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The author does a fantastic job setting scenes. Each chapter sets a well-described stage for Maya and Ava's budding relationship as well as development. Romance usually isn't my thing, but I highly recommend this as a heartwarming, well thought out read.
This was so...heartwarming, and beautifully poetic. You can just feel a sense of etherealness to how this whole story is written! I don't know how else to describe it but its a perfect type of writing style for a romance, in my humble opinion! I normally don't like love at first sight type of stories, but I think this was very well executed, so I'll make an exception!
If you want a fast paced love story with amazing character building and descriptions. This story is for you! I can't wait to see how Maya and Ava's love progresses and how they grow from the tribulations ahead. Just a pity the chapters are so short!
Amazing start to the novel. Author has a mature writing style that reads very easily with no grammatical mistakes. The language is very evocative too, each paragraph paints strong imagery in your kind, good job!
This is a really well-written story with a well thought-out plot and natural dialogues. While I don't usually read LGBTQ stories, this one was quite fine to me.
I don't normally read romance, but this one is really good! The author is very capable of describing the scenes thoroughly and is very, very good with grammar. Color me impressed, this one is a must-read!
I find this story good because of how well this is written making me feel as if I was part of the story. The story progressed fast showing the different conflicts that their love was facing. However, I hope the chapters would be longer. I think it would be better if a lot of things happens in a chapter too.
Honestly, from the synopsis alone, I thought this novel will give me roller coaster of emotions. It's giving off a vibe that touches a reader's mind and leave of a wonderful impression. Give this a try!
In love! I love the amount of thought you can tell is put into it (you had me at the cover) it’s so intricately crafted. Keep going PLEASE!!!
The way you describe the situation, the scenes, and the feelings is very alluring, Author. I liked how the characters feel attraction towards each other. But just a little tip, please add some more dialogue too. I personally don't like long descriptive paragraphs. But overall I really liked it!
Writing quality is excellent, the descriptions are vivid and pull you into the scene. At times they can be too much, but it matches the tone and style of the story. My only complaint would be that the romantic conflict is almost retrospective. There is little initial barrier, very little tension. They're swept into a whirlwind romance and only after the smoke settles are they pulled apart.
This story is really well written with amazing descriptions and characters. The plot is quite good. Great job author, you've really done a great job in writing a well fleshed story.
The idea of the story is really good. But I feel there are much description and lack of dialogue between to lead. It makes the interaction between them are not quite lively. The pace of the story is too fast, it's not even 5 chapter but the two lead already on the same page as each other. I didn't see romance tag in this book, but by chapter 10. It feels more like romance genre. Did I get it right, author? There are more room to improve and the story definitely will get better. The world building theme is good. It have a lot potential to be develop. Overall it's a good book for LGBT category. Reader definitely would love Maya and Ava dynamic as the writing get much better. 🍀
I think we need more novels like this. Very good job writing this novel. it's a must-read! If you're reading this, I highly encourage you to give it a try! You won't be disappointed!
You are truly a great author, write more books please and I would be willing to read. Love your books!!!!! Also please update this one more, I want to know what happen at the end.
Awesome! That's the word blasting out of my head as soon as I read the last sentence of chapter 3. The choice of words and character presentation is dope making you connect directly to the scene the author portrays and understand every bit of the story like it happened to you. The heart warming romance between Ava and Maya is also captivating making the novel a must read for just anyone and everyone with a crave for romance....keep it up
The author does a fantastic job setting scenes. Each chapter sets a well-described stage for Maya and Ava's budding relationship as well as development. Romance usually isn't my thing, but I highly recommend this as a heartwarming, well thought out read.
This was so...heartwarming, and beautifully poetic. You can just feel a sense of etherealness to how this whole story is written! I don't know how else to describe it but its a perfect type of writing style for a romance, in my humble opinion! I normally don't like love at first sight type of stories, but I think this was very well executed, so I'll make an exception!
If you want a fast paced love story with amazing character building and descriptions. This story is for you! I can't wait to see how Maya and Ava's love progresses and how they grow from the tribulations ahead. Just a pity the chapters are so short!
Amazing start to the novel. Author has a mature writing style that reads very easily with no grammatical mistakes. The language is very evocative too, each paragraph paints strong imagery in your kind, good job!
This is a really well-written story with a well thought-out plot and natural dialogues. While I don't usually read LGBTQ stories, this one was quite fine to me.
I don't normally read romance, but this one is really good! The author is very capable of describing the scenes thoroughly and is very, very good with grammar. Color me impressed, this one is a must-read!
I find this story good because of how well this is written making me feel as if I was part of the story. The story progressed fast showing the different conflicts that their love was facing. However, I hope the chapters would be longer. I think it would be better if a lot of things happens in a chapter too.
Honestly, from the synopsis alone, I thought this novel will give me roller coaster of emotions. It's giving off a vibe that touches a reader's mind and leave of a wonderful impression. Give this a try!
In love! I love the amount of thought you can tell is put into it (you had me at the cover) it’s so intricately crafted. Keep going PLEASE!!!
The way you describe the situation, the scenes, and the feelings is very alluring, Author. I liked how the characters feel attraction towards each other. But just a little tip, please add some more dialogue too. I personally don't like long descriptive paragraphs. But overall I really liked it!
Writing quality is excellent, the descriptions are vivid and pull you into the scene. At times they can be too much, but it matches the tone and style of the story. My only complaint would be that the romantic conflict is almost retrospective. There is little initial barrier, very little tension. They're swept into a whirlwind romance and only after the smoke settles are they pulled apart.
This story is really well written with amazing descriptions and characters. The plot is quite good. Great job author, you've really done a great job in writing a well fleshed story.
The idea of the story is really good. But I feel there are much description and lack of dialogue between to lead. It makes the interaction between them are not quite lively. The pace of the story is too fast, it's not even 5 chapter but the two lead already on the same page as each other. I didn't see romance tag in this book, but by chapter 10. It feels more like romance genre. Did I get it right, author? There are more room to improve and the story definitely will get better. The world building theme is good. It have a lot potential to be develop. Overall it's a good book for LGBT category. Reader definitely would love Maya and Ava dynamic as the writing get much better. 🍀
I think we need more novels like this. Very good job writing this novel. it's a must-read! If you're reading this, I highly encourage you to give it a try! You won't be disappointed!
You are truly a great author, write more books please and I would be willing to read. Love your books!!!!! Also please update this one more, I want to know what happen at the end.
Awesome! That's the word blasting out of my head as soon as I read the last sentence of chapter 3. The choice of words and character presentation is dope making you connect directly to the scene the author portrays and understand every bit of the story like it happened to you. The heart warming romance between Ava and Maya is also captivating making the novel a must read for just anyone and everyone with a crave for romance....keep it up