own ways and the overall concept of the narrative is enjoyable to read. However, I don't know whether this is fanfic or since I've never read one. But Naruto's lore is mentioned a lot in the story
Pros: I think your storytelling is great. The way you let the facts sink in is also great. But for a Naruto fan, some parts of the explanation may feel boring. Having watched Naruto myself years ago, I think the way you have darkened the universe is something many old Naruto fans would want. Cons: First of all, even if you mentioned somewhere in the synopsis or the review that it isn't a fanfic, it gives a fanfic vive. I don't know about the future chapters but for now, the pacing of the story is quite slow. I know that the words for the details to sink and to give info just in case someone with zero knowledge of Naruto reads it; it is also important to minimise those words to a bare minimum so that it feels like the story is progressing quickly. If you planned the slow pacing, I can't say much about it.
I am an otaku and I love animes. I am really fascinated by the work. I would like to read more about it. I originally came here to supprot a fellow writer but it seems that I am hooked. So, I look forward to have a good read!
Очень классно спасибо тебе автор :) Надеюсь ещё будет такие сюжеты удачи тебе и ещё ты в каком стране Иииииииииииииииииииииииииииииииииииии
Writing quality is great, world (Excellent) Character design and story development is 5 star, but one thing; I am not so sure but why ain't this book popular? Most authors don't write like this.
wow it's awesome I like how author decided to go to the depth of Bible and extract meaningful quotes . writing is also impeccable . and author also described the background of the world very neatly. he explained many things that most author avoid . you guys should give it a shot
The writing quality is great, along with the background of the world. However, the MC is simply weird. As a Christian myself, to kill indiscriminately is something that is against what is natural for us, yet Arthur lives and breathes by that very paradox. His penchant to murder for the sake of it quickly got old. I mean, his first thought of seeing naruto was to rip his throat out... I'm disappointed in how this fanfic turned out.
Its a good book, I like the premise of the underdog hidden power trope but the story has a couple plot holes like mc being able to get kekkai genkais just by injecting blood into his body, If that was the case everyone and their dog would have like ten kekkai genkais. Maybe it has something to do with him being clanless like hiruko (creater of chimera technique) so his compatibility is super super high like 99% high? I liked the use of the non cannon kekkai genkais and the fact mc read the plot a million times before selecting his clan. It has lots of chapters and is a solid read
It's known that there are many fan fics about popular anime and movies. However, this stands above them all. Picturing the environment during an entire series of naruto is not a simple feat, and the development of characters are also stable. I suggest this to all anime fans, it's a new step towards greatness.
Masterpiece work but underrated. It may be my selfish wish but, i need more updates Author san. Moreeeeeeee.
As someone desperate for good fiction on Webnovel, I can confidently say this hits every spot. It's a 10/10 story. The idea is fresh, the writing quality is top-notch and the MC has a layered character.
Maravilloso todo. Me encanto que el protagonista fue cristiano. Hace mucho tiempo no veía historias así como estas, en la que el protagonista sea villano y piense que el mundo es un infierno.
its explaining the story really well, also its one of the further! it would actually be cool if the author adds a scene when they get back in the time and trying to undo the war, I most likely advice to read this this is a masterpiece also reallt well written the author knows what he does!
Waited till now to write this review. By far the best fiction I've read in a while. It's written well and I love the MC. Villain novels are my favorite since they don't incorporate oblivious MC's. This MC's cool, level-headed and doesn't make rash decision. Author literally wrote an amazing premise to keep the story rolling. Don't forget about us when you get famous Akito!
I admire the concept and the plot of the novel. Quite intriguing and captivating with each chapter bringing more our of the story. love it.
Craziest novel ever! Like, author writes better than most. He not even famous? Craaaazy! The story has good pacing. MCs not like the ignorant ones you read about. This guys trapped in a virtual world and becomes the villain against 6 others trapped with him. At least you think theyre trapped. Best part about this novel. It has actions mystery and drama! 😗
Shameless review here. Greetings everyone. Path of War both is and isn't your typical adventure story. Arthur Bennet, our main protagonist, is a devout Christian. This alone is enough to tell you there will be quotes taken directly from the King James Version Bible. It's important to note from the outset that this isn't anime fan fiction. To be exact, it's not fan fiction at all. While the setting is based on the popular Naruto franchise, the story takes a sharp turn into a brutal survival tale. Once our main character participates in a groundbreaking VR experience offered by Elysium, a high-tech company, his excitement quickly fades as he discovers a horrifying truth: the pain within the simulation is agonizingly real, despite assurances of a light pain response. Now thrown into this virtual prison, he's going to try his best to escape by becoming the world's main villain. The story as a whole is crafted as a suspenseful narrative that explores the dark side of virtual reality as well as man's true evil nature. We see the main character grappling with this new world, forced to adapt and fight for survival in a world that's foreign to him. If you're looking for a lighthearted adventure, this story isn't for you. However, if you enjoy thrillers with a touch of science fiction and an anti-hero protagonist thrust into extraordinary circumstances, then this might be a book worth checking out. Just be prepared for excellent story-telling and multiple characters to help drive the plot. Last but not least, please, for what sanity is left in this world, read the preface!