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It is a fantastic story till now the quality's of the chapters are great I also like how author explains, interaction between the character and tier motivation (sauce greatest estate developers)
Man, the writing in webnovels is dreadful, and I'm sick of this garbage. The fact that this book was written by a third-grader is one of its strengths.
Overall, fairly fun and wholesome. A few writing decisions that struck me as odd, but it was more preference than legitimate issues. It might not be for everyone methinks, but at least give it a shot. You may just find yourself entertained. Then again, I'm Trash, my taste is Trash, and you'll love it or hate it regardless of what I say. Now to find some Mitsuri sauce. Brb.
To good to be true, shame to be honest. If you guys prefer this type of plot/stories then go ahead, it's good. I won't tell you guys why i give it a low rating because i want you guys to read it yourself. All in all its a good ff, the idea is there no doubt about it but the prosecution(is this the correct word to use here?) is bad. But i kinda get it from the point of view of the author.
Without perverted gods, without systems, without powers that break established logic, with one of the best women in the trade and one of the best powers that many ignore. Dude, you put it all together for a masterpiece. I don't care about the mistakes you made.
The idea is innovative, fresh and very good. Still, the execution is pretty weak, especially the part where he says he's from another world. 😪😪 Still, your story has Hammon and mitsuri in it, so take your 5 stars (when you finish the story, a remaster would be nice)
The writing quality of the story is good, although there are some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars ⭐. In terms of story development, there is too much romance. While I understand that it falls under the slice-of-life genre, since the author included an action tag, there should be a balance between romance and action. As it stands, the excessive romance makes it boring for me, so I would rate it 3 stars ⭐. The characters are well-designed, especially the main character (MC). He is calm, smart, and respected. However, there are instances where he goes overboard with his romance/love for Mitsuri. For example, when he says, "I don't want other people to see your smile," it comes across as possessive. Despite this, I still like the characters, so I would rate it 4 stars ⭐. The world background is well-developed, and the author has put effort into providing detailed descriptions. I would rate it 5 stars ⭐. Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5 stars) Regarding the updating stability, it should be noted that the updates for this fanfic are slow. However, considering that it is a fanfiction and provided to readers for free, I would still give it a 5-star rating. The author's efforts and dedication to continuing the story despite the slow updates deserve appreciation. In summary, I enjoy the story overall, but the heavy focus on slice-of-life elements and excessive romance make it boring for me at times. The pacing can also be inconsistent, with moments of slow and fast pace. Since it's only 13 chapters long, I will reserve my final judgment until it reaches 30 chapters, at which point I will provide another review.
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It's a very good work I like it very much do read it. Also I just got an idea for a demon slayer ff where yoriichi gets reincarnated in the future around tanjiro's age or the other hashira's age do recommend if there are any ff's similar to this.
It started great but he tells Mitsuri about his reincarnation... Cause we are spouses so there will be no secret and we can look how Xavier went insane cause he read Deadpool's memories
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the story is what you expect just pure fluff my only grip is the updates stability .
The writing quality is exceptional although the way author could write be better. Its really hard to tell if there are any grammar mistakes and the author has a decent understanding of character personalities
Really amazing story set in the demon slayer world ☺️☺️ plus it starts of simple and peaceful about a character yearning for a love life; and what do you know, it came in the form of a lovely, sweet, cute, beautiful, and amazing woman that is mitsuri kanroji😏😏
I like the concept but the execution left much to be desired, there's a lot of grammatical errors here and there, the characters are 2 dimensional, the world building is just plain bad.
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is was good and all in the previous chapter then suddenly the mc said a taboo of all reincarnator telling their past life
Sur une échelle de 1 à 10 on est 9 au niveau du cringe 😬 , relation forcée trop robotique. Tomber amoureux en 1 chapitre, c'est d'un ridicule à en faire rougir les clowns. Sans compter le développement inexistant de personnage, le passé du protagoniste inconnu en une dizaine de chapitres alors que 5 lignes d'intro auraient suffit au début, l'apparence du protagoniste inconnue aussi on sait juste qu'il est basique avec une présence chaleureuse. Et la manière dont il parle de la femme est écoeurante, on dirait un contrôle maniac chinois des nombreux MTL. En bref passez votre chemin et ne tombez pas dans le panneau des autres review elles sont Fake pour la plupart.
This is the only novel/fanfic that made me feel warm inside 😁👌so please keep updating at your own pase
Hey, no worries if the next episode takes a bit longer to drop. I'm really digging the protagonist's story and concept, so it's all good. Let's give the author some love and encourage to keep writing more awesome stories like this.
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Bro finally.. someone made a mc that has a Hamon... hamon Is so underrated (in my opinion)
the novel starts really nice....... please dont make him op all of a sudden, make the couple of same strength and kind of be close like how u have been writing now
It’s Ight. An ok read if you don’t mind grammar that looks like it was written by a 3rd grader. Romance feels forced and rushed.
