Solo Arc

LV 5

Vastoking

The story is good, wholesome and just nice in general the thing that ruins it is the harem, I have never seen a good harem fic before that gets character interactions right, everyone and there mama is blushing over any nice thing the mc is doing, forced character interactions that are also inconsistent. I like that at least the author keeps the character traits of the og characters for the most part , however Weiss character was gotten wrong, in order to try to put her in the harem you change her personality for the most part, and making Yang that easily bashful is very unlike her. Still its strangely wholesome in some way though. I think the main problem is that 5 girls are wayyy too much, at most 2 woulda been better . I like the solo leveling system that mc has, from what I've seen it seems he isn't going shadow monarch route so its not gonna be some copy paste powers.

LV 4

Ruscyl

liked chapter 7 very nice hope you keep posting.

LV 4

Dark_PersonJJ

Hello thare, so this like Solo Leveling mixed with RWBY Yes? i Hope it will be updated reguraly.

LV 4

Silverfang

As the Beta reader to this fic. (Original is on fan fic and AO3 by my friend who writes this.) I must say this is a solid fic with excellent action scenes. nice character interactions. a good pacing. and nice level scaling for the characters growth and how they meet the challenges before them. I am giving it a fair assessment on here as I am not the original writer. I am the beta reader. and honestly a 4.4 sounds fair to me for the quality of this fic. I'm looking forward to how my buddy continues the work and how it updates to the goal chapter length of 40-50 max.