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Very good and I highly recommend it I also like how the author manages the intentions between the characters. I look forward to seeing how the rest of the plot unfolds.
Revelar spoiler
This fanfic is a solid 4. I was one of those who read the version before this one where Kotaro, the MC was more serious and reasonable, with the knowledge of Hamon from the beginning. With the reinvention of this version we see a reason where the MC is taken by his aunt, the matchmaker, to meet Mitsuri Kanjori, whom he ends up marrying. After a few days of newlyweds, this family suffers at the hands of a demon and is taken to join the demon hunters. With a small spoiler and many few words, this summarizes the first 30 chapters. I recommend reading the others (53 at the time this review is published)
Revelar spoiler
This is one of my favorite novel so far I always eager wait for future chapters and I wonder if the MC will awaken a stand well I'm very excited for future chapters
I like this fanfic so far! One thing that makes me continue my reading is romance and slice-of-life moments! They're totally the best! That's definitely 5 stars from me!
the book is doing great so far, the MC is not the usual Webnovel kind of cold unfeeling edgelord, MC is happily married from the early chapters, so it remove the headache of readers fighting for love interest later, and made them accepting of his relationship, which is unique and is almost never done before, Mitsuri is a good choice for a wife, and Hamon is a great cheat for Demon Slayer, not broken enough to destroy world or even cities, but hella useful against demons, plus it can be used for healing, something the demon slayers sorely needs.
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I think that physically Uzui is the second strongest, just remember that Mitsure had the hunter's mark activated when he ripped off Muzan's arms, and Uzui never activated the mark
This is good. Not many making a character that having [Hamon] in their story. Though in recent update you stated that you thinking of adding [Stand] for MC. I'm giving my opinion, that you should not do so. [Hamon] is already powerful enough, and does not forget that MC is not attuned with this power yet. So just imagine if you also added [Stand] in the equation, that is going to hassle your mind.
Very good story. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
es una historia muy melosa hasta ahorita, me encanta y me gusta como se está desarrollando
Is this story getting rewritten..... Well author you better write it good cause demon slayer has been a hot topic for a while....
Adorei é muito fofo o relacionamento deles eu só peço que o AUTOR volte A POSTAR LOGO CARALHO
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It's a great Demon Slayer fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like the idea that MC be a teacher at the start, and then become a demon slayer after married to support Mitsuri.. I also like his power.. Hamon is strong and interesting power.. I hope MC/Kotaro can develop it to fight demon easily in the future.. The minus point in this story is MC/Kotaro tell his wife/Mitsuri about his reincarnation.. I agree that as husband and wife he can share his secrets.. He can tell everything except that, it should be a secret.. But overall I love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍
Tu sigue bro no te preocupes con el tiempo bas a mejorar no te desanimes de muchas historias que e leído esta esta tiene una buena opinión para mi espero siguiente cap 😊
Hello, how are you? Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters. Come on. More chapters. Come on. More chapters
I don't really know what to say I gave it a try bcz it was fun but now it's a hassle no update in 2 months so out of curiosity i read author different storys and just like this story all of them are great but after some chapters thers no regular update and it frustrates me quite a bit well if i have to say one thing about this story except updating stability it's a masterpiece believe me it' so good even now i am waiting for new update of this story pls Author-san do regular updates[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] and here's no spoiler too int his comment
I like the plot, I don't mind the grammatical errors, it just improves the time of the updates [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Gan aku gak tau apa yang kalian benci dari penulis ini. Kita semua berkembang pada waktunya oke. Tidak mungkin kita langsung dewasa dengan omong kosong lainnya. Terserah si MC dan penulis untuk menceritakan ceritanya. Kita hanya penonton dan pemberi saran plus kritik.
Very bad grammar and his/her mistakes. Rushed story and incomprehensible sentences. Author probably needs to proofread it more or just get a grammar correction program
Filled with grammatical errors, and while the romance is cute, he breaks the number one rule of reincarnators. And not only does he tell her that he has memories of his past life and a modern world, he even explains that demon slayer was a fictional story and she was a character in it and all of that. For no reason. Nobody was suspicious of him, it wasn’t revealed accidentally, he just randomly broke the golden rule for no reason.
Good! I've met very few demon slayer fanfic, and this is the most interesting in my opinion The story is not only centered on action, but also romance, which gives it a plus. I hope, the author won't be discouraged and will update the next chapter as soon as possible![img=recommend]
i like this kinds of fanfics it gives me a break from the shonen ones that heavily focus on only getting the mc stronger and nothing else it would be great if other people made variation of this one in other fanfics maybe i will do it if nobody does tho it will take a lot since this kind of fanfics need a lot studying to get the backstory right
Very good and I highly recommend it I also like how the author manages the intentions between the characters. I look forward to seeing how the rest of the plot unfolds.
