My Muscle System in the Mage World

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Aurelius_Imperator

Hello this book is the combination of action/magic/reincarnation. Nothing much to say here if You have Any question ask away [img=strong]

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shubham_sharma_9562

A must read book, as the story unfold , you'll find Mc navigating the treacherous path with his even more treacherous ways.

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Flipped_123

I was sceptical at first when reading the first chapters, and i found some of the story quite lacking, but it got a lot better later in the story. So accept some lower quality with the knowledge of it getting a lot better. I would recommebd this book, the only thing lacking is that it only releases 3 chapters per. Week. That is also why i write this review despite not doing so usually, because i want more chapters👀 Read it.

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omitted

Amazing novel, I truly have never seen such a wonderful story. I need more chapters, I don't think I can survive without reading more!!

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Adam_8657

Honestly the writings not bad but the story it's self is just boring I never understood why people write stories about rencarnators in a child's body it's just wierd and gets annoying quick. I would understand if it was for a little bit but this is not

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Its_Praveen

The title is really funny🫵. And story seemed to be interesting . More chapters author! So I can read more.

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Daoisth4Otxa

I like the story and the concept up to the current 25 chapters. But sadly it seems like there is no proofreading or checking being done since most of my cons are about the grammar, pronouns etc...I would love for the grammar to improve and see where the story goes.

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TheEyePatch

please improve your writing quality and erase meaningless talks and focus on the plot (If you have any ) related to the story . main character is cool and intelligent but Aurelius don't focus on pointless characters which will not appear later and please work on update stability the novel have huge potential it's just have dull edges which needs a little sharpening to create a masterpiece.

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lucifer_2805

Can't really tell much in so few chapters but since it's Aurelius, I'm sure it's gonna be another banger

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vallen_32

how are you going to name your novel on "muscles" and have your mc be 6'1 at only 70 kgs ,that's skinny af for a tall guy , disappointing.

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Kotik_Kotik

passable. it lacks that spark that makes a book good but doesn't really have any of the typical deficiencies. i was waiting for this to capture me but it didn't which is a bummer. ultimately idk it's your call

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JBFIRE_77

author didn't you say no romance in the story

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StylzGT

160lbs at 6’1” tall means the MC is a literally twig with ZERO muscle… he should be at LEAST 190lbs to qualify as having “muscles” cause even being 190lbs means it’s all lean muscle.

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Cornep

Murder is bad, but EVERYBODY, EVERYWHERE, ALL THE TIME, ALL AT ONCE be murdering. Also he is still a mage, just more battlemage than ranged traditional caster wizard.

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Lawrence_Oshim

Anyone who thinks this book deserves less than five star rating should burn. . opps The author has careful crafted every character with their unique personality. Mc is definitely not annoying "thank God" I'm not one to judge grammar cos I don't know much about it but I don't see mistakes. If you read it, then go ahead and read this book, and thank me later.

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Holomez

I will read soon, but its Aure, so 5 stars, WHAT IS LOVE?????? OH BABY DON'T HURT ME, DON'T HURT ME, NO MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS LOVE?????? OH BABY DON'T HURT ME, DON'T HURT ME, NO MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Deslimdivi245

When I started reading this novel, I seemed a little boring to me. But when I kept reading it, I got to like it even more. Although I'm an author myself, I kinda like this story more. I'm learning from you so do well to teach me more

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Diablo_nkisi

This is actually a pretty decent read. I had always avoided this book because I typically prefer stories with magic-wielding protagonists. However, when someone described the main character as a “close-combat mage,” I decided to give it a try. Unfortunately, I can’t give it 5 stars. Without spoiling too much, as the story progresses, the main character stops advancing on the wizard path. It almost feels like the author went out of their way to force this to happen—perhaps to avoid the story becoming too much like a typical mage tale. I’m not sure, but either way, I decided to drop it immediately.

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Jack_Lives

2+1+1+3+1)/5=1.6 bruh..... I initially thought i found a fun exciting read. i stockpiled for a while before reading the premium chapters ....... i regret this...... we go from a very clearly adventurer world with what seems to be the typical middle age level civilization plus whatever isekai innovations the author can come up with. the premium then jumps into a full blown school without a proper transition from the previous dungeon .... we get two hints about the world and the mc. the mc calls it an alternate earth instead of another world. and he occasionally mentions dieing with a nuke/bomb and being a gang leader. otherwise, the academy tech level and the random latinas came out of the blue. then we learn that the mc and the protagonist template character are; well, I didn't see any disclaimer that the mc was not a goody goody. I thought he was an edgelord and what some of the other reincarnated bad guys were, just dealt a shitty deck. but na. he likes living like he's the only one that matters and the others are only there to be good stepping stones or get the hell of the way and maybe be roughly "helped" away. basically i didn't see enough of a buildup and feel like this was very blatantly pulled out of an a*s. grammar was mostly good. the world and the latinas confuse me.

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Eon_Black

Novel is a different version of gu immortal