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Wowowow how long has it been since I gave a 5 star review to any novel. How many trash novels did I have to drool through with my brain switched off looking for something. That spark of creativity, innovation and wisdom. A novel that doesn't have a totally brain dead author. Close to a 100 novels I have read recently. And yet not one passed. A few had somewhat competent authors with some flaws though. Then characters that mostly behave likecnormal real humans. Selfish, self aware and emotional. (some of the characters have set parameters so it's not fully humanlike). Then the world. The main world doesn't only revolve around the MC. Aka stuff is happening elsewhere in the world and you can feel it. It's not like monogatari anime where the entire world just seems to be a few places in one city. It's hard to explain but I like open world. Give this book a try. Chapters are long enough. Only 26 chapters atm BUT it's similar reading length to around 50 standard chinese novel chapters.
He hasn't updated in 2 months, but it's a great book, and hopefully, he continues it
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I never write reviews but this novel is worth me putting in extra effort to do this for it.
I just started reading this novel and have finished all chapters in one sitting. Its been a very long time since i have been pulled into a novel like this. The almost everything about the novel is to my liking, especially the writing quality considering there are plenty of novels in webnovel with potential but are unsatisfying to read because of the writing quality. You have said that this novel is not selling well and therefore you cannot pay the same attention to it but I sincerely hope that you continue to improve and not lose hope on this treasure, My Man Author. Cheers !!
hey i am underratedfella your novel is pretty good although i have read 🤐🤐🤐🤐
I'm the guy who was asking how to increase exp. i can't say much about the novel now cause, I have read a few chapters 😁 I will update this after i have read 50 ch.
HONEST REVIEW :Our MC is a self centred dual personality hypocrite. First he blame all on protagonist but MC is 100 times worse than him. He thinks he is the god of the world and everyone should do as he wish. His indifferent & pride annoys all readers. He constantly curses system even though it provide good service. One of the most annoying, worst hypocrite villian MC.
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Boy oh boy. I am speechless... I don't usually write review since I usually read from browser, but this one deserves it..... I am currently on the latest chap 102 and this was certainly a rollercoaster ride. How many book have I read with all those beta simps and stu pid MCs, how many brain cells have I wated finding something that matches my taste? Finally I found this.... I found this gem of a novel. Let me describe it.I love this story so far, like I absolutely adore it. You make the MC an actual villain and not one that needs to exist alone all the time because he’s just pure evil and hates everyone and everything but a smart and calculating one that seems like the type to do whatever he needs to succeed without relishing in the pain of others. Like he doesn’t do it because it causes pain but rather because it helps him although he definitely has a little bit of a sadistic side. I like that if he has no stake in the game he seems like the guy to help out should it not go against his interest because he’s nice but he will absolutely crush even the sweetest person if it gives him even a slightly better chance at anything. Perfect MC 10/10. The side characters are all well done I think just me not being great with names I confuse them sometimes like I have daisy and Charlotte and Rachel down but the others I do confuse so if you could comment just occasionally on some thing they do that could help me remember but I feel like you do this already do a degree. The only criticism I can really think of right now is that there are 4 girls living with him I believe but honestly I’m probably wrong and they seem to have a dynamic where some like others and dislike others and they’re almost fighting for MC but it doesn’t feel very fleshed out. Don’t get me wrong it makes sense logically like they all want MC so the others are obstacles but like a little something occasionally to flesh out their relationships with each other more would be nice. Nothing like a whole chapter unless you want to but just a jab at eachother or a compliment to give a subtle hint as to who likes and dislikes who. Also Charlotte is my favorite side character so far I’m really looking forwards to seeing more of her evil side and why she’s the ultimate villains right hand.Charlotte I Love You, I want Charlotte!!! Broo!!! I want more chapters, sadly I read the Author's announcement on the discord that his health not good, so get better author-san, and give me more chappy, here's a gift from me to help you get better
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The Synopsis it doesn't do it justice to the book. The story is much more deeper than that.
for me it's 4/5 I need to read more for a better review... basically I need more chapters
Just way too much info dumb first 5 chapters. Man lays in bed smoking and has all future plot points, all higher powers, a system, and the style of world introduced back to back without leaving the first room being introduced in story.
