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Im sure it gets better but iIcould only handle like 20 chapters before the fic got too boring, nothing exuciting or fun stuff happens, the dialogue is okay but again it's kinda dull, the entirety of what i read was dull
I enjoyed this story quite a bit. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes while reading. The characters seem fun and similar to their manga/anime counterpart. I like how the MC is actually smart but still funny at times. The only reason I took a star off for World Background was because we were told in the beginning he was sent to a "Hard Mode" pokemon world but it's not. It is more fun adventure and shenanigans.
The only problem I have is the update speed. Some grammatical error here and there but it really doesn't affect the overall story. Other than that it's good, great even. Anyone who read this, give it a try, this closely follow the manga with some variations (fanfic obviously).
Is this harem? or any plans to introduce harem? I will keep it 5 star if it is. DO you have plans to introduce Harem. DO you have plans to introduce Harem
You know, for me being a Head Scientist in Katsu’s discord server. I sure am low in FanValue 😅 Anyway came to write a review but I'm just gonna leave it short. The writing is a great part of the story, if there are people looking for good writing. Ash is a cheeky guy but can rock your shit if he so wills it. Misty is Misty Brock is still a huge simp for beautiful woman but with the bro code added onto him. Yellow is a Sweet Spring Child. The progression of the story is at a moderate pace, we are in Johto, story-wise, the plot is at a good progression(unlike another Pokemon story I’m currently reading. Looking at you PAUA) The Pokemon are fun to read about, especially Abra. She is our one and only SENIOR SISTER! She will make you walk towards the right path in cultivation! Pikachu is a ketchupholic, my guy can't get away from them for even a second. World building is simple to understand. Well I shall end it here, would have loved to add more but then it would become a novel in its own. Long story short: Read the Story, you will like it.
I liked the story so far, loved how mega evolution is brought into the mix. Didn't really like how paldea was introduced into the story, too many characters from games really complicated the story. Hope you make the battle bond a permanent thing unique to ash only. Ooh... and i HATE misty's character so far.. Overall this one's a nice read👌 Really appreciate you not dropping this work👍👍👍
It's a really good story overall, the pacing is good and author really blends the cannon events well with the journey. Thx for the good work author.✌️✌️✌️💐💐💐
Hola, me encanto el fanfic y creo que tiene una de las mejores historia en base del anime, manga y películas. Cómo el autor utilizo mayormente una trama pacífica pero que se puede poner temas oscuros y serios pero que no cambia el estilo que lleva transcurriendo es del comienzo.
Revelar spoiler
Thisstory if one, if not the best fanfiction on pokemon i ever read, from the story, plot, character depth, humor and writting everything is perfect and if there were 2 fanfics who could rival yours one is dropped while the other is still going but yours got way better humor and character interaction Conclusion: this fanfic is MAGNIFICIENT
Bueno es un excelente historia nada que decir muy recomendable. Pero personalmente me canso recomiendo leer poco a poco yo leí más de 140 capítulos en poco tiempo y fue un error de mi parte. Al final el tono cómico del autor me canso. Todo es una comedia y a la larga se hace monótono. Una broma colocada en el momento perfecto es mucho más graciosa en comparación con muchas bromas continuas. No pido que hubiera violencia o "realidad" como en otras historias de pokemon qué solo ocupan ese término para poder escribir temas tristes y trágicos. Pero tampoco debería ser todo comedia. Por otra parte el asunto del clon seguramente el autor lo hizo para equilibrar un poco la historia, pero el asunto es que aunque sea la misma persona el clon es el clon y el protagonista es el protagonista nunca será mismo.
I like the story up until now. the mc seems to have a lot of pokemons with mutations that didn't get to shine as much it should and the bond evolution with charizard, hope you make the bond evolution not a one time gig. 👍👍👍 (i personally don't like Green so i maybe a bit biased while saying this, but i would prefer if the interractions with Green are kept to a bare minimum.)
Revelar spoiler
one of the best pokemon fics I have seen does not have the pokemon ingredients thing and stuff like potentials of green,yellow,etc. fun story some very hype moments in the series so far.
It's a really good one. I have read many Pokemon fanfics and this is one of the best out there. The story really feels like a journey and us being a part of that journey. Thanks very much author.
