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Escribe una reseñaLiterally reviewing because of the author’s comment that ‘there are no good overlord fanfics’. Beyond that ignorant take, I’m here to suggest other fanfics to read that just so happen to be overlord FF’s that are worth your time. 1. Yellowness by MidasMan on QuestionableQuesting 2. Prince of Nazarick by Draugzel on Webnovel and FF.net 3. Harbingers of Change on FF.net 4. Overlord: The One Who Stayed on FF.net
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what do you mean there are no good overlord fan fics? are you crazy? mine is the best one out there bro!
man this is a masterpiece by far the best overlord fanfic the concept here is really refreshing ✨️ 👌
I want to honestly ask something, and its about ulbert, could you maybe make a separate story where you go with the original plan of him being the mcs brother, I just really want to see it and I know a lot of people agree, just copy and paste upto the chapter with the ritual and then it'll deviate, I know you'll probably never see this but I just really wanted to ask.
Revelar spoilerIt's not for me, although the story is good, it has things that I personally don't like. I don't like the race he chose, although I like the OP protagonists, the ones who can do everything don't; I don't like the change in appearance either, I prefer that he have one and not change it over and over again; and if there is something I don't like about Overlord it is Ainz's race, yes, it is intimidating and well made but skeletons are not my thing, and the fact that you have presented it in that way takes away points for ME; and I would have liked to see the protagonist doing some canon scenes but like him; And if there is something that I hate, it is that the Prota hides, I see it everywhere and it makes me tired, and the one who has hidden by pretending to be someone else lowers his points, which I understand if he is weak but he is not. . I know that this review is more personal than objective but come on, 99% of the reviews are like that.
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for me this kind of fanfiction is so much better than the Canon production. The MC is more perfect than most others I believe I've listened to considering his background and all his actions after trans migration. he really utilizes all the mechanics of everything he knows no matter whether he was in the previous ruined world with no supernatural aspects, the gaming world of yggdrasil, and the new world.
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2 tom drop......WTF!??"CHAT APP" ...........................................................................................................................
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The new format it's just not for me, If I wanted a story written in script format, I would go to wattpad. It ruins the reading. ..........
It's good. New world arc after the yggdrasil game arc is well writren you should try for yourself first.......................................................................................................................................................................................
Its a pretty fun story so far. Most overlord fanfics are boring but this one shines from the rest. I still find it has some of the same flaws though. The MC who was human then a God, now star of a past life's anime some how has the arrogance and know it all of a God but the inferiority complex of a chubby nerd with pimples in gym class but no other emotional qualities he seems to display. His slaves all have loyalty ingrained in their DNA but he had to double down and give them mental trauma and hatred to keep em kissing his toes for good. Might be resolved because every problem in this story is resolved by the law of convenience. The story also feels like a long con since his only goal is to be the strongest. No friends. everyone and thing is a tool, one step made is a scheme. Just an MC and a bunch of NPCs in a real world he doesn't take real. it gets a bit stale but the quality of the grammar and indepth knowledge the author gives is enjoyable to read. Its a great generic story and the best overlord Fanfic I've read despite how my review may be taken.
I feel like the rating is..... Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background
This fanfic is better than i thought the beginning chapters were pretty boring, but in the later chapters it's very interesting and most of all! The new world Arc has started in this one! Definitely an achivement!You are a hero for this one.
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This is bad ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
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An overall amazing overlord fan fiction. My only complain is that Author-san easily scraps his original plans for the story when some people comment on it and say that they don't like it. In the end, you can't please everyone, athough taking suggestions isn't inherently bad, you don't have to change your entire story just because someone complained about it. And although I'm personally pleased that no other supreme being will transfer to the new world with the MC, I'm only warning the author of this because spreading yourself too thin and trying to please everyone may ruin the story
It's a shame that the Author gave up on the work. If he waited a little longer, I think it would work out really well, because the fanfic is certainly very good. I hope that one day the Author comes back and continues writing the fanfic, because it has a lot of future, it just needs a little perseverance.
