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Trash novel- My summary word for this novel, Why u ask? Mc is so dumb when sensei ask him if he think something Rude He just said "Yes", Result? ban from the classroom for a week!! And this has no logic at all,why, Because some events just happen,like,His cool down skill that make him stronger in time of need have 5 hours cooldown right? He use it in classroom for what? Show off? and in next moment he use to help MC bruh and why help her when u just offended her on the first day? where 5 hours cool down?? 👎 Scale power is mess up HOW? he ranks 1000 but with one skill that boots his strength Here he goes win the crown prince win a EZ win no struggle at all And How did he have a Dragon? A dragon!? It just suddenly appeared in his ring PLOT Armor !! And here another one, String of fate bullshit that make people fall in love 'faster' not immediately bro then why his sensei is so heartbroken when he destroyed it burh and how can he break it in the first place when this string is created by Archangel! ARCHANGLE!! Fuckin Trash novel of the year. those of your who find this novel fun asks yourself about u standard for this app bro, I pity u.
This is interesting, I don't know why people bitching over this, its literally good just sad when last update 1 month ago kinda excited for next chapter though, kinda hype for story, interesting piece of work, keep up the good work! Sorry english sucks
this is easily one of the best novels I've read the mc is homophobic so thats a plus, the characters are also well made and their interactions feel genuine and the plot is good too as well as the romance i think? anyways I'm only giving this 3.8 rating because the updating stability is lackluster like you literally have to wait a week or two or a few months just for one chapter overall author if you see this review and if you fix ur updating stability then my rating might go up to a 4.5 or 5 ratings
5 star because mc Is extremely disgusted by the rainbow fakers. also 2 power stones
To be fair I don’t know about the romance part, but the story is full of inconsistencies many from the MC until now. He starts as a guy/villain who does not care about the consequences of his actions/ does not want to be controlled, just doing reckless things, wild mood swings, from not caring to want to kill, until now no show of character, it feels like the author just took a random villains personality, added some characteristics/background and gave it a blend to mix all up. He feels hollow to me, with no thoughts on his actions or consciousness/consideration. An example of what I have read until now. He said his sister tricked him into reading a bit of this reverse harem novel, he gets mad at her and thinks of doing what when he gets back to his world. Take a guess, A. Talk to her. B. Get mad at her and make her apologize( which is a dumb opinion because what she did is not a big deal). C. Scold her. D. Don’t take it too far because she does not know what she did wrong/it’s not such a big deal. E. Deal with it like a normal person. F. THINK OF KILLING HER. The correct answer is F. To resume the Mc feels hollow, edgy, and not human, Will keep reading to see what happens… Will probably copy-paste this review because I don't know how the author will react, he might even delete this opinion/review. I just want to clarify that I don't hate the author or anything like that I just stated my opinion and want the author to be better. I hope that the author is not discouraged by this and makes this story better or not, he can do what he wants just like I'm allowed to state my opinion. Will change the review if I see a good Change or it gets better.
It's interesting to read tbh, a fast paced novel that got u hooked to the latest chapter that u forgot it is lacking in world background and characters development of others than MC, we don't know what motivates them or how the world works, which if u reread it again u know it just a few chapter, then why u rated it 5 stars? It's been 5 months since I read a good novel here and this one got me interested. Don't discourage from the reviews to read it because that is the unique part of this novel that the others novel.
in my opinion, this one is a very confusing read. it's painful to read some part of it (the author has sadistic tendencies). but i can't stop reading as the plot thickens. let the author cooks, this fic is better than some original book in webnovel.