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I've read 3 other pokemon fanfic so far and this one is my favorite. I totally recommend reading it.
Its very good. At the start its a bit iffy, but it gets really good after 20ish chapter. Worldbuidling is awesome, i like what the author did with the fusion of Games/Anime. Mc is smart, trains for his "Power" and most importantly is not a simp for every female there is. Very solid team, i like the mutations and stuff. Honestly better then most, if not the best I've read. Good job author, you can write!
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Its a great read in that it moves a constant pace not to slow or fast and it show how some of the characters would have changed it things went differently and it combines manga anime and games
I will definitely give 5 stars to Radical Redux. This fanfic is really interesting, and it fascinated me by it own plot. Actually, I thought it would be boring, but nope, it's not bad. It's actually really good, and Ash(MC) is a smart dude who can turn the tables in the battle and win at the end.
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Finally a like minded person who also thinks potential ruins fics. Hard to balance and easy to mess up
One of my most favourite fanfic if not my most favourite fanfic EVER so im looking forward to the future of this one of a kind masterpiece highly recommended
A very good and interesting read and definitely one of the best pokemon fanfics ive read. And even though hes ash in here, the story isnt just a copy from the original with a few changes like other fanfics are. i also like the fact that he does things unlike how the og ash did like leaving his pokemon and how he actually trains his pokemon and earns his badge properly.
love this fanfic been reading this over the last few days originally thought I would hate because of the manga and game characters because people often make them super annoying but the characters here fell really good and talk coherently with others and not one dimensionally so I really love this
Now that I'm more or less halfway through the currently uploaded chapters, thought I'll give it a review. Has a poor start(had dropped it initially), but once you get into it, it's really good. Author does make quite a few common grammatical errors as well as wrong usage of words, but not enough to be off putting. Story wise it's pretty good, though pacing can be better. Has good world building, a few parellel plot lines and most importantly author does ask for feedback on things to improve or avoid, so it's only gonna get better as it progresses. Overall it's one of the few pokemon fanfics I can say is worth reading.
Shameless obligatory author review, Upload schedule is currently Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Stick around if you want a story that I don't completely know everything I'm going to do. So we're in this together.
Im sure it gets better but iIcould only handle like 20 chapters before the fic got too boring, nothing exuciting or fun stuff happens, the dialogue is okay but again it's kinda dull, the entirety of what i read was dull
I enjoyed this story quite a bit. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes while reading. The characters seem fun and similar to their manga/anime counterpart. I like how the MC is actually smart but still funny at times. The only reason I took a star off for World Background was because we were told in the beginning he was sent to a "Hard Mode" pokemon world but it's not. It is more fun adventure and shenanigans.
The only problem I have is the update speed. Some grammatical error here and there but it really doesn't affect the overall story. Other than that it's good, great even. Anyone who read this, give it a try, this closely follow the manga with some variations (fanfic obviously).
Is this harem? or any plans to introduce harem? I will keep it 5 star if it is. DO you have plans to introduce Harem. DO you have plans to introduce Harem
You know, for me being a Head Scientist in Katsu’s discord server. I sure am low in FanValue 😅 Anyway came to write a review but I'm just gonna leave it short. The writing is a great part of the story, if there are people looking for good writing. Ash is a cheeky guy but can rock your shit if he so wills it. Misty is Misty Brock is still a huge simp for beautiful woman but with the bro code added onto him. Yellow is a Sweet Spring Child. The progression of the story is at a moderate pace, we are in Johto, story-wise, the plot is at a good progression(unlike another Pokemon story I’m currently reading. Looking at you PAUA) The Pokemon are fun to read about, especially Abra. She is our one and only SENIOR SISTER! She will make you walk towards the right path in cultivation! Pikachu is a ketchupholic, my guy can't get away from them for even a second. World building is simple to understand. Well I shall end it here, would have loved to add more but then it would become a novel in its own. Long story short: Read the Story, you will like it.
