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DXD: Revenge of the forgotten
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Jake, who had a bad childhood, grew up to be an otaku with trust issues. But the luck of a devil, he gets reincarnated. Guess what, he reincarnated as a devil. He is the second son of Zeoticus Gremory and Vanelena Bael. Younger brother of Sirzechs Lucifer and second elder brother of Rias Gremory. Luckily for him he get reincarnated way before the Canon. Unluckily, he do not get any bloodline power of either Gremory or Bael clan.
This leads to him being neglected and abandoned, which mirrors with same situations as in his previous life. Which leads him to try hard and fail again and again to get the approval of his new Family. But, to his utter dismay, same thing happens as his previous life.
But he gets him up and forges his own path. Find that ones that he trusts and accepts him for who he is. And gets his revenge for being forgotten.
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MC has High IQ and EQ. Not a Harem Fan-fic. No system or wishes. Contains Yuri and cringy romance. No partners from the canon characters. MC is neutral good. Will help someone but of affect him or his loved one he will turns a blind eye.
I DO NOT OWN DXD CHARACTERS OR STORYLINE. THIS IS A FANFIC. THE COVER IS SOMETHING I FOUND FROM GOOGLE IMAGES. I DO NOT OWN THE COVER IMAGE.
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Judging from the Synopsis itself, this FanFic is just another Author using the MC to trash the OG Characters. Sigh... So cliche, but hey, it's in WN so what's there to expect...
This novel gave me a headache. There is not much more to say beyond that. I don't usually go out of my way to give low reviews but the amount of stars this story has for what it delivers is criminal.
I don't know if you are copying this story from others with the same plot, but at least have the disappointment of not copying the same mistakes.
The start of the story sets up what should be a revenge story.Revenge of the forgotten is the title but I'm not seeing any revenge or emotions leading towards revenge. The main character acts like a teenager who did not live a second life. He might have been sheltered in his first life to the point he is a child mentally.Even as he ages I am still seeing lack of brain cells.The world development is going in a unique way I haven't seen. It leads me to wonder how it's going to be useful content wise.Hope you continue the story and finish and grow as an author. But I would not be surprised if this is dropped before 100 chapters.
very good work for now ( chapter 5 ), hope that the next chapters will be at the same level
Do not recommend. Just feels like a giant info dump. You can’t really immerse yourself when reading because of this factor. If you are just looking for a filler book to waste time, here you go. However, it is not worth devoting much thought towards. Just from the synopsis you can already sense the quality.
No Relationships with Canon Characters, No Bloodline despite being Bael and Gremory, Neglect/Abuse fic.. even without the bloodlines I doubt Sirzechs the certified sis-con, wouldn’t be a bro-con and not stop any abuse, besides, he still has the genes of the traits, just because he hasn’t unlocked them doesn’t mean if this was realistic he couldn’t later, or pass it off to the children..
EQ isn't a recognized term anyway so theirs that don't know why ppl use it, and as well IQ dosent mean your smart it just measures problem solving skills and intelligence and problem solving skills are also separate so theirs that.
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Мне нравится, хороший сюжет, интересно посмотреть на взаимодействие персонажей. Главный герой не собирает девушек как покемонов. И не похоже что его единственная цель это стать самым сильным для того чтобы... Просто чтобы быть самым сильным. Он что-то создаёт, развивает свой пантентон, набирает людей, пока что не упирается своей крутость. Так что жду будущих взаимодействий с главными героями и его семьёй, а также реакции их реакции на всё это.
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really bad english. sometimes it gets in the way of the story. The story in it self, is mid (chapter 12).
it has a very good potential. and its one of the best dxd fic i have ever read has good background development, [SPOILER] (and i find it cool that you give him the sin essence and virtue essence.)
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I've seen a similar premise in another fanfic (born as Rias' twin brother and got abandoned by the Gremory), sadly that story got abandoned. I just hope you will keep updating this story, simply because your story have a good potential to be a masterpiece.
Great work!...im into a fanfic which have its own story in that world rather than existing just for canon characters.
good story and continue writing it . Just one suggestion, dont do many timeskips at once otherwise everything is good, continue updating it
Volumen 1
- 1 Chapter 1: New Beginning 1 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2: Rahakki Gremory 1 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3: Family Discussion 1 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4: Demonic Energy and Sensing 1 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5: Training results and TimeSkip 1 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6: Checkup 1 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7: Results and Memory palace 1 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8: Results and Decisions 1 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9: Dark thoughts 1 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10: End of Rahakki Gremory. 1 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11: Pyranos Grenzaros 1 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12: Time Skip 1 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13: Another Round of Hell and A New Race 1 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14: Preparation For The New Race 1 years ago
- 15 Chapter 15: Rescue of Trihexa 1 years ago
- 16 Chapter 16: Helping And Training Trini 1 years ago
- 17 Chapter 17: Taking Care Of Trini And Talking To Plane 1 years ago
- 18 Chapter 18: Confession 1 years ago
- 19 Chapter 19: Freedom and Family 1 years ago
- 20 Chapter 20: Development And Gateway Research 1 years ago
- 21 Chapter 21: Evolution and Contact with Plane Again 1 years ago
- 22 Chapter 22: Completing Evolution and Migration. 1 years ago
- 23 Chapter 23: New Pantheon And Origin Pieces. 1 years ago
- 24 Chapter 24: A Journey and A Gossip. 1 years ago
- 25 Chapter 25: Karasuna Aoki and Xie Yuxuan. 1 years ago
- 26 Chapter 26: Saoirse Byrne. 1 years ago
- 27 Chapter 27: Catherine Russell and Adelene Evans. 1 years ago
- 28 Chapter 28: Return of Trini and Nina 1 years ago
- 29 Chapter 29: Introductions And Conflict. 1 years ago
- 30 Chapter 30: Pyran’s Team and Vacation Preparations. 1 years ago
- 31 Chapter 31: A Date and Team completion. 1 years ago
- 32 Chapter 32: Celebration and Meeting. 1 years ago
- 33 Chapter 33: Thoughts of Other Pantheons. 1 years ago
- 34 Chapter 34: Alliances And Time Skip. 1 years ago
- 35 Chapter 35: Final Step and Final Straw. 1 years ago
- 36 Chapter 36: First Revenge and Events Before Canon. 1 years ago
- 37 Chapter 37: Canon Begins. 1 years ago
- 38 Chapter 38: Battle and Elimination of Naberius Clan. 1 years ago
- 39 Chapter 39: Dealing with Hades and Releasing Lilith 1 years ago
- 40 Chapter 40: Times up. 1 years ago
- 41 Chapter 41: Trini And Tiamat’s Revenge. 1 years ago
- 42 Chapter 42: Assignment evaluation And introduction. 1 years ago
- 43 Chapter 43: Warning and Visit. 11 months ago
- 44 Chapter 44: Marriage Contract Discussion. 11 months ago
- 45 Chapter 45: Contract Dissolving and Challenge 11 months ago
- 46 Chapter 46: Truth and Corrections Will of World. 11 months ago
- 47 Chapter 47: Awakening and Meeting Starts. 11 months ago
- 48 Chapter 48: Bitter Truth and Agreement. 11 months ago
- 49 Chapter 49: Chaos And Prelude OF The Game. 11 months ago
Please don't put High IQ and EQ.If he has a high EQ, this wouldn't be a story of revenge because his parents didn't love him enough.If he had a high IQ, he wouldn't have been set aside by his family. Heck! he could've emulated Beelzebub and created his own formula.Just by reading the synopsis, I already know how much I wouldn't like this.