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author what happen you say this novel has at least 1000 chapter so why are you stop relishing it
P - Perfection <3 I - I love thisss your writing style is AMAZING N - noice noice N - noice noice x2 A - awesome :D please give me more C - cool cover, its so good L - this is giving me life by reading it, lol E - epik
it is a really interesting beginning to my liking. Could you please extend the free time offer.
its good and fresh. a good slice of life novel makes reader relax. and its not makes you bored cause thats one of the issue of the most slice of life novels and op mcs. and most of all characters are likeable and funny, and their interactions is very good. i really like aadi, asty, and aurelia's interactions
interesting premise but jesus christ please learn how to use punctuation every other sentence goes like this and is a runon sentence and it makes me uncomfortable and i dont like it!! otherwise decent read!!
The world background is so well-crafted that I could practically smell the fictional flowers, and trust me, I've never been to that world! The scientific theories are like the seasoning on this literary dish, making it tastier than a chocolate-covered pizza.And the MC? Not your typical overpowered hero. He's no dimension-cracking hand-waving wizard but manages to keep the creeps at bay. Not a simp, but definitely not asking for a hug.A MC that's just right!In short, this novel is like a breath of fresh air in a room filled with clichés. It's my go-to when I'm bored with my own scribbles. I even learned a thing or two about writing from this author; he make it look easy! At least it's better than my attempt at a novel, and I'm not kidding. Go ahead, check it out! It's like a box of chocolates—always good. World Background: Check ✅Grammar: Check ✅Characters Development: Check ✅Engaging Plot: Check ✅Check, check, check... I mean, do you now want him to add Segs too? 😋
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Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about. Grammar: 5/5. Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this. Writing: 4.5/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.
It's a pretty good read tbh extremely slice of lifey which I enjoy with an OP mc taking in deciples and having fun. Looking forward to more chaps!
Powerful cultivation master, cute girls, a sense of humor, and a bit of face slapping. What is not to love? The writing is crisp and works better than most translations and the characters take a bit of time to build, but it's quite good
I think the novel was good starting with a broken mc was somewhat appealing to me. I would prefer if you lessened the dialogue especially after he leaves Asty but other than that I think this novel would do good.
Looks pretty good to me, I'll give the World Background props because the novel started off by displaying every important feature the fantastical setting of this world has to offer. Anyways, it's a good read and the person I like the most is Asty, the self-aware cat lol. The progression of the story is decent and the Author seems to know what he's writing. One thing I didn't feel was cool was the fact that rather than show or tell, you do both at the same time. For example: Asty was confused about the situation, and then he replied, "I'm confused about this situation." Besides that, everything seems pretty good.
chapters aren't enough to satisfy this reader self of mine. I need more(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ Anyway, novel is shiny I totally recommend!
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It's awesome an read everyone writes about the journey of the mc and never talks about what happens afterwards so this is the novel for it Full recommendation from my side
woah- this novel is well executed.. way too good. The starting really made me captivated, awesome grammar and world building as well. Thanks for this awesome read bud.
What happens after reaching the pinnacle? This bit really hooked me but the writing style and world-building was what made me love it. Although there's only a chapter out, you can really tell the author put a lot of thought and effort into this.
Very interesting start to the novel! I love that one of the main characters is a grouchy/sleepy cat, it makes me happy. A lot of potential here for a fun, engaging story! Writing is good and not overlabored. Give it a try!
Hey, Lucifer here. I'm writing this review after writing 190+ chapters. This is gonna be an honest review of my own. This was my first novel ever so have some mercy me. First of all, writing quality. I'll be honest and say it was way too bad in the starting and gradually I have improved. I even took a break and now I can say proudly that my writing skills have come to a decent level. So please endure the first few chapters. Also around 180ch I was in a bad mood and didn't edit those chapters but I'll edit them now. Now comes to world-building, man the only thing I can say about it is that even I don't believe I've written that. It's too good even for me. Now comes for our MC, Aadi. You have to know that this is a story about his life after reaching the pinnacle, so many times he'll just enjoy from the sidelines and the story would focus on his disciples because technically the world would revolve around them. As for the romance and harem part. As I said at the start of the novel, there is no harem. As for romance, well I intended to make it but I've already written almost 200 ch and the romance part is still mild. so yeah, you can say it's not romance now. Hmm, I don't have anything to add now, aside from that this was my first novel ever and it came out great. I improved a lot from it. Now the part of me going on hiatus was to focus on my new novel which is a slice-of-life novel. Now that I've settled it, I'm gonna continue this novel again. This novel is gonna be a long one, I already have content for at least 1000 chapters so you can rest assured on that part. Lastly my update rate, well it may slow now since I'm still focusing on a new one but I'll try my best to upload as much as I can. Thanks a lot for reading it, I'm really grateful. And if you're new I'll say at least give it a try. It improved a lot.
author what happen you say this novel has at least 1000 chapter so why are you stop relishing it
P - Perfection <3 I - I love thisss your writing style is AMAZING N - noice noice N - noice noice x2 A - awesome :D please give me more C - cool cover, its so good L - this is giving me life by reading it, lol E - epik
it is a really interesting beginning to my liking. Could you please extend the free time offer.
its good and fresh. a good slice of life novel makes reader relax. and its not makes you bored cause thats one of the issue of the most slice of life novels and op mcs. and most of all characters are likeable and funny, and their interactions is very good. i really like aadi, asty, and aurelia's interactions
interesting premise but jesus christ please learn how to use punctuation every other sentence goes like this and is a runon sentence and it makes me uncomfortable and i dont like it!! otherwise decent read!!
