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I read few chapters! in my defense, the next chapter was spicy and I was around my family! I loved the characters, their beautiful names and the very first chapter! Writing style is great, though there is a little bit of tweaking needed with the way the sfx sounds are written. Overall, this is a truly captivating novel so don't wait too much my people.Give it a read, you'll love it hehehe *gremlin smile*
This story is catching and has thrill. The creator did an excellent job in detailing the characters personality as well as the setting. The first three chapters was captivating enough to pigue my interest. Kudos to you, author!
The author excels in choosing beautiful names for the main characters. Not only in name selection, but the author also has the ability to create strong and detailed descriptions. When reading their work, I often feel as if I can vividly picture these characters and the world around them.
keep up the great work! 🖤Can't wait to see the dukes get humiliate by Damien 👹MUWAHAHAHAHAHAH!!
The Timeline shift in each chapter is soo Captivating! I absolutely love the stories, having this type of style, not to mention the fact that, it greatly helps in world building. Also i'd have to admit, Romance like this really isn't my type, but this might be able to change that! I'm really excited for the future chapters and my eyes are craving for Damian and Ophelia's interactions!Overall the series is highly recommended, be sure to give it a read!
This is really good and not going to lie your characters are amazing my personal favourite is Ophelia I would really love to see her personal growth so keep up the good work
This was actually pretty good. It starts of with a vivid setting description and immediately draws your attention to Ophelia, the main character. The worldbuilding then follows immediately after this but, I almost got lost a few times so spacing that out a bit might be a good idea. The story delves into Ophelia's past as early as chapter two, which makes it feel a little fast pace, but not to a degree where its overbearing. All in all this was a good read, just mind the pacing and you should be fine.
Okay, I'm going to give this story a five star rating. Everything about it is intriguing from the book cover to the synopsis to the first few chapters. It's a must read people!!!
Nice story except i need more chapters right now. Also coincidence that yesterday I was just plotting a book idea nd their were two names in my mind Damien and Ophelia and those two r the same name in your story 😉 well nvm good job and i hope this goes big
I read few chapters! in my defense, the next chapter was spicy and I was around my family! I loved the characters, their beautiful names and the very first chapter! Writing style is great, though there is a little bit of tweaking needed with the way the sfx sounds are written. Overall, this is a truly captivating novel so don't wait too much my people.Give it a read, you'll love it hehehe *gremlin smile*
This story is catching and has thrill. The creator did an excellent job in detailing the characters personality as well as the setting. The first three chapters was captivating enough to pigue my interest. Kudos to you, author!
The author excels in choosing beautiful names for the main characters. Not only in name selection, but the author also has the ability to create strong and detailed descriptions. When reading their work, I often feel as if I can vividly picture these characters and the world around them.
keep up the great work! 🖤Can't wait to see the dukes get humiliate by Damien 👹MUWAHAHAHAHAHAH!!
The Timeline shift in each chapter is soo Captivating! I absolutely love the stories, having this type of style, not to mention the fact that, it greatly helps in world building. Also i'd have to admit, Romance like this really isn't my type, but this might be able to change that! I'm really excited for the future chapters and my eyes are craving for Damian and Ophelia's interactions!Overall the series is highly recommended, be sure to give it a read!
This is really good and not going to lie your characters are amazing my personal favourite is Ophelia I would really love to see her personal growth so keep up the good work
This was actually pretty good. It starts of with a vivid setting description and immediately draws your attention to Ophelia, the main character. The worldbuilding then follows immediately after this but, I almost got lost a few times so spacing that out a bit might be a good idea. The story delves into Ophelia's past as early as chapter two, which makes it feel a little fast pace, but not to a degree where its overbearing. All in all this was a good read, just mind the pacing and you should be fine.
Okay, I'm going to give this story a five star rating. Everything about it is intriguing from the book cover to the synopsis to the first few chapters. It's a must read people!!!
Nice story except i need more chapters right now. Also coincidence that yesterday I was just plotting a book idea nd their were two names in my mind Damien and Ophelia and those two r the same name in your story 😉 well nvm good job and i hope this goes big