Multiverse selection 1 Fairy Tail Karna

LV 13

kingGenovaGodfrey

the story's good bro but you should really work on you're Grammer, paragraphs and commas it's confusing because you don't know who's talking until the end you you say "say's Karna to natsu"

LV 4

Lion_Comet

This is one of the most interesting Fairy Tail story that I have read in a while. Plot is mostly a FIX IT theme. MC has a ODD type of magic "Archery magic" really would like to know how this will pan out in the later chapters.

LV 13

Lycrat

Honestly speaking I'm more interested in Jason than Karna. If you wrote his adventures, it would have been a new point of interest for readers. After all rob stories are few if not nonexistent.For the record I'm only at chapter 2😆😆😆

LV 14

MikeName2Lon

Only on chapter 2 at the moment however i am easily pleased and its got a good intro and very interesting so 5 stars

LV 1

guarek03

Interesting story. I can't wait for the next chapter......................................................................................................

LV 6

MagikarpBombado

era uma boa história até entretanto, partir do capítulo que o protagonista vai ajudar contra os demônios de Zeref, a história desandou completamente, e até o padrão de escrita das falas mudou... bem boa sorte em sua novela, mas pra mim parei aqui.