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If you think its Marvel story it's not . MC has absolute intelligence yet acts like third rate but some can still like it who have never read Comics or watched Marvel movies . It's stupid beyond stupid
Very interesting concept, but the MC have a edgelord teenager personality that is unbearable.
This story is slow. obnoxiously slow, so much so it gets me irrationally angry. The story in itself is pretty decent up until around chapter 50 where it just becomes a history lesson. Every chapter is just history with the MC coming in every now and then. if I wanted a history lesson I would've gone to school I genuinely believe almost 90% of those chapters past 50 are completely useless Not to mention the author frequently just stealing ideas and even whole plots. Like the goddesses yapping about the fate series and one of the chapters was literally 'Reaper of the drifting moon' but with a different character. There was no reason for that Honestly author, you write pretty well but stop clogging the chapters with random history. make summaries or something
It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good.
Revelar spoiler
Es una buena novela, la historia te atrapa y ver nuevamente a nuestro MC haciendo de las suyas es encantador.
Great novel keep up the great work...............................................................................................................
Its keeping me hooked. I want more. Please gimme more and take my stars and stones and stones and more stones. Thank you😸👍🏻.
So mc himself is writting the plot to continue this story ..author has no plot ... copying ideas from others....poor writting....making mc mentally immature to lengthen the plot to continue the thrash.... interaction between elder goddess is so casual...it's look like some school going teens gossiping among themselves.... projecting celestial as almighty..in truth either in mcu,comics.... celestial are vulnerable...and are butchered by knull easily.... celestials are mid tier powers....author is plain lazy ..no idea of mcu or comics.... author messed up...this is dxd. World..not marvel....there re demon lords,outer gods,etc ... celestials are nothing in front of them
My idea of Omniscience is that it’s the ability to know everything. And if you go by that logic then you would know how to instantly kill everything. Also you would also know how to kill anything without lifting a finger or without any kind of special energy. It doesn’t matter if it’s not logical because you know everything. If this explanation doesn’t make sense then it’s probably because Omniscience is way beyond the comprehension of anything.
Alright good concept pretty straight forward can see where author can improve but over good job. Ch 6 is where things kinda go meh to a higher level then the sorta meh we get…. So yeah still overall it’s a good concept and a good job at what is done
To have a true Omni then you must exist within true infinity and if you have a true Omni then you intrinsically have the other two because if you know everything you know how to have always been able to do everything unconditionally, if you can do everything you can have always had all knowledge and if you're everywhere you perceive and can do everything so this guy only has pseudo-omnicsence which is basically the same but nowhere near as OP and easier to write since it doesn't cause your story to be an infinity paradox.
Shameless authors review here guys. Read this up. Just wanted to try out my hand on the Marvel Universe and this is what came out.
Reading this literally turned into a chore. I finally have to tap out around chapter 80. It's not a bad story or idea, per say... however it's this weird twist between the author reconstructing a bible Sunday school class and countless dribbles of theorycrafting and info dumping. The marvel world itself is based on earth. It's really not some new or magical thing that includes the other pantheons anda Christianity. It is however boring AF to have someone using the Bible as a plot outline for the vast majority of content that isn't straight theorycrafting info dumps.. I'm honestly a little miffed and baffled at how one can take scf-fi and magical fantasy with gods and overpowered characters and still make it that boring. I assume the reason the titles are labeled with numbers and having the title in the content is so you can't easily skip over the vast majority of the chapters that have literally nothing moving forward or progressing. The story itself is clearly well thought out, and researched incredibly well; but the execution destroyed it. If you read this, expect an overpowered protagonist that bullys the weak, and gets his ass handed to him by anything above him. Don't expect relationships or interactions with other characters beyond some bland ones that are either overshadowed by his arrogance or him treating things more like one would interact with a pet animal. Ugh, I usually don't like to knock stories that are well written.. but this is like putting a nice paint job on a dumpster. You really need to throw up some warning somewhere that it's 90% self insert into the bible as opposed to starting your readers in marvel, and then dip feeding small amounts of progress in-between massive info dumps of theory and bible content; leading us to think and hope it's somehow the story is actually going to start. So much development, theorycrafting, info dumps, random self progress, etc... yet at chapter 80ish, I still question if the story has started or if there's any plot beyond all that.