the premise of the story is a 4 or 5 star definitely but the story just keeps changing so dam much no one except the author knows what's going on.. and even recently he randomly just introduced a new power system on top of an already existing one. It's a giant mess, but it's still readable, it's like that one review said it's so bad it seems good
its funny , love how homophobic he is its hillarious but thats about it , the writing is terrible and i mean really really ! terrible .. lets not talk about the class he got and why he is even bothering "hiding" his strength when all knows he is super strong lol makes no sense, then we have the people around him i srsly dont know who is freind ally or enemies or just a random bystander... in some chapters people are ok with eachother then next they are fighting a bloody war against eachother then next they are drinking coffe togheter its very confusing,it feels like he have taking random parts from different chapters and put them into 1 chapter thats how confusing it is
Well, the MC has several, several, several problems,he is arrogant to the point of being irritating, he takes powers out of nowhere,in 5-6 chapters it breaks the red string of destiny that was created by an archangel and is considered unbreakable,seriously, he is following the concept of The Extra Novel and Author POV only those without creativity and with a great desire to make the MC strong without meaning, if you want to read something like that read the two I mentioned, and not this poorly made thing
Don’t even really care about the rampant homophobia but the story is a dumpster fire, past chapter 15 I couldn’t even understand what was happening
W. I honestly liked it a lot I even forgot that it was 18+ at one point because I was focused on the story.
This is a harem, the mc is an idiot and very unlikeable, the story makes no sense, this is a a very clear self insert that author uses to push his homophobic views with minimal backlash, the author seemingly forgets facts whenever writing a new chapter as there are way too many contradictions to convince me otherwise. All in all, its the usual webnovel dumpster fire. Can pass the time if there is literally nothing else to read, but thats just about it.
Perfect The book was amazing, we are waiting for the continuation The book was amazing, we are waiting for the continuation The book was amazing, we are waiting for the continuation
This is good! don't mind those cucks in the other reviews..................................................................................................
I’m really enjoying this so far, the story and mc are perfect and I like the banter he has with the two goddesses. Definitely one of my favorite reads so far. And if it’s not to much trouble can you make an auxiliary chapter on the looks of the main characters please and thank you
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Great story. Has its own world and feel to it. Looking to seeing the extent of his powers from the constellationd. Really looking forward to the future of it. keep up the great work author.
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this is really good and I'ma keep reading this everyday but please, author don't drop this and keep writing.
I found this book today and so far a enjoyable read, the title through me off because typically tho a villainess would simp for the mc he would fall into simply two types of mc, smart but acts in a simp like nature which mean acting very submissive but slowly influence the girls to listen and or the stupid simp ones that just really are brain dead stupid and everything is giving by system or luck but this mc is really cool and seems to be a good step away from the norms I typcally find. Good job I’ll wait for my updates.
Hey author, if Lilian ever officially joins the harem, will she have to earn that right? I'm not saying to stop making her a Yandere, I'm just asking because I'm curious.
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Yeah this novel has an amazing story though I’m a bit offish about the blatant homophobia I still like the book though I do hope that the Mc does tone back the blatant homophobia im on ch22 I’ll read a bit further probably to around chapter 40 or 50 but I think I might drop the novel. Me personally I don’t mind homophobia (I’m pan by the way)but it’s just not something I’m trying to read about during my free time and the blatant disrespect he shows towards people for simply liking a person makes me a bit uncomfortable but I’m bearing through it for the amazing plot. This is a bit of a rant but thanks for the hard work and I really like the story I’ll probably look for something more my style in one of your other works but I wish you lots of success.
Well for starters MC is chad and speak what is on his mind and maybe too honest which is plus point in the novel till 35 which is latest update. well also little crazy guy . world background contains to many concepts from different genres like dungeons ,hero and villain troupes, guilds and many more. Remember to add he is extreme homophobic so some might not like it. Some time contradiction can happens sometime he say something and next sec he is acts different to that previous statement, that why earlier I said he little crazy guy. well there little improvement needed in writing department or story telling department hmm.... maybe both. Also there improvement needed in heroine should i say villainess behaviors and nature ,I know author given explanation in chapter but it feel uncomfortable while reading one sec her nature is one next sec or day her nature is different. Another situation where one girl try to kill him bcz she didn't like him but next day they both talk like nothing happens which look out of place. there is room for improvement in novel. SORRY author if it look like offensive, but i wanted to point out problems, i understand it not easy to write novel, SO keep up the good work. maybe in future this review might change hope good change.[img=recommend]
'It could be more "interesting if you add more lemon ..! overall here we go: 5⭐
I give it 5 stars out of spite of the wntards who gave it 1 star in the review despite being told in the synopsis that mc is homophobic. I always look at the tags before I read something. I really want to beat up those who start reading a novel without looking at the tags and then complain about it in the chapter comments or reviews..
