littlemaomao_

littlemaomao_

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2023-03-25 Se unió Indonesia
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littlemaomao_
littlemaomao_
6 months ago
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Beautiful, this word describes everything that the author wrote. The story has a clear direction, the synopsis captivated me, few chapters had already intriguied me~ Not forgetting to mention the character design as well, they’re beautiful!!! Great work, author[img=strong]

littlemaomao_
littlemaomao_
6 months ago
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Me before reading the book: Challenge accepted, Author! Me after reading 3 chapters: “I lost…” 3 chapters already intrigued me like—AAAHHHH🔥 love the way you make each character’s dialogues so dynamic and fun to read. I found myself immersed into the scenes in a min. Well done, author! [img=recommend]

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littlemaomao_
littlemaomao_
7 months ago
Replied to BataraKama

thankssss ♡

littlemaomao_
littlemaomao_
1 years ago
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The story is very interesting!! Author nailed the character’s description. I can imagine the events happening in every chapter! Each chapter held a very strong impression every time I read it. I hope this goes big, nice work author! [img=recommend]

littlemaomao_
littlemaomao_
1 years ago
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The synopsis is intriguing, story development is intriguing, everything about it is intriguing! The author nailed the dramatic way of the plot building It’s quite a sad story tho’ but I’m expecting a great future to this book. Nice work, author ^^

littlemaomao_
littlemaomao_
1 years ago
Replied to BataraKama

thank you luv💕

littlemaomao_
littlemaomao_
1 years ago
Replied to Entei_Arts

thank you so much for the support, really appreciate it [img=recommend]

littlemaomao_
littlemaomao_
1 years ago
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This is a very nice story ! The prologue tho. It's very captivating and the author manage to describe the world building very clearly. The thing is I need more chapters -^- Love the story, I hope this goes big. Keep up the good work author!

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littlemaomao_
littlemaomao_
1 years ago
Replied to Roxanne_Writes

Thank you so much for the support! Really appreciate it ❤️

littlemaomao_
littlemaomao_
1 years ago
Posted

Interesting read. I really like the way the author introduced the characters first in the opening volume, it’s witty! The story opened with a scene where the main character, Cecilia, got her “second chance” to seek revenge. I must say that this story will be fast paced. Keep up with the pacing and you’ll be okay. Then, consider using some marks and descriptions to clear the conversations among each character. Keep up the good work, author! [img=Loving it]

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