Literally reviewing because of the author’s comment that ‘there are no good overlord fanfics’. Beyond that ignorant take, I’m here to suggest other fanfics to read that just so happen to be overlord FF’s that are worth your time. 1. Yellowness by MidasMan on QuestionableQuesting 2. Prince of Nazarick by Draugzel on Webnovel and FF.net 3. Harbingers of Change on FF.net 4. Overlord: The One Who Stayed on FF.net
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what do you mean there are no good overlord fan fics? are you crazy? mine is the best one out there bro!
man this is a masterpiece by far the best overlord fanfic the concept here is really refreshing ✨️ 👌
I want to honestly ask something, and its about ulbert, could you maybe make a separate story where you go with the original plan of him being the mcs brother, I just really want to see it and I know a lot of people agree, just copy and paste upto the chapter with the ritual and then it'll deviate, I know you'll probably never see this but I just really wanted to ask.
Revelar spoilerIt's not for me, although the story is good, it has things that I personally don't like. I don't like the race he chose, although I like the OP protagonists, the ones who can do everything don't; I don't like the change in appearance either, I prefer that he have one and not change it over and over again; and if there is something I don't like about Overlord it is Ainz's race, yes, it is intimidating and well made but skeletons are not my thing, and the fact that you have presented it in that way takes away points for ME; and I would have liked to see the protagonist doing some canon scenes but like him; And if there is something that I hate, it is that the Prota hides, I see it everywhere and it makes me tired, and the one who has hidden by pretending to be someone else lowers his points, which I understand if he is weak but he is not. . I know that this review is more personal than objective but come on, 99% of the reviews are like that.
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for me this kind of fanfiction is so much better than the Canon production. The MC is more perfect than most others I believe I've listened to considering his background and all his actions after trans migration. he really utilizes all the mechanics of everything he knows no matter whether he was in the previous ruined world with no supernatural aspects, the gaming world of yggdrasil, and the new world.
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2 tom drop......WTF!??"CHAT APP" ...........................................................................................................................
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Good,...,... . ............................. HshshshshbsbsnsnbsvsbsnbzvzhjzsbshjznabHjzjznznznxnmxmznznzbnznznzbvzhzbvzczvzbbsbzvsv hj nsnjzjzhzhbznzhzj ...................... .............................
The new format it's just not for me, If I wanted a story written in script format, I would go to wattpad. It ruins the reading. ..........
It's good. New world arc after the yggdrasil game arc is well writren you should try for yourself first.......................................................................................................................................................................................
Its a pretty fun story so far. Most overlord fanfics are boring but this one shines from the rest. I still find it has some of the same flaws though. The MC who was human then a God, now star of a past life's anime some how has the arrogance and know it all of a God but the inferiority complex of a chubby nerd with pimples in gym class but no other emotional qualities he seems to display. His slaves all have loyalty ingrained in their DNA but he had to double down and give them mental trauma and hatred to keep em kissing his toes for good. Might be resolved because every problem in this story is resolved by the law of convenience. The story also feels like a long con since his only goal is to be the strongest. No friends. everyone and thing is a tool, one step made is a scheme. Just an MC and a bunch of NPCs in a real world he doesn't take real. it gets a bit stale but the quality of the grammar and indepth knowledge the author gives is enjoyable to read. Its a great generic story and the best overlord Fanfic I've read despite how my review may be taken.
I feel like the rating is..... Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background
This fanfic is better than i thought the beginning chapters were pretty boring, but in the later chapters it's very interesting and most of all! The new world Arc has started in this one! Definitely an achivement!You are a hero for this one.
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This is bad ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
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An overall amazing overlord fan fiction. My only complain is that Author-san easily scraps his original plans for the story when some people comment on it and say that they don't like it. In the end, you can't please everyone, athough taking suggestions isn't inherently bad, you don't have to change your entire story just because someone complained about it. And although I'm personally pleased that no other supreme being will transfer to the new world with the MC, I'm only warning the author of this because spreading yourself too thin and trying to please everyone may ruin the story
It's a shame that the Author gave up on the work. If he waited a little longer, I think it would work out really well, because the fanfic is certainly very good. I hope that one day the Author comes back and continues writing the fanfic, because it has a lot of future, it just needs a little perseverance.