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Raven was reborn back in his high school years. From the start, he acquired an AI system.
As long as he provides the system with information, he could learn and do anything in a instant.
Want to learn all the languages in the world? Just take a glance!
Want to solve the worlds hardest math problem? Just take a glance!
Want to understand how the universe works? Just take a glance!
With his new found power, Raven will change his current life and live the life that every person wishes to accomplish.
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- Writing this for the WSA 2023 contest, so all love is open here
- Cover art made by an AI
- Daily uploads in chapters
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Love the story. BIt biased as I love these types of stories. Grammar issues: there are none I could find. Story: could be slow at some times, but I’ve noticed that’s during the romance chapters so I wont hate on that. Character: not too much to say as it’s only 8 chapters so far, but he feels unique and has his own personality compared to others Like I said; love the story
To be fair, the story is quite solid for something on Webnovel, but the tropes that are used ruin what normally would have been pretty good. My biggest problem is just how rushed the story is. The synopsis is more or less a bait, the synopsis somewhat promises on the mc fixing his life and that of other around him, but aside from being a streamer to get money he does none of that. He starts streaming Overwatch but we don’t see him grind to get really well known or anything. The author kind of skips over it. But my biggest problem of all isn’t even the MCs ability to get lucky and become super well known with basically just aimboting, my biggest problem is how rushed the story is. The author briefly brushed over the mc being a mathematical genius so he can avoid the MCs schooling, and rushes into a relation ship with his sister. The author said the mc was 13 or 14 at the start of the book, and within 7 chapters he got into a relationship with his sister. If we take into account that he came from ten years in the future he would have been at most 24 when he died. Now, why is someone who was 24 getting into a relationship with his sister who is 15? And it’s how rushed which is the bad part, I’ve seen wishfulfilment fanfics with better romantic development.
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It's okay-ish. The fact that MC has advanced AI has almost limitless possiblities but the author is taking a more of a 'slice-of-life' approach which really burns away a lot of potential. I mean, just the fact he could learn anything within a few minutes/hours is alone enough to make him OP in ordinary world. It could have been better if author had introduced the FL in later chaps.
This is a well-written story and definitely better than the standard you usually see on Webnovel. The romance is good even if parts require some suspension of disbelief. The slice of life is really nice and I am super thankful for the intelligent MC we've been blessed with. He trusts his golden finger and uses it in a lot of the ways I could personally think of using such an ability. Overall, this a good story. Keep it up Author! TFTC
Pretty good… I have one problem which is the spacing on the paragraphs, but you can easily fix that…
Volumen 1 : Freshmen Year
- 1 Reborn 1 years ago
- 2 The truth behind his parents secret 1 years ago
- 3 First day at High School 1 years ago
- 4 Becoming famous overnight 1 years ago
- 5 Teacher? No, I am the teacher! 1 years ago
- 6 Confession? 1 years ago
- 7 I like you too, but… 1 years ago
- 8 Soccer mathematic wizard Raven 1 years ago
- 9 Wait? He’s that Raven on the internet? 1 years ago
- 10 So you two are dating? 1 years ago
- 11 Marriage 1 years ago
- 12 Mia’s sadness and Raven's anger 1 years ago
- 13 This is what you get for messing with Mia 1 years ago
- 14 Mia's soccer games 1 years ago
- 15 Birthday prep for Raven 1 years ago
- 16 Birthday boy Raven 1 years ago
- 17 Winter time fun! 1 years ago
- 18 Vision finished! 1 years ago
- 19 Buying a ring 1 years ago
- 20 Boys Night Out 1 years ago
- 21 Laser Tag! 1 years ago
- 22 You ok? 1 years ago
- 23 Week before Christmas 1 years ago
- 24 Going to Quebec 1 years ago
- 25 Shopping and Big Secret 1 years ago
- 26 So are you dating her? 1 years ago
- 27 Chapter 27: Date night 1 years ago
- 28 1 day left before Christmas 1 years ago
- 29 Christmas Eve 1 years ago
- 30 Christmas Day! 1 years ago
- 31 Opening gifts 1 years ago
- 32 Vision alpha phase released! 1 years ago
- 33 Spending time together 1 years ago
- 34 Playing games with Mia 1 years ago
- 35 Bowling 1 years ago
- 36 Back to school 1 years ago
- 37 Studying 1 years ago
- 38 Maths Tournament 1 years ago
- 39 I’m wrong? No, you're wrong. 1 years ago
- 40 Since you want to be a clown, I’ll let your performance go around 1 years ago
- 41 Successfully messed up a maths tournament. 1 years ago
Alala, Author here! It’s been a couple of chapters so I shall put this here. Raven, the key figure, and Mia, the female protagonist, are the central figures of this story. I contemplate what the consequence of introducing an advanced AI into the present day could be and how it could shape one's future. This story will mainly follow Raven’s journey of exploring the AI “Vanessa.” With so many options at hand, what would be the best choice for the most optimal outcome? There is a romance between Raven and Mia, and that’s it. No harem, no NTR, no nothing. Any question, ask below and I’ll answer them with 100% of my abilities.