I liked the story so far, loved how mega evolution is brought into the mix. Didn't really like how paldea was introduced into the story, too many characters from games really complicated the story. Hope you make the battle bond a permanent thing unique to ash only. Ooh... and i HATE misty's character so far.. Overall this one's a nice read👌 Really appreciate you not dropping this work👍👍👍
It's a really good story overall, the pacing is good and author really blends the cannon events well with the journey. Thx for the good work author.✌️✌️✌️💐💐💐
Hola, me encanto el fanfic y creo que tiene una de las mejores historia en base del anime, manga y películas. Cómo el autor utilizo mayormente una trama pacífica pero que se puede poner temas oscuros y serios pero que no cambia el estilo que lleva transcurriendo es del comienzo.
Revelar spoiler Thisstory if one, if not the best fanfiction on pokemon i ever read, from the story, plot, character depth, humor and writting everything is perfect and if there were 2 fanfics who could rival yours one is dropped while the other is still going but yours got way better humor and character interaction Conclusion: this fanfic is MAGNIFICIENT
Bueno es un excelente historia nada que decir muy recomendable. Pero personalmente me canso recomiendo leer poco a poco yo leí más de 140 capítulos en poco tiempo y fue un error de mi parte. Al final el tono cómico del autor me canso. Todo es una comedia y a la larga se hace monótono. Una broma colocada en el momento perfecto es mucho más graciosa en comparación con muchas bromas continuas. No pido que hubiera violencia o "realidad" como en otras historias de pokemon qué solo ocupan ese término para poder escribir temas tristes y trágicos. Pero tampoco debería ser todo comedia. Por otra parte el asunto del clon seguramente el autor lo hizo para equilibrar un poco la historia, pero el asunto es que aunque sea la misma persona el clon es el clon y el protagonista es el protagonista nunca será mismo.
I like the story up until now. the mc seems to have a lot of pokemons with mutations that didn't get to shine as much it should and the bond evolution with charizard, hope you make the bond evolution not a one time gig. 👍👍👍 (i personally don't like Green so i maybe a bit biased while saying this, but i would prefer if the interractions with Green are kept to a bare minimum.)
Revelar spoiler one of the best pokemon fics I have seen does not have the pokemon ingredients thing and stuff like potentials of green,yellow,etc. fun story some very hype moments in the series so far.
It's a really good one. I have read many Pokemon fanfics and this is one of the best out there. The story really feels like a journey and us being a part of that journey. Thanks very much author.
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I've read 3 other pokemon fanfic so far and this one is my favorite. I totally recommend reading it.
Its very good. At the start its a bit iffy, but it gets really good after 20ish chapter. Worldbuidling is awesome, i like what the author did with the fusion of Games/Anime. Mc is smart, trains for his "Power" and most importantly is not a simp for every female there is. Very solid team, i like the mutations and stuff. Honestly better then most, if not the best I've read. Good job author, you can write!
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Its a great read in that it moves a constant pace not to slow or fast and it show how some of the characters would have changed it things went differently and it combines manga anime and games
I will definitely give 5 stars to Radical Redux. This fanfic is really interesting, and it fascinated me by it own plot. Actually, I thought it would be boring, but nope, it's not bad. It's actually really good, and Ash(MC) is a smart dude who can turn the tables in the battle and win at the end.
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Finally a like minded person who also thinks potential ruins fics. Hard to balance and easy to mess up
One of my most favourite fanfic if not my most favourite fanfic EVER so im looking forward to the future of this one of a kind masterpiece highly recommended
A very good and interesting read and definitely one of the best pokemon fanfics ive read. And even though hes ash in here, the story isnt just a copy from the original with a few changes like other fanfics are. i also like the fact that he does things unlike how the og ash did like leaving his pokemon and how he actually trains his pokemon and earns his badge properly.
love this fanfic been reading this over the last few days originally thought I would hate because of the manga and game characters because people often make them super annoying but the characters here fell really good and talk coherently with others and not one dimensionally so I really love this
Now that I'm more or less halfway through the currently uploaded chapters, thought I'll give it a review. Has a poor start(had dropped it initially), but once you get into it, it's really good. Author does make quite a few common grammatical errors as well as wrong usage of words, but not enough to be off putting. Story wise it's pretty good, though pacing can be better. Has good world building, a few parellel plot lines and most importantly author does ask for feedback on things to improve or avoid, so it's only gonna get better as it progresses. Overall it's one of the few pokemon fanfics I can say is worth reading.
Shameless obligatory author review, Upload schedule is currently Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Stick around if you want a story that I don't completely know everything I'm going to do. So we're in this together.