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The ending feels a bit rushed, and the MC's power level essentially goes from average human to over 9000 pretty quick... However, the rest of the story more than makes up for it and I found myself thoroughly enjoying the experience.
it wasn't bad, just sad to see how the author lost motivation to continue this unique novel, but I called it.
Good fic, decent in all avenues but it's a comedy fic. It's just not for me. I'm leaving this comment to remind me later on.
Overall, it’s a very fun story. Like most stories it does have its flaws, such as plotlines that don’t have endings. But it also has great moments, and the characters are well written. Recommended if you like a good smartass protagonist and want/need inspiration yourself.
Its a decent read if not all the annoying descriptions. “He smiled in a relaxed demeanor despite the terrifying atmosphere” … “the pain on his face was severe and painful “ . AFTER EVERY SENTENCE IS A DESCRIPTION JUST LIKE THAT!!!!!
Checks all the boxes for a good story Try it Personally not my cup of tea but a good story nonetheless (better than the trash😅😅😅I see)
me parece una gran historia con mucho que contar aun pero siendo igual de buena y divertida de leer como tu historia The Average DC Experience
As of chapter 65? Fantastic. This is what system fic should strive for. Writing quality is amazing for Webnovel besides a few typos every three or four chapters in one sentence or so, but that doesn’t break the flow of reading at all. In all honesty I am a bit scared that wicked might drop this fic like he’s done the other ones but I will extend my trust that he doesn’t. All in all one of the best DC fics I have ever read, keep it up man, I am highly enjoying it.
We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats
Muito bom, extremamente realístico o desenvolvimento dos personagens, o MC não pode ser considerado nem um Heroi nem Um vilão ele é simplesmente uma pessoa normal igual a muitos que não bota sua vida em risco sem ganhar algo em troca ,mas também não admite atrocidades.
pretty good so far, only real complaint is that the dialouge is a little too formal and some interactions feel a bit stiff but other than that pretty good read
Is there going to be an actual romance in this one is it going to end up like your last DC fanfiction?
I don't ussually give reviews and it's really early in the novel to be giving a review but this novel is so well written and the story is so intresting I just had to say something and let my fellow web novel community know this is a seriously good DC comic fanfic. It's funny and well paced with a well thought out protaginist. And deffinetly not stupid no harem so far either (pls author no harem). Anyway read the novel people it's worth your time.
Full 5 stars from me. Breath of fresh air compared to other system stories. Really enjoy how this system gives the MC a real reason to interact with the characters and change up any pre-existing scenarios, seems like it’ll create some really high risk high reward situations. Great work author can’t wait for more
Really enjoying the fic so far, the writing and story quality are pretty good and entertaining. The only complaint I’ve got is that it seems like nearly every possible thing that can go wrong, does. Almost every single thing the MC gains also comes with some sort of downside. I totally agree with not making the MC op af and actually forcing them to struggle throughout the story, but the constant use of these downsides and bad luck to hinder the MC’s growth is honestly getting somewhat repetitive.
Super high potential, the author knows how to write and the plot is progressing well, other than story development which I gavw 4 stars, the rest is 5 for sure. 4 is just because I'm unsure about the MC's personality as of now, i'll update it if it changes
really love the system and characters so far, as a fan of the last DC fanfic this story has high expectations and I'm looking forward to it
It would be fun if Mc, as manager, united Volcana, Poison Ivy and Permafrost to create an idol band XD "the elememtales" for the care of the environment and if you want, also Cheetah for the care of animals XD
Another future masterpiece, you pulled off the previous ones am pretty sure you'll pull this one off as well.
From your previous work I can tell that it will be good but please drop it
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The ending feels a bit rushed, and the MC's power level essentially goes from average human to over 9000 pretty quick... However, the rest of the story more than makes up for it and I found myself thoroughly enjoying the experience.
it wasn't bad, just sad to see how the author lost motivation to continue this unique novel, but I called it.
Good fic, decent in all avenues but it's a comedy fic. It's just not for me. I'm leaving this comment to remind me later on.
Overall, it’s a very fun story. Like most stories it does have its flaws, such as plotlines that don’t have endings. But it also has great moments, and the characters are well written. Recommended if you like a good smartass protagonist and want/need inspiration yourself.
Its a decent read if not all the annoying descriptions. “He smiled in a relaxed demeanor despite the terrifying atmosphere” … “the pain on his face was severe and painful “ . AFTER EVERY SENTENCE IS A DESCRIPTION JUST LIKE THAT!!!!!
Checks all the boxes for a good story Try it Personally not my cup of tea but a good story nonetheless (better than the trash😅😅😅I see)
me parece una gran historia con mucho que contar aun pero siendo igual de buena y divertida de leer como tu historia The Average DC Experience
As of chapter 65? Fantastic. This is what system fic should strive for. Writing quality is amazing for Webnovel besides a few typos every three or four chapters in one sentence or so, but that doesn’t break the flow of reading at all. In all honesty I am a bit scared that wicked might drop this fic like he’s done the other ones but I will extend my trust that he doesn’t. All in all one of the best DC fics I have ever read, keep it up man, I am highly enjoying it.
We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats We’re rats
Muito bom, extremamente realístico o desenvolvimento dos personagens, o MC não pode ser considerado nem um Heroi nem Um vilão ele é simplesmente uma pessoa normal igual a muitos que não bota sua vida em risco sem ganhar algo em troca ,mas também não admite atrocidades.
pretty good so far, only real complaint is that the dialouge is a little too formal and some interactions feel a bit stiff but other than that pretty good read
Is there going to be an actual romance in this one is it going to end up like your last DC fanfiction?
I don't ussually give reviews and it's really early in the novel to be giving a review but this novel is so well written and the story is so intresting I just had to say something and let my fellow web novel community know this is a seriously good DC comic fanfic. It's funny and well paced with a well thought out protaginist. And deffinetly not stupid no harem so far either (pls author no harem). Anyway read the novel people it's worth your time.
Full 5 stars from me. Breath of fresh air compared to other system stories. Really enjoy how this system gives the MC a real reason to interact with the characters and change up any pre-existing scenarios, seems like it’ll create some really high risk high reward situations. Great work author can’t wait for more
Really enjoying the fic so far, the writing and story quality are pretty good and entertaining. The only complaint I’ve got is that it seems like nearly every possible thing that can go wrong, does. Almost every single thing the MC gains also comes with some sort of downside. I totally agree with not making the MC op af and actually forcing them to struggle throughout the story, but the constant use of these downsides and bad luck to hinder the MC’s growth is honestly getting somewhat repetitive.
Super high potential, the author knows how to write and the plot is progressing well, other than story development which I gavw 4 stars, the rest is 5 for sure. 4 is just because I'm unsure about the MC's personality as of now, i'll update it if it changes
really love the system and characters so far, as a fan of the last DC fanfic this story has high expectations and I'm looking forward to it
It would be fun if Mc, as manager, united Volcana, Poison Ivy and Permafrost to create an idol band XD "the elememtales" for the care of the environment and if you want, also Cheetah for the care of animals XD
Another future masterpiece, you pulled off the previous ones am pretty sure you'll pull this one off as well.
From your previous work I can tell that it will be good but please drop it
All right!...........................................................................................................................................OK.