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Let's just say we've read a lot of novels to know what we're doing. For those interested in reading advanced chapters of "Path Of War," our Patreon link is: https://www.patreon.com/akitosbooks.

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AkitoTakahashi
6 days ago
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So the author who created "Null Reincarnation - Return Of The Fourth Primordial" has decided to start fresh with this new novel. And boy, his skills have increased since. For those who aren't aware, I really, really can't recommend any novels to anyone that aren't Christian-based. However, as an author, I am allowed to thoroughly examine others and review their work. I mean, when you write a lot of chapters and have dreams of succeeding in writing, you deserve to be reviewed. Right? Here we have another dystopian-style world where survival is (once again) the major theme. Firstly, mate, at the time of this review, that was a very long synopsis. Lol. Secondly, Ishizaki (the MC) has got to be either really fortunate or absolutely cursed for finding Solus. Who's Solus? Oh, you know, your typical sentient AI filled with "Q-energy." Not like we all don't have those lying around in our backyards. Lol. If you like tyrants that oppress a poor society with an MC that fights for said poor society, cliffhangers, advanced techno mysteries, and science fiction, then maybe this is worth looking into. Again, not for our Christian readers.

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7 days ago
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AkitoTakahashi
11 days ago
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If you follow us, you'll know that we're not into stories like these. But here we have Missnormal, who seems to wish to delve into her writing skills. Let's see what she has to offer. So the premise goes like this: survival is a challenge where a cruel game is mandated by a lottery system that selects teenagers to battle terrifying creatures. Hunger games? Nope. Divergent? Let's chill out now. Here we have the MC, Olivia, who seems like an ordinary girl until she's betrayed by her own family and forced into the game. What's the catch, author? Oh, she has a system. Ya know, those magic translucent prompts that pop up. While only five chapters in, it's evident things can get emotional. You'll know what we mean if you understand Freya's character. Again... Hunger Games, anyone? Now, there are tons of spacing issues that need to be addressed. The grammar, while not terrible, could also be improved for smoother reading. This tells us that Missnormal is still somewhat new when it comes to writing. I'll guess that she's a young adult, which is not bad. What might stand out about this story is it somewhat tackles the notion of how to survive a society structured around the powerful versus powerless. Sort of sounds like earth!

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18 days ago
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19 days ago
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This is actually our second time reviewing this novel. If you follow is, you'll know that this isn't our cup of tea, nor are we prone to recommending this to our Christian readers. Nonetheless, the author was bold enough to bring it to our table. Let's begin, shall we. So, here we have yet another science fiction and fantasy story. Basically, it's set in this dystopian world where people struggle against these things called "Krillians." Aria, the main character, was written quite well. You know, the emotional turmoil dude who lost his parents and now wants to take revenge. I wonder where Shadow_garden got that idea from. Lol. Anyways, the current chapters are written well enough to read, and the author had some fine introductions to the story flowing. Apart from the overused trope, it might be an interesting read for those that are into vengeful novels.

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AkitoTakahashi
1 months ago
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Looks like AI's getting sloppy with their reviews these days 🤔

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AkitoTakahashi
1 months ago
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Skyrim sure does take on a whole new meaning with this one. Alright, that was a joke. But on the more "reviewy" side of things, here we have an MC that's (and you guessed it) reincarnated into a world filled with dragons, yada yada. Not being a fantasy man myself, but a Christian, it's imperative that we look past the genre and see what the author's trying to convey. So, the premise seems to be more on the comical side while mixing in that fantasy-type of lore most are used to. Some of the phrases like "DragonHeart" really make me feel like I'm reading a story out of a video game. But hey, when your MC's a mix of different fantastical creatures often read about in folklore, it's apparent that the author's really trying to fill the reader's heart with some adventure tales. How about the side characters? Well, not surprisingly, most of them are written quite well. Reborn in a new world where war's apparent? Here are two parents: a Duke and a Duchess. Speaking of the new world, not too bad, author. The world-building was crafted well enough for me to know that there's enough out there in this universe for you (as a writer) to also explore. Just don't let your imagination run too wild. Lol. We'll end things off by saying that this novel's not on the whole dark side and has some funny quips. If you like heartwarming family bonding as a beginning trope, then just maybe your journey in this novel might be an interesting one. That's considering that this review was written with less than chapters released.

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AkitoTakahashi
1 months ago
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Once again we have the atypical "I wanna be a devil" story. No offense, author. So let's set aside the evil, horn-killing theme of this novel and tackle what the writer tried to portray. Here's a VRMMORPG that takes the concept of a video game to a different level—no pun intended. Kenji's kinda weird at first until he embraces being a necromancer. Quite certain the author's played more than enough fantasy/adventure games; otherwise, he wouldn't have been able to write an interesting world. Now onto pacing. Where most struggle with this, he didn't do a bad job. So, Kenji goes from some type of bad a** to a necromancer. You'd think he'd just jump in and start wreaking havoc, but no, there's actually exploration to his past. What about other characters? Well, as if Merlin wasn't your generic kind of name that hints to you-know-what, they're actually not written badly. I'd say this novel's a troubling competition once the narrative reaches its peak. Can I recommend it to my Christian audience? Absolutely not. Can I say the author is a bona fide writer who knows how to format a book in the style of introducing leveling and stats? Oh yeah.

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1 months ago
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This is how taxing the technique was: Minato, who could perform it regularly, taught it to his guards, which required cooperation from three members just to execute!

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2 months ago
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We really appreciate this comment and all your past ones. Because of your consistency, the author has mentioned you in one of his chapters. Once again, thank you and God bless. May you enjoy your winter vacation. May Christ be with you. 🙏

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