Trash novel- My summary word for this novel, Why u ask? Mc is so dumb when sensei ask him if he think something Rude He just said "Yes", Result? ban from the classroom for a week!! And this has no logic at all,why, Because some events just happen,like,His cool down skill that make him stronger in time of need have 5 hours cooldown right? He use it in classroom for what? Show off? and in next moment he use to help MC bruh and why help her when u just offended her on the first day? where 5 hours cool down?? 👎 Scale power is mess up HOW? he ranks 1000 but with one skill that boots his strength Here he goes win the crown prince win a EZ win no struggle at all And How did he have a Dragon? A dragon!? It just suddenly appeared in his ring PLOT Armor !! And here another one, String of fate bullshit that make people fall in love 'faster' not immediately bro then why his sensei is so heartbroken when he destroyed it burh and how can he break it in the first place when this string is created by Archangel! ARCHANGLE!! Fuckin Trash novel of the year. those of your who find this novel fun asks yourself about u standard for this app bro, I pity u.
This is interesting, I don't know why people bitching over this, its literally good just sad when last update 1 month ago kinda excited for next chapter though, kinda hype for story, interesting piece of work, keep up the good work! Sorry english sucks
this is easily one of the best novels I've read the mc is homophobic so thats a plus, the characters are also well made and their interactions feel genuine and the plot is good too as well as the romance i think? anyways I'm only giving this 3.8 rating because the updating stability is lackluster like you literally have to wait a week or two or a few months just for one chapter overall author if you see this review and if you fix ur updating stability then my rating might go up to a 4.5 or 5 ratings
5 star because mc Is extremely disgusted by the rainbow fakers. also 2 power stones
To be fair I don’t know about the romance part, but the story is full of inconsistencies many from the MC until now. He starts as a guy/villain who does not care about the consequences of his actions/ does not want to be controlled, just doing reckless things, wild mood swings, from not caring to want to kill, until now no show of character, it feels like the author just took a random villains personality, added some characteristics/background and gave it a blend to mix all up. He feels hollow to me, with no thoughts on his actions or consciousness/consideration. An example of what I have read until now. He said his sister tricked him into reading a bit of this reverse harem novel, he gets mad at her and thinks of doing what when he gets back to his world. Take a guess, A. Talk to her. B. Get mad at her and make her apologize( which is a dumb opinion because what she did is not a big deal). C. Scold her. D. Don’t take it too far because she does not know what she did wrong/it’s not such a big deal. E. Deal with it like a normal person. F. THINK OF KILLING HER. The correct answer is F. To resume the Mc feels hollow, edgy, and not human, Will keep reading to see what happens… Will probably copy-paste this review because I don't know how the author will react, he might even delete this opinion/review. I just want to clarify that I don't hate the author or anything like that I just stated my opinion and want the author to be better. I hope that the author is not discouraged by this and makes this story better or not, he can do what he wants just like I'm allowed to state my opinion. Will change the review if I see a good Change or it gets better.
It's interesting to read tbh, a fast paced novel that got u hooked to the latest chapter that u forgot it is lacking in world background and characters development of others than MC, we don't know what motivates them or how the world works, which if u reread it again u know it just a few chapter, then why u rated it 5 stars? It's been 5 months since I read a good novel here and this one got me interested. Don't discourage from the reviews to read it because that is the unique part of this novel that the others novel.
in my opinion, this one is a very confusing read. it's painful to read some part of it (the author has sadistic tendencies). but i can't stop reading as the plot thickens. let the author cooks, this fic is better than some original book in webnovel.
the premise of the story is a 4 or 5 star definitely but the story just keeps changing so dam much no one except the author knows what's going on.. and even recently he randomly just introduced a new power system on top of an already existing one. It's a giant mess, but it's still readable, it's like that one review said it's so bad it seems good
its funny , love how homophobic he is its hillarious but thats about it , the writing is terrible and i mean really really ! terrible .. lets not talk about the class he got and why he is even bothering "hiding" his strength when all knows he is super strong lol makes no sense, then we have the people around him i srsly dont know who is freind ally or enemies or just a random bystander... in some chapters people are ok with eachother then next they are fighting a bloody war against eachother then next they are drinking coffe togheter its very confusing,it feels like he have taking random parts from different chapters and put them into 1 chapter thats how confusing it is
Well, the MC has several, several, several problems,he is arrogant to the point of being irritating, he takes powers out of nowhere,in 5-6 chapters it breaks the red string of destiny that was created by an archangel and is considered unbreakable,seriously, he is following the concept of The Extra Novel and Author POV only those without creativity and with a great desire to make the MC strong without meaning, if you want to read something like that read the two I mentioned, and not this poorly made thing
Don’t even really care about the rampant homophobia but the story is a dumpster fire, past chapter 15 I couldn’t even understand what was happening
