he isent even close to scum che so dont worry , dont just make the mc pump and dump if the whole reason is not outright to do that lol ... i dont see mc goign around killing mindlessly or raping woman so you can chill author its just how the people reacting when they dont get what they want from the story so they start to call him scum che
*I'm honestly surprised you guys are saying the MC became like Scum Che. What did he even do? Did he rape or brainwash anyone? He just sweet-talked a woman into bed. That's how 90% of relationships start in the real world... You talk to a woman, and if she finds you funny and comfortable to be around, you stay in touch. If you're lucky, you might even get to bang on the first day. Things like liking each other and all that shit come later. That's just common sense to me...*
ATG: My genius is almost frightening!
Book&Literature · ImmortalCockroach
and im the total opposit , so author do whatever you feel like lol
boring
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The Enlightened One's Path Throughout Marvel
Anime & Comics · The_Illuminated
good chapter ! , but got kinda disappointed aswell you used that picture for the fanfic so i thought i vould get some good old hardcore buddah personality from Records of ragnarok but this is just a normal dude and he dont got the personality to be in that body :/
*I really hate writing lemons, it makes me cringe...*
ATG: My genius is almost frightening!
Book&Literature · ImmortalCockroach
i quite like this one , but its 2 things im not fond of in this story its the skyrim system i think it kinda destroyed the whole immersion of the story of you being in "world of warcraft" world and the way he so focused on speccing himself so his armors get op so he can just switch armor for every situation i hate that kind of shit .. if you have a system put the points so the mc himself becomse op not the cloths he wears anything else is just ridicules , and i know im going to get shit for this but i dont like his wife ... but thats just because i don´t have a clear picture in my head on how she looks , all i imagine when i think off her is a short flatchested girl with super long eyebrowns weilding a ff7 buster sword... welp thats just how i see it anyways
okay so here it is , the child arc is way to long ive gotten tierd of the novel like 5 times b4 it ended ... its long asf and its cringy asf .. and the authors writing ugh... i vould have zero problem with it but the fkr actually started to use chinese cultivation styled writing .. i feel like any second after ive read a sentence or two from author that he will write that the sect elder will step out from cultivation and start to teach him about the dao ... it littarly feels like im in a cultivation fanfic and thats just because off how he is wording his sentences and the uses of words , i hate when authors does this its like they are trying to cover the text with so much flowery words as possible just to make it longer and look more appealing when you could have written the sentence with half as much text instead it feels forced and full off shit , welp thats just my opinion the story itself is good but the way he writes its just destroyes it for me .. this is my second try on the fanfic but i cant look past the way he words everything like chinese cultivation simp
yes now go focusing on your dao ... your sect elder will very please with your progress .. oh wait wrong fanfic ? or is it ?
"She's right, kid. Dragons should be prideful but do not think recklessness and being proud are the same thing. In the future, if you get similar invitations from stronger beings, then you should be tactful with what you do. For now, work hard to not shame the name of the 'Black Dragon King.' This Sunday, you will officially meet them as this generation's one and only Black Dragon King. They must already have ideas because of you using Blaze Black Flare last time," cautioned Vritra to make him more cautious.
Rise of the Immortal Black Dragon King
Anime & Comics · Sol_Pendragon
stop writing like your a chinese cultivation simp and il vould give u all my stones
[A/N: I think I have already said this before. But the number of powerstones that this fic receives is very low. It's quite disheartening and demotivating to see other fics that only just started serialising (most of them were smut fics, but obviously not all) with only a few chapters (8-13 chapters), getting so many powerstones (around 500) while mine has so few (only around 70). People really like smuts, huh? This fic will also contain heavy smuts, but only after the story develops a bit more. Maybe this fic isn't all that great. But I would like for those who enjoy this fic to donate some powerstones. Many people say that they always forget to donate stones or leave behind comments and reviews. But these small gestures of yours are what can genuinely make an author happy and motivate them to write better.
Rise of the Immortal Black Dragon King
Anime & Comics · Sol_Pendragon
*I'm honestly surprised you guys are saying the MC became like Scum Che. What did he even do? Did he rape or brainwash anyone? He just sweet-talked a woman into bed. That's how 90% of relationships start in the real world... You talk to a woman, and if she finds you funny and comfortable to be around, you stay in touch. If you're lucky, you might even get to bang on the first day. Things like liking each other and all that shit come later. That's just common sense to me...*
ATG: My genius is almost frightening!
Book&Literature · ImmortalCockroach