It is a fantastic story till now the quality's of the chapters are great I also like how author explains, interaction between the character and tier motivation (sauce greatest estate developers)
Man, the writing in webnovels is dreadful, and I'm sick of this garbage. The fact that this book was written by a third-grader is one of its strengths.
Overall, fairly fun and wholesome. A few writing decisions that struck me as odd, but it was more preference than legitimate issues. It might not be for everyone methinks, but at least give it a shot. You may just find yourself entertained. Then again, I'm Trash, my taste is Trash, and you'll love it or hate it regardless of what I say. Now to find some Mitsuri sauce. Brb.
To good to be true, shame to be honest. If you guys prefer this type of plot/stories then go ahead, it's good. I won't tell you guys why i give it a low rating because i want you guys to read it yourself. All in all its a good ff, the idea is there no doubt about it but the prosecution(is this the correct word to use here?) is bad. But i kinda get it from the point of view of the author.
Without perverted gods, without systems, without powers that break established logic, with one of the best women in the trade and one of the best powers that many ignore. Dude, you put it all together for a masterpiece. I don't care about the mistakes you made.
The idea is innovative, fresh and very good. Still, the execution is pretty weak, especially the part where he says he's from another world. 😪😪 Still, your story has Hammon and mitsuri in it, so take your 5 stars (when you finish the story, a remaster would be nice)
The writing quality of the story is good, although there are some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars ⭐. In terms of story development, there is too much romance. While I understand that it falls under the slice-of-life genre, since the author included an action tag, there should be a balance between romance and action. As it stands, the excessive romance makes it boring for me, so I would rate it 3 stars ⭐. The characters are well-designed, especially the main character (MC). He is calm, smart, and respected. However, there are instances where he goes overboard with his romance/love for Mitsuri. For example, when he says, "I don't want other people to see your smile," it comes across as possessive. Despite this, I still like the characters, so I would rate it 4 stars ⭐. The world background is well-developed, and the author has put effort into providing detailed descriptions. I would rate it 5 stars ⭐. Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5 stars) Regarding the updating stability, it should be noted that the updates for this fanfic are slow. However, considering that it is a fanfiction and provided to readers for free, I would still give it a 5-star rating. The author's efforts and dedication to continuing the story despite the slow updates deserve appreciation. In summary, I enjoy the story overall, but the heavy focus on slice-of-life elements and excessive romance make it boring for me at times. The pacing can also be inconsistent, with moments of slow and fast pace. Since it's only 13 chapters long, I will reserve my final judgment until it reaches 30 chapters, at which point I will provide another review.
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It's a very good work I like it very much do read it. Also I just got an idea for a demon slayer ff where yoriichi gets reincarnated in the future around tanjiro's age or the other hashira's age do recommend if there are any ff's similar to this.
It started great but he tells Mitsuri about his reincarnation... Cause we are spouses so there will be no secret and we can look how Xavier went insane cause he read Deadpool's memories
Revelar spoiler the story is what you expect just pure fluff my only grip is the updates stability .
The writing quality is exceptional although the way author could write be better. Its really hard to tell if there are any grammar mistakes and the author has a decent understanding of character personalities
Really amazing story set in the demon slayer world ☺️☺️ plus it starts of simple and peaceful about a character yearning for a love life; and what do you know, it came in the form of a lovely, sweet, cute, beautiful, and amazing woman that is mitsuri kanroji😏😏
I like the concept but the execution left much to be desired, there's a lot of grammatical errors here and there, the characters are 2 dimensional, the world building is just plain bad.
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is was good and all in the previous chapter then suddenly the mc said a taboo of all reincarnator telling their past life
Sur une échelle de 1 à 10 on est 9 au niveau du cringe 😬 , relation forcée trop robotique. Tomber amoureux en 1 chapitre, c'est d'un ridicule à en faire rougir les clowns. Sans compter le développement inexistant de personnage, le passé du protagoniste inconnu en une dizaine de chapitres alors que 5 lignes d'intro auraient suffit au début, l'apparence du protagoniste inconnue aussi on sait juste qu'il est basique avec une présence chaleureuse. Et la manière dont il parle de la femme est écoeurante, on dirait un contrôle maniac chinois des nombreux MTL. En bref passez votre chemin et ne tombez pas dans le panneau des autres review elles sont Fake pour la plupart.
This is the only novel/fanfic that made me feel warm inside 😁👌so please keep updating at your own pase
Hey, no worries if the next episode takes a bit longer to drop. I'm really digging the protagonist's story and concept, so it's all good. Let's give the author some love and encourage to keep writing more awesome stories like this.
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Bro finally.. someone made a mc that has a Hamon... hamon Is so underrated (in my opinion)
the novel starts really nice....... please dont make him op all of a sudden, make the couple of same strength and kind of be close like how u have been writing now
It’s Ight. An ok read if you don’t mind grammar that looks like it was written by a 3rd grader. Romance feels forced and rushed.