If you think its Marvel story it's not . MC has absolute intelligence yet acts like third rate but some can still like it who have never read Comics or watched Marvel movies . It's stupid beyond stupid
Very interesting concept, but the MC have a edgelord teenager personality that is unbearable.
This story is slow. obnoxiously slow, so much so it gets me irrationally angry. The story in itself is pretty decent up until around chapter 50 where it just becomes a history lesson. Every chapter is just history with the MC coming in every now and then. if I wanted a history lesson I would've gone to school I genuinely believe almost 90% of those chapters past 50 are completely useless Not to mention the author frequently just stealing ideas and even whole plots. Like the goddesses yapping about the fate series and one of the chapters was literally 'Reaper of the drifting moon' but with a different character. There was no reason for that Honestly author, you write pretty well but stop clogging the chapters with random history. make summaries or something
It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good.
Revelar spoiler Es una buena novela, la historia te atrapa y ver nuevamente a nuestro MC haciendo de las suyas es encantador.
Great novel keep up the great work...............................................................................................................
Its keeping me hooked. I want more. Please gimme more and take my stars and stones and stones and more stones. Thank you😸👍🏻.
So mc himself is writting the plot to continue this story ..author has no plot ... copying ideas from others....poor writting....making mc mentally immature to lengthen the plot to continue the thrash.... interaction between elder goddess is so casual...it's look like some school going teens gossiping among themselves.... projecting celestial as almighty..in truth either in mcu,comics.... celestial are vulnerable...and are butchered by knull easily.... celestials are mid tier powers....author is plain lazy ..no idea of mcu or comics.... author messed up...this is dxd. World..not marvel....there re demon lords,outer gods,etc ... celestials are nothing in front of them
My idea of Omniscience is that it’s the ability to know everything. And if you go by that logic then you would know how to instantly kill everything. Also you would also know how to kill anything without lifting a finger or without any kind of special energy. It doesn’t matter if it’s not logical because you know everything. If this explanation doesn’t make sense then it’s probably because Omniscience is way beyond the comprehension of anything.
Alright good concept pretty straight forward can see where author can improve but over good job. Ch 6 is where things kinda go meh to a higher level then the sorta meh we get…. So yeah still overall it’s a good concept and a good job at what is done
To have a true Omni then you must exist within true infinity and if you have a true Omni then you intrinsically have the other two because if you know everything you know how to have always been able to do everything unconditionally, if you can do everything you can have always had all knowledge and if you're everywhere you perceive and can do everything so this guy only has pseudo-omnicsence which is basically the same but nowhere near as OP and easier to write since it doesn't cause your story to be an infinity paradox.
Shameless authors review here guys. Read this up. Just wanted to try out my hand on the Marvel Universe and this is what came out.
Reading this literally turned into a chore. I finally have to tap out around chapter 80. It's not a bad story or idea, per say... however it's this weird twist between the author reconstructing a bible Sunday school class and countless dribbles of theorycrafting and info dumping. The marvel world itself is based on earth. It's really not some new or magical thing that includes the other pantheons anda Christianity. It is however boring AF to have someone using the Bible as a plot outline for the vast majority of content that isn't straight theorycrafting info dumps.. I'm honestly a little miffed and baffled at how one can take scf-fi and magical fantasy with gods and overpowered characters and still make it that boring. I assume the reason the titles are labeled with numbers and having the title in the content is so you can't easily skip over the vast majority of the chapters that have literally nothing moving forward or progressing. The story itself is clearly well thought out, and researched incredibly well; but the execution destroyed it. If you read this, expect an overpowered protagonist that bullys the weak, and gets his ass handed to him by anything above him. Don't expect relationships or interactions with other characters beyond some bland ones that are either overshadowed by his arrogance or him treating things more like one would interact with a pet animal. Ugh, I usually don't like to knock stories that are well written.. but this is like putting a nice paint job on a dumpster. You really need to throw up some warning somewhere that it's 90% self insert into the bible as opposed to starting your readers in marvel, and then dip feeding small amounts of progress in-between massive info dumps of theory and bible content; leading us to think and hope it's somehow the story is actually going to start. So much development, theorycrafting, info dumps, random self progress, etc... yet at chapter 80ish, I still question if the story has started or if there's any plot beyond all that.