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Story is stolen from another author on wattpad without any consent real authors name if you want to read the real thing is Eraser-Da-Boi on wattpad
I feel sorry for you because you can't write a novel. Instead of trying to make one, you stole other people hard work and post it to another platform
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Story stolen from Wattpad, its true author is Eraser-Boi-Dat. Story stolen from Wattpad, its true author is Eraser-Boi-Dat. Story stolen from Wattpad, its true author is Eraser-Boi-Dat.
please do not let it drop I haven't actually enjoyed a good novel in a while.
It's interesting, it has huge potential, but the only problem with this fanfic is the grammar which leaves a lot to be desired, I see people giving it 4 stars, 5 stars, but never one criticizing anything below that or talking about the structure of the text '-'
This fanfiction is very good issei didn't get a harem member in the 1 chapter like most of the DxD fanfiction and The system is good issei don't get op after 1 quest it's gets slowly so keep going
Espero continúes con el gran trabajo!👍😁 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
so only problem I have is the fact that the author will sometimes just has a huge space in the middle of a sentence
I like this Story already hope it gets like this in the next chapter ........................ ................ ........................ ................. ............... ........................ .................... ...........
Story is stolen from another author on wattpad without any consent real authors name if you want to read the real thing is Eraser-Da-Boi on wattpad
I feel sorry for you because you can't write a novel. Instead of trying to make one, you stole other people hard work and post it to another platform
Revelar spoiler Story stolen from Wattpad, its true author is Eraser-Boi-Dat. Story stolen from Wattpad, its true author is Eraser-Boi-Dat. Story stolen from Wattpad, its true author is Eraser-Boi-Dat.
please do not let it drop I haven't actually enjoyed a good novel in a while.
It's interesting, it has huge potential, but the only problem with this fanfic is the grammar which leaves a lot to be desired, I see people giving it 4 stars, 5 stars, but never one criticizing anything below that or talking about the structure of the text '-'
This fanfiction is very good issei didn't get a harem member in the 1 chapter like most of the DxD fanfiction and The system is good issei don't get op after 1 quest it's gets slowly so keep going
Espero continúes con el gran trabajo!👍😁 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
so only problem I have is the fact that the author will sometimes just has a huge space in the middle of a sentence
I like this Story already hope it gets like this in the next chapter ........................ ................ ........................ ................. ............... ........................ .................... ...........
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