The world background is so well-crafted that I could practically smell the fictional flowers, and trust me, I've never been to that world! The scientific theories are like the seasoning on this literary dish, making it tastier than a chocolate-covered pizza.And the MC? Not your typical overpowered hero. He's no dimension-cracking hand-waving wizard but manages to keep the creeps at bay. Not a simp, but definitely not asking for a hug.A MC that's just right!In short, this novel is like a breath of fresh air in a room filled with clichés. It's my go-to when I'm bored with my own scribbles. I even learned a thing or two about writing from this author; he make it look easy! At least it's better than my attempt at a novel, and I'm not kidding. Go ahead, check it out! It's like a box of chocolates—always good. World Background: Check ✅Grammar: Check ✅Characters Development: Check ✅Engaging Plot: Check ✅Check, check, check... I mean, do you now want him to add Segs too? 😋
“Mewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww W W W W w w w w w w w w w w w w w we W w w w w w w w”
Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about. Grammar: 5/5. Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this. Writing: 4.5/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.
It's a pretty good read tbh extremely slice of lifey which I enjoy with an OP mc taking in deciples and having fun. Looking forward to more chaps!
Powerful cultivation master, cute girls, a sense of humor, and a bit of face slapping. What is not to love? The writing is crisp and works better than most translations and the characters take a bit of time to build, but it's quite good
I think the novel was good starting with a broken mc was somewhat appealing to me. I would prefer if you lessened the dialogue especially after he leaves Asty but other than that I think this novel would do good.
Looks pretty good to me, I'll give the World Background props because the novel started off by displaying every important feature the fantastical setting of this world has to offer. Anyways, it's a good read and the person I like the most is Asty, the self-aware cat lol. The progression of the story is decent and the Author seems to know what he's writing. One thing I didn't feel was cool was the fact that rather than show or tell, you do both at the same time. For example: Asty was confused about the situation, and then he replied, "I'm confused about this situation." Besides that, everything seems pretty good.
chapters aren't enough to satisfy this reader self of mine. I need more(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ Anyway, novel is shiny I totally recommend!
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It's awesome an read everyone writes about the journey of the mc and never talks about what happens afterwards so this is the novel for it Full recommendation from my side
woah- this novel is well executed.. way too good. The starting really made me captivated, awesome grammar and world building as well. Thanks for this awesome read bud.
What happens after reaching the pinnacle? This bit really hooked me but the writing style and world-building was what made me love it. Although there's only a chapter out, you can really tell the author put a lot of thought and effort into this.
Very interesting start to the novel! I love that one of the main characters is a grouchy/sleepy cat, it makes me happy. A lot of potential here for a fun, engaging story! Writing is good and not overlabored. Give it a try!
Hey, Lucifer here. I'm writing this review after writing 190+ chapters. This is gonna be an honest review of my own. This was my first novel ever so have some mercy me. First of all, writing quality. I'll be honest and say it was way too bad in the starting and gradually I have improved. I even took a break and now I can say proudly that my writing skills have come to a decent level. So please endure the first few chapters. Also around 180ch I was in a bad mood and didn't edit those chapters but I'll edit them now. Now comes to world-building, man the only thing I can say about it is that even I don't believe I've written that. It's too good even for me. Now comes for our MC, Aadi. You have to know that this is a story about his life after reaching the pinnacle, so many times he'll just enjoy from the sidelines and the story would focus on his disciples because technically the world would revolve around them. As for the romance and harem part. As I said at the start of the novel, there is no harem. As for romance, well I intended to make it but I've already written almost 200 ch and the romance part is still mild. so yeah, you can say it's not romance now. Hmm, I don't have anything to add now, aside from that this was my first novel ever and it came out great. I improved a lot from it. Now the part of me going on hiatus was to focus on my new novel which is a slice-of-life novel. Now that I've settled it, I'm gonna continue this novel again. This novel is gonna be a long one, I already have content for at least 1000 chapters so you can rest assured on that part. Lastly my update rate, well it may slow now since I'm still focusing on a new one but I'll try my best to upload as much as I can. Thanks a lot for reading it, I'm really grateful. And if you're new I'll say at least give it a try. It improved a lot.