Revelar spoiler This fanfic is a solid 4. I was one of those who read the version before this one where Kotaro, the MC was more serious and reasonable, with the knowledge of Hamon from the beginning. With the reinvention of this version we see a reason where the MC is taken by his aunt, the matchmaker, to meet Mitsuri Kanjori, whom he ends up marrying. After a few days of newlyweds, this family suffers at the hands of a demon and is taken to join the demon hunters. With a small spoiler and many few words, this summarizes the first 30 chapters. I recommend reading the others (53 at the time this review is published)
Revelar spoiler This is one of my favorite novel so far I always eager wait for future chapters and I wonder if the MC will awaken a stand well I'm very excited for future chapters
I like this fanfic so far! One thing that makes me continue my reading is romance and slice-of-life moments! They're totally the best! That's definitely 5 stars from me!
the book is doing great so far, the MC is not the usual Webnovel kind of cold unfeeling edgelord, MC is happily married from the early chapters, so it remove the headache of readers fighting for love interest later, and made them accepting of his relationship, which is unique and is almost never done before, Mitsuri is a good choice for a wife, and Hamon is a great cheat for Demon Slayer, not broken enough to destroy world or even cities, but hella useful against demons, plus it can be used for healing, something the demon slayers sorely needs.
[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]
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I think that physically Uzui is the second strongest, just remember that Mitsure had the hunter's mark activated when he ripped off Muzan's arms, and Uzui never activated the mark
This is good. Not many making a character that having [Hamon] in their story. Though in recent update you stated that you thinking of adding [Stand] for MC. I'm giving my opinion, that you should not do so. [Hamon] is already powerful enough, and does not forget that MC is not attuned with this power yet. So just imagine if you also added [Stand] in the equation, that is going to hassle your mind.
Very good story. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
es una historia muy melosa hasta ahorita, me encanta y me gusta como se está desarrollando
Is this story getting rewritten..... Well author you better write it good cause demon slayer has been a hot topic for a while....
Adorei é muito fofo o relacionamento deles eu só peço que o AUTOR volte A POSTAR LOGO CARALHO
Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
It's a great Demon Slayer fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like the idea that MC be a teacher at the start, and then become a demon slayer after married to support Mitsuri.. I also like his power.. Hamon is strong and interesting power.. I hope MC/Kotaro can develop it to fight demon easily in the future.. The minus point in this story is MC/Kotaro tell his wife/Mitsuri about his reincarnation.. I agree that as husband and wife he can share his secrets.. He can tell everything except that, it should be a secret.. But overall I love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍
Tu sigue bro no te preocupes con el tiempo bas a mejorar no te desanimes de muchas historias que e leído esta esta tiene una buena opinión para mi espero siguiente cap 😊
Hello, how are you? Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters. Come on. More chapters. Come on. More chapters
I don't really know what to say I gave it a try bcz it was fun but now it's a hassle no update in 2 months so out of curiosity i read author different storys and just like this story all of them are great but after some chapters thers no regular update and it frustrates me quite a bit well if i have to say one thing about this story except updating stability it's a masterpiece believe me it' so good even now i am waiting for new update of this story pls Author-san do regular updates[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] and here's no spoiler too int his comment
I like the plot, I don't mind the grammatical errors, it just improves the time of the updates [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Gan aku gak tau apa yang kalian benci dari penulis ini. Kita semua berkembang pada waktunya oke. Tidak mungkin kita langsung dewasa dengan omong kosong lainnya. Terserah si MC dan penulis untuk menceritakan ceritanya. Kita hanya penonton dan pemberi saran plus kritik.
Very bad grammar and his/her mistakes. Rushed story and incomprehensible sentences. Author probably needs to proofread it more or just get a grammar correction program
Filled with grammatical errors, and while the romance is cute, he breaks the number one rule of reincarnators. And not only does he tell her that he has memories of his past life and a modern world, he even explains that demon slayer was a fictional story and she was a character in it and all of that. For no reason. Nobody was suspicious of him, it wasn’t revealed accidentally, he just randomly broke the golden rule for no reason.
Good! I've met very few demon slayer fanfic, and this is the most interesting in my opinion The story is not only centered on action, but also romance, which gives it a plus. I hope, the author won't be discouraged and will update the next chapter as soon as possible![img=recommend]
i like this kinds of fanfics it gives me a break from the shonen ones that heavily focus on only getting the mc stronger and nothing else it would be great if other people made variation of this one in other fanfics maybe i will do it if nobody does tho it will take a lot since this kind of fanfics need a lot studying to get the backstory right