DxD: Mechanic's Scrapyard

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Qavid

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wondered why I am wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked)

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ReyKale

I like the mc, optimistic and Accept things easy, if you've looking for a fun MC that is going to do big changes in the plot, here is your Fic. I believe in Koko Supremacy.

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AuthoriTet

I really like the concept, especially the mechanic part and scrapyard, the mc having some kind of territory. I like these "Secret Bases" kind of novels. I haven't read it yet as I'm waiting for the chapters to grow some more... And on a side note, who's the girl on the cover?

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The_Puffer

The moment koko started to chant balanced breaker and jagernaut overdrive in her own way, this was a 5 star book. And I will quote that scene: "Nyoom, woosh~ Bang! Shhhhaow- Woosh, Koko Power: Balance breaker." Warning! Read the chapters before this for maximum comedy. This might be a spoiler because if you know this before hand, you might not laugh. "I'll enter my final form in a bit too, Just give me a minute. I have to think about what my activation phrase going to be. Kay, I think I got it! Maybe. I koko am about to awaken from uh... a nap, maybe? Supremacy of punching and machines, something something. I dont know if I envy anyone and I pursue chocolate Milk. I will become awakened Koko and I dont know where to take you. Good enough. Kokonaut: Overdrive! "

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No_friends_

It's been fifty years since this has last updated I will keep on praying for it to come back

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Tom_Bombadil

Another good fanfic stop mid way hopefully the decide to keep writing this fanfic in the future. Honestly this is the top 5 DXD fanfic I've read and I've read hundreds of them

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The_Puffer

one of the best novels. could be better if author decides to continue this. I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and power stones are my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. unknown to death, nor known to life. have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those eyes will never read something good. So, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works!

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KissMyGloriousAxe

One of my favorite stories at the moment. Koko is a lovable carefree bundle of joy; who's interactions with canon make for amazingly funny moments. I sincerely hope- for this fic to continue on for 100+ chapter's and have a satisfactory ending. This brings me back a bit to some of the Commander isekai on spacebattle's like Drich's books- And it would certainly be nice to see her multiverse travel... As these OP MC's like Koko who are carefree... Tend to thrive on the interactions/chaos caused NY their actions. A suggestion out of worry that the author might hit a creative wall... As while there's plenty of novels like these- Very few of them last beyond 50k words; and even fewer reach completion.

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Seth_Shovan

would be one of the best stories I've read if it was updated more tbh I loved everything about the story progression and character building I hope it starts getting updates soon

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Seth_Shovan

is a really good fan fic but need to be updated I'm not sure if this fic died but please revive it

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Fayet

Hope it gets revived, update definitely hindered it’s growth but I hope that the author is okay because to suddenly go MIA after releasing good books is odd.

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Pythia

Honestly, great writing in terms of spelling and grammar. However, the story is boring beyond belief. Huge paragraphs of either irrelevant or unneeded information makes the narrative drag on and bore you. The descriptions of her surroundings, an appearance or situation is long winded and mundane, adding to the already made boring narrative. The MC's personality and speech patterns that are 4x the length needed are annoying too, seriously makes me wanna shoot myself. An example being " I've got powers." is made into "Wow the 'sunat'( shortened supernatural idk where that drivel came from) is soo cool blah blah blah, i have powers of blah blah blah, they are so cool blah blah blah." Which halts the stories progression. Theres no direction either so the MC is aimless which is also incredibly boring. The author deviates from cannon almost immediately so if you like that this book is for you. Not me however, i came for DxD, as the title says, and the OC added is incredibly irritating. Mostly preference but the progressive writing is barely there so it's just plain paragraphs you end up skipping. I give it a three because the basics are present in the story but i feel like the author is trying much too hard. Either to make a descriptive setting or develop emotional attachment to characters, even the MC (She is not likeable at all. She's a bratty loudmouth tbh) and is doing a poor job of it. Please don't take this as my belittling your work, i mean this as genuine criticism.

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The_Dark_Hydrax

Please come back. Please update[img=update]

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Silentfairy

First of all the concept of adding machine in a fantasy novel is great. the writing quality is good too.So you can have an immersive experience reading this ff without getting interrupted. The characters are well fleshed out. The Mc’s character too is likable and reading about her interactions have been enjoyable. The world-building aspect got little attention so it would be great if you curve out the world in later chapters. Although I prefer male mc however it has been a good read.

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Tom_Bombadil

Best DxD fanfic of the year so far and I've read tons of tons of DXD novels and this one with only 21 chapter so far dwarf the rest of them.

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No_friends_

ophis happy . . . .

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Sage_Honos

this story is fast tracking itself to the number one spot! definitely worth the read. Its a wild entertaining ride that even if you are someone like me who prefers male leads will still love the story.

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StrangeLoopSleuth

This story cracks me up with every single update. Koko is absolute gold the reactions of everybody else are just hilarious. Definitely a unique take and worth the read.

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Alpha_Idiot

The only thing I can say at this point is that I like the conzept of this novel. The Charackter is at Chapter 3 to flat for my taste but the Authir has plenty room to grow