XRavenX

XRavenX

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Embrace the beauty of imperfection in our writing. Forsooth, striving for perfection is a noble goal, but it is oftentimes unattainable and may lead to naught but frustration and despair.

2023-03-11 Se unió Canada
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XRavenX
XRavenX
1 years ago
Replied to anto1

I messed up. It should be fourth stage on the system panel, but I forgot to change it… thanks for pointing it out. FYI, every time Qi increase by 10 it’ll increase the realm by on stage during the Qi Refinement period.

"Entered the Fourth stage of Qi Refinement. Not bad."

My Cultivation Life Was Gamified.

My Cultivation Life Was Gamified.

Fantasy · XRavenX

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XRavenX
1 years ago
Replied to anto1

They will get upgrades.

- ESP: In a 20 metre radius, you can see people through walls, check their cultivation level, see their names, age, and what weapon they're holding. (Disabled)

My Cultivation Life Was Gamified.

My Cultivation Life Was Gamified.

Fantasy · XRavenX

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XRavenX
1 years ago
Replied to anto1

No, only special characters. The only characters I have with a special like slang is so far is, Lu Feng, Lin Siyu, Lin Xinyu (Child-like + hot tempered), and Lin Chenyu. I have plans for three others, but they won’t be introduced for another 50ish chapters. Also the slang will be toned down in the future. I’m mainly doing this so it sets the persons personality.

"Should the sands of three decades pass and your heart yet remain unbound, mark my words: I shall return, and upon that time, deliver a lesson through the might of my will. Three centuries and more grace your existence, while your kin has found familial bliss. Though cultivation thrives within you, the tapestry of social bonds awaits further weaving."

My Cultivation Life Was Gamified.

My Cultivation Life Was Gamified.

Fantasy · XRavenX

XRavenX
XRavenX
1 years ago
Replied to XRavenX

I also want to note, she’s only at the third stage of Qi refinement, and it’ll only take longer in the future. I don’t want to build an OP MC right at the beginning as I find it hard to build the mc character and the others around her.

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XRavenX
1 years ago
Replied to anto1

I did think about this when I made the chapter, but I felt like this would be better for various reasons. 1. She’ll have multiple different skills in the future, therefore she can’t solely rely on just cultivating. 2. She 15 and hasn’t cultivate at all, so doing this kinda helps for future development. 3. I did some math. She was at 3. Something before this (can’t remember off the top of my head) therefore she’d only need to cultivate 12 cycles to get where she’s at, which is possible. So it isn’t unreasonable for her to have such a high level.

XRavenX
XRavenX
1 years ago
Replied to Naayil

Yes, I do understand what you mean. This my first actual book so I for some reason thoight people would get bored too quickly thus rushing everything. I have started to tone down everthing as I start to get a hang of writing, but the mistakes are already made so it might take a while for you really see a change. Thanks for the honest review though!

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XRavenX
1 years ago
Replied to Veechers

Thank you very much. I’ll do couple of extra chapters tomorrow

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XRavenX
1 years ago
Replied to Pritong_Hotdog

Yea, that will happen in the next chapter

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XRavenX
1 years ago
Replied to wap100

I’m aware of this. The next few chapters will mainly follow Raven now and the romance will be lowered. I just been busy with exam so I just wrote what was easy at the time (which was 11 chapters) so I wouldn’t miss out on updates.

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XRavenX
1 years ago
Replied to Lokordome

Thank you! I do understand I need to work on something and hope to improve on them.

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