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One piece : Metallica

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Autor: Konrad_iguess

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Gild Tesoro, one of the non canon tragic villains from One piece gets another chance to change his fate.

His memories from his past life along with the ability to control magnetic materials awakens when he's met with a stressful situation regarding a celestial dragon.

After massacring the celestial dragon and becoming an enemy of the government he has to navigate his new life to get the best outcome possible.

Now with memories from his past life and new abilities will he be able to have a better ending to his story.


Disclaimer : I don't own one piece or any of it's characters, all of it belongs to Goda.
I don't own the cover art the credit goes to the artist.
Author's note: This will be my first time writing something for the online platform. English is not my first language so I might make some grammatical errors here and there, so feel free to correct me. I'm always open to suggestions and will always listen to constructive criticism.
I'm just writing this cause I'm bored and I don't feel like doing anything else.

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Konrad_iguess

Author’s shameless review I have finished writing the first volume so I think I can review it now. I still think that my writing is quite mediocre and the plot progression needs to be improved. I tried to avoid grammatical mistakes whenever possible but some might have slipped out of my surveillance. I think the beginning portion is a bit messy and I might rewrite it in a better form in the future. Overall I think this isn’t the best fanfiction in this platform as this is my first work but if you are bored enough give it a shot maybe you’ll like it. If you have any questions just ask and I’ll answer them if I’m not busy. If you have any constructive criticism leave them in the comments. Thanks for reading and here’s Tesoro with his iconic walk.

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zero_crashed

No harem? I am...in i. Still haven't read the story but i am in. Do u know how rare it is to find a story without harem? Or mc dipping his rod with woman here and there

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AuthoriTet

No harem? based based based based based based based based based based based based based based based based based based based based based based

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LeafPanda

Nice, no harem. I support you author. Let this story be popular throughout the rankings. Because this has good development so far. And Keep this up no matter what

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wolfking_58

no harem thank God it's a very nice heartwarming story especially with Nico robin

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Leman_Phawa

i would really love it if you add harem. smash boa Hancock even if she's still a kid

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