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Vale, este es, con diferencia, la mejor historia que he leido de DC+Bleach, (he leido otras 2) me gusta el personaje, tiene a la MEJOR WAIFU de DC (Raven) como pareja del MC. Me encanto los poderes que tuvo e incluso la personalidad de su Zanpakuto es graciosa y creible, teniendo en cuenta lo que representa. El final me parece muy abierto pero espero la secuela o como sera el futuro en esta historia. En definitiva: "Me atrapaste, si es Literatura" . . . PD: Por como lo pinta en la historia, siento que el Autor tiene un problema personal u odio hacia el personaje de BATMAN, no me arruino la historia o algo asi, solo me parecio curioso.
Revelar spoiler
>Saw Nagoriyuki, >clicked >read that synopsis >realize mc is not Nago >profound sadness
at first i dropped this bcos it got boring but then I saw it randomly while scrolling n decided to give it a try once more n boy I'm not regretting♥️♥️♥️ i really came to love the characters especially last shiva😏
Yoh Author 👋🏾 why'd you stop updating this book man,,,I need new chapters come on please 😭
The story is good and the writing quality is amazing. What is dont like is that ni matter how much training MC does and how much powerful he gets, he doesnt feel that powerful when it comes to real fight even when against humans and loose control and needs rescuing every time so far. I understand good challenges for character growth but that shouldnt happen every time he fights.
the story is all over the place. it's just like some Chinese novels kill one enemy another one appears and power scaling is too bad, MC went from almost being killed by Croc to creating a universe by himself in a really short time the author was creating villains for MC forcefully like MC has so much power that almost no one can match then the author gives a lantern ring to Batman, creating a hollow vandal savage and so on it's too bad
La historia es muy buena, no voy a mentir, está bien escrita, tiene un buen mc, podría decir que es bastante genial, pero se pasa de largo con las tragedia, primera mata a Raven, sin duda el primer y único amigo del mc después de la reencarnacion, y luego se la pasa lanzando al mc a una tragedia tras otra, la pobre liga fue asesinada un par de veces, y amigo y enemigos mueren a cada segundo, el desarrollo de personaje estuvo bien al inicio, pero cuando estás en el capítulo 300 y el desarrollo de personaje sigue, ya terminas cansado, en ese punto deberían ser batallas normales contra enemigos normales, no matar a todos los amigos del mc otra vez!! Bueno, como dije muy buena historia,aunque no es lo que buscaba, buscaba un rato divertido, y me fui con un trauma, así que me caigo de esta historia, bye.
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I read until chapter 152, and man after chapter 70, everything went downhill, strong enemies, the mc also never trains '-', and there's the issue of drama too, he could have eliminated the obstacles a long time ago, but he didn't do it because of the author, worst dc and bleach fanfic....
One of the fics out there and the perfect example of a fic that brings powers of other universes into other universes
The start was great, amazing even, yet it all fell as the story progressed, the mc become a full-fledged anime like character by 150 chapters...
Its trash pain and simple characters dont act like themselves and you litterly cant undertand anything in the beginning... . . . . . .. .. . . . . . .. . .. . .. . .. . . . .. . . .. .
This fic has too many negative reviews, I mean at first I get it since in the beginning i myself wasn't the biggest fan of the story but it gets better. The story, power scaling and the MC all improved to the point where I would consider this as one of the best DC fics I have ever read.
power levels don't make sense... sometimes he's bulletproof, sometimes he's not. writing is alright. mc's kinda stupid and impulsive, he gets better but only to become worse again when the plot demands it.
loves the story but really the nerfs man. The nerfs are insane. You'll have to power through and see the big picture to like it.
God that was plain bad. With how he lived in the past, you expect him to be more grown up and all that but when he arrived in DC, he turned up different. You also tend to be very vague a lot of times, expecting readers to just go with it. The character peovression also suffers. Just a disappointment.
Nice fanfic! Can you try to do a fanfic where MC has powers from Naruto, and implement that in a world of your choosing? Anyways, good luck with the story!
Mc always loses when Batman shows up. No matter how much more powerful he is than Batman......................................................
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Giving this 5 stars before reading just because of the cool story concept. The alternative synopsis was better than the main one in my opinion. I may come back later to change my review up, but I have high hopes for this one.
i loved it till you killed off like 30 characters with no character development, especially raven(there was character development when raven died but she was my favorite character)
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Im only on the fifth chapter but I think this could be a very good carton,movie or anime
I've read all the chapters and apart from the slow pace .I'll say this is one of a kind
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Even as someone who has never watched bleach i am still able to enjoy this fic. The writing quality in this fic is pretty good and it has an interesting plot. The story progression and character development were a bit too slow in the beginning but the story gets better as you read. So overall a pretty good story and would recommend even to people who haven't watched bleach.
At first I did not understand anything at all, but after Doctor Fate, the story revived and became interesting to read.
The only thing good about this book is the stability of its updates and the fact that it was completed. Everything else is a dumpster fire, now before you delete this please read further as I explain myself. Writing: Like many had stated, the first chapter was great, it was interesting and made me want to read more but after that? Well it was just a confusing mix of random scenes, POV's and the MC being unconscious. It changes later but the chaotic writing style trying to be mysterious still continues. Heck, I even wonder at times whether the Author is an agent of chaos or not. I would like to recommend the author to try and understand what "Show don't tell" means. This read like the disjointed story telling of a ten year old child explaining what happened in an episode of Young Justice to his friends. The only difference is that the friend (We the readers) have no context what the hell is being explained. All we get is some random nonsense, where characters appear out of nowhere just because. You are writing a fiction that is going to be READ not a script. Focus on consistency, ground your perspectives and story telling. You can let other things happen in the background, then do a flashback in the next chapter leading to the event of the previous chapter. Example: Take the scene in Fate/Strange fake, where Gilgamesh and Enkidu meet. Not the animated version but the book version, read it, that is one textbook method of "Show not tell"... not whatever was done here was. Story Development: I was able to follow the story, being numb to brain rot at this point, I was able to make out a story based on my own understanding of the DC universe and the plethora of comics I've read and fanfiction out there. But that is the problem in this fanfic, readers not only need to have a deep understanding of DC, they also need to have experience reading fanfiction and be numb to confusing writing just to understand what the hell was going on. TLDR: IT is not friendly to people who want to read something to pass time and enjoy a brain dead fanfiction. Brain dead fics are written with actually thought to ensure easy internalization and visualization. This is just a textbook example of lazy writing