I love how you set the scene here. Very immersive.
Maya Sanchez briskly walked through the bustling streets of the city, her mind abuzz with the excitement and anticipation of her latest architectural project. As a young and ambitious architect, Maya was always seeking inspiration from the vibrant urban landscape that surrounded her. Tall buildings stretched toward the sky, their glass facades reflecting the myriad of people hurrying past.
LGBT+ · MartinsEmmanuel
Mikelle is an interesting character, and you instantly want to know more about his past and ow it will eventually shape his future. The author paints a vivid scene, and I can tell they worked very hard to be as descriptive as possible.
"Without any jewels sparkling from above" Great description!
The sky was covered in pitch black, without any jewels sparkling from above. It was a silent, heavy night as rain produced a pattering sound from the ground. Leaving the man, who looks like he just attended a funeral with an entire colored black outfit, groans in immense pain.
Fantasy · TalentlessCarin_
This is one of the most relable set-ups I've seen on here thus far. A main character who is a writer but doesn't like to feed the erotica-obsessed portion of most wev novels' reader base? Bold move, yet so familiar. I hope Adam can eventually find his footing footing as a writer as the story goes on.
Oh gosh! Instantly relating to Adam lol
It was hard. It all started with the usual interest, without publishing his work. Even though no one reads the stories, Adam enjoyed that brief moment of writing where he was the ruler of his world.
Urban · Reveraner
The world feels familiar, but he author does a good job of making the plot easy to understand. Adonis as a protagonist is immediately relatable, which makes his eventual ascension all the more intriguing. Kudos to the author for making an MC we can root for!
I love Ladon's energy.
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Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
This story is very fun to read. Like another reviewer stated, it reminds me of Bleach with the slayers and the fighting emerging Angels who threaten humanity's existence. The dialogue is pretty funny as well and made me laugh out loud a few times. I look forward to more from this writer.
Like no wonder humans are doomed. Geez lol
"I mean it doesn't even have a horn. Like what?"
Fantasy · Blissful_ChaotiC
The author does a fantastic job setting scenes. Each chapter sets a well-described stage for Maya and Ava's budding relationship as well as development. Romance usually isn't my thing, but I highly recommend this as a heartwarming, well thought out read.
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LGBT+ · MartinsEmmanuel