W. I honestly liked it a lot I even forgot that it was 18+ at one point because I was focused on the story.
This is a harem, the mc is an idiot and very unlikeable, the story makes no sense, this is a a very clear self insert that author uses to push his homophobic views with minimal backlash, the author seemingly forgets facts whenever writing a new chapter as there are way too many contradictions to convince me otherwise. All in all, its the usual webnovel dumpster fire. Can pass the time if there is literally nothing else to read, but thats just about it.
Perfect The book was amazing, we are waiting for the continuation The book was amazing, we are waiting for the continuation The book was amazing, we are waiting for the continuation
This is good! don't mind those cucks in the other reviews..................................................................................................
I’m really enjoying this so far, the story and mc are perfect and I like the banter he has with the two goddesses. Definitely one of my favorite reads so far. And if it’s not to much trouble can you make an auxiliary chapter on the looks of the main characters please and thank you
Revelar spoiler Great story. Has its own world and feel to it. Looking to seeing the extent of his powers from the constellationd. Really looking forward to the future of it. keep up the great work author.
Revelar spoiler this is really good and I'ma keep reading this everyday but please, author don't drop this and keep writing.
I found this book today and so far a enjoyable read, the title through me off because typically tho a villainess would simp for the mc he would fall into simply two types of mc, smart but acts in a simp like nature which mean acting very submissive but slowly influence the girls to listen and or the stupid simp ones that just really are brain dead stupid and everything is giving by system or luck but this mc is really cool and seems to be a good step away from the norms I typcally find. Good job I’ll wait for my updates.
Hey author, if Lilian ever officially joins the harem, will she have to earn that right? I'm not saying to stop making her a Yandere, I'm just asking because I'm curious.
Revelar spoiler Yeah this novel has an amazing story though I’m a bit offish about the blatant homophobia I still like the book though I do hope that the Mc does tone back the blatant homophobia im on ch22 I’ll read a bit further probably to around chapter 40 or 50 but I think I might drop the novel. Me personally I don’t mind homophobia (I’m pan by the way)but it’s just not something I’m trying to read about during my free time and the blatant disrespect he shows towards people for simply liking a person makes me a bit uncomfortable but I’m bearing through it for the amazing plot. This is a bit of a rant but thanks for the hard work and I really like the story I’ll probably look for something more my style in one of your other works but I wish you lots of success.
Well for starters MC is chad and speak what is on his mind and maybe too honest which is plus point in the novel till 35 which is latest update. well also little crazy guy . world background contains to many concepts from different genres like dungeons ,hero and villain troupes, guilds and many more. Remember to add he is extreme homophobic so some might not like it. Some time contradiction can happens sometime he say something and next sec he is acts different to that previous statement, that why earlier I said he little crazy guy. well there little improvement needed in writing department or story telling department hmm.... maybe both. Also there improvement needed in heroine should i say villainess behaviors and nature ,I know author given explanation in chapter but it feel uncomfortable while reading one sec her nature is one next sec or day her nature is different. Another situation where one girl try to kill him bcz she didn't like him but next day they both talk like nothing happens which look out of place. there is room for improvement in novel. SORRY author if it look like offensive, but i wanted to point out problems, i understand it not easy to write novel, SO keep up the good work. maybe in future this review might change hope good change.[img=recommend]
'It could be more "interesting if you add more lemon ..! overall here we go: 5⭐
I give it 5 stars out of spite of the wntards who gave it 1 star in the review despite being told in the synopsis that mc is homophobic. I always look at the tags before I read something. I really want to beat up those who start reading a novel without looking at the tags and then complain about it in the chapter comments or reviews..
Love it 20/20 more please don’t forget about the fic