Does the mc has any good enough reason to abandon his eartly morals and become a villain instantly?
Wow five stars! Wonderfully written art work. I must say I am impressed with such quality. I haven't read something like this in the past. Well good luck in the future.....you have a big potential you know?
The writing quality is high, not top quality, but its written in a simple and easy to read style and that's why I like it. The updates are stable and even the author's chapters 1.5k words as minimum and even goes beyond 2k. The development of the story is very good, MC is a true villain, not a wimp EMO. I suggest you guys read it and give it a try.
I love it, the story kept me interested until I was met with the miserable fate of needing to stock up on chapters so I don’t get an aneurysm waiting
There are a bunch of reviews saying how good this book is and I like it the vibes are good so give it a try…
I never thought I'll be so immersed just reading a couple of chapters. The way how the sentences are structured and how to words flow was just near to perfection, it all seemed natural. Keep on writing Author! I'll be rooting from now on!
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I like the theme and plot of the book. It was different from other villain fanfic novels. Hope you continue writing with the same passion. I like the scenes and change in mood and tension of the protagonist. It also nice to see that the heroines does not fall love at first sight everytime after seeing the mc.
Very good in terms of writing and (squishing), plot is good so i encourage the writer to continue (girl in cover page)😩
I only hope that author can increase no of chapters per week so that we readers can recommend if it is pitifully low even if we recommend many will ignore it... so please release many chapters author - sama
Heya! Everyone. I am back with another work. (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤ This one's not gonna disappoint you, MC will be a Villain in every sense, so keep your seatbelts tight, and get read for a thrilling ride. Comments your thoughts down below and let me know if you have any queries (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
Wowowow how long has it been since I gave a 5 star review to any novel. How many trash novels did I have to drool through with my brain switched off looking for something. That spark of creativity, innovation and wisdom. A novel that doesn't have a totally brain dead author. Close to a 100 novels I have read recently. And yet not one passed. A few had somewhat competent authors with some flaws though. Then characters that mostly behave likecnormal real humans. Selfish, self aware and emotional. (some of the characters have set parameters so it's not fully humanlike). Then the world. The main world doesn't only revolve around the MC. Aka stuff is happening elsewhere in the world and you can feel it. It's not like monogatari anime where the entire world just seems to be a few places in one city. It's hard to explain but I like open world. Give this book a try. Chapters are long enough. Only 26 chapters atm BUT it's similar reading length to around 50 standard chinese novel chapters.
He hasn't updated in 2 months, but it's a great book, and hopefully, he continues it
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Revelar spoiler I never write reviews but this novel is worth me putting in extra effort to do this for it.
I just started reading this novel and have finished all chapters in one sitting. Its been a very long time since i have been pulled into a novel like this. The almost everything about the novel is to my liking, especially the writing quality considering there are plenty of novels in webnovel with potential but are unsatisfying to read because of the writing quality. You have said that this novel is not selling well and therefore you cannot pay the same attention to it but I sincerely hope that you continue to improve and not lose hope on this treasure, My Man Author. Cheers !!
hey i am underratedfella your novel is pretty good although i have read 🤐🤐🤐🤐
I'm the guy who was asking how to increase exp. i can't say much about the novel now cause, I have read a few chapters 😁 I will update this after i have read 50 ch.
HONEST REVIEW :Our MC is a self centred dual personality hypocrite. First he blame all on protagonist but MC is 100 times worse than him. He thinks he is the god of the world and everyone should do as he wish. His indifferent & pride annoys all readers. He constantly curses system even though it provide good service. One of the most annoying, worst hypocrite villian MC.
Hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm
Boy oh boy. I am speechless... I don't usually write review since I usually read from browser, but this one deserves it..... I am currently on the latest chap 102 and this was certainly a rollercoaster ride. How many book have I read with all those beta simps and stu pid MCs, how many brain cells have I wated finding something that matches my taste? Finally I found this.... I found this gem of a novel. Let me describe it.I love this story so far, like I absolutely adore it. You make the MC an actual villain and not one that needs to exist alone all the time because he’s just pure evil and hates everyone and everything but a smart and calculating one that seems like the type to do whatever he needs to succeed without relishing in the pain of others. Like he doesn’t do it because it causes pain but rather because it helps him although he definitely has a little bit of a sadistic side. I like that if he has no stake in the game he seems like the guy to help out should it not go against his interest because he’s nice but he will absolutely crush even the sweetest person if it gives him even a slightly better chance at anything. Perfect MC 10/10. The side characters are all well done I think just me not being great with names I confuse them sometimes like I have daisy and Charlotte and Rachel down but the others I do confuse so if you could comment just occasionally on some thing they do that could help me remember but I feel like you do this already do a degree. The only criticism I can really think of right now is that there are 4 girls living with him I believe but honestly I’m probably wrong and they seem to have a dynamic where some like others and dislike others and they’re almost fighting for MC but it doesn’t feel very fleshed out. Don’t get me wrong it makes sense logically like they all want MC so the others are obstacles but like a little something occasionally to flesh out their relationships with each other more would be nice. Nothing like a whole chapter unless you want to but just a jab at eachother or a compliment to give a subtle hint as to who likes and dislikes who. Also Charlotte is my favorite side character so far I’m really looking forwards to seeing more of her evil side and why she’s the ultimate villains right hand.Charlotte I Love You, I want Charlotte!!! Broo!!! I want more chapters, sadly I read the Author's announcement on the discord that his health not good, so get better author-san, and give me more chappy, here's a gift from me to help you get better
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The Synopsis it doesn't do it justice to the book. The story is much more deeper than that.
for me it's 4/5 I need to read more for a better review... basically I need more chapters
Just way too much info dumb first 5 chapters. Man lays in bed smoking and has all future plot points, all higher powers, a system, and the style of world introduced back to back without leaving the first room being introduced in story.
Does the mc has any good enough reason to abandon his eartly morals and become a villain instantly?
Wow five stars! Wonderfully written art work. I must say I am impressed with such quality. I haven't read something like this in the past. Well good luck in the future.....you have a big potential you know?
The writing quality is high, not top quality, but its written in a simple and easy to read style and that's why I like it. The updates are stable and even the author's chapters 1.5k words as minimum and even goes beyond 2k. The development of the story is very good, MC is a true villain, not a wimp EMO. I suggest you guys read it and give it a try.
I love it, the story kept me interested until I was met with the miserable fate of needing to stock up on chapters so I don’t get an aneurysm waiting
There are a bunch of reviews saying how good this book is and I like it the vibes are good so give it a try…
I never thought I'll be so immersed just reading a couple of chapters. The way how the sentences are structured and how to words flow was just near to perfection, it all seemed natural. Keep on writing Author! I'll be rooting from now on!
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I like the theme and plot of the book. It was different from other villain fanfic novels. Hope you continue writing with the same passion. I like the scenes and change in mood and tension of the protagonist. It also nice to see that the heroines does not fall love at first sight everytime after seeing the mc.
Very good in terms of writing and (squishing), plot is good so i encourage the writer to continue (girl in cover page)😩
I only hope that author can increase no of chapters per week so that we readers can recommend if it is pitifully low even if we recommend many will ignore it... so please release many chapters author - sama
Heya! Everyone. I am back with another work. (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤ This one's not gonna disappoint you, MC will be a Villain in every sense, so keep your seatbelts tight, and get read for a thrilling ride. Comments your thoughts down below and let me know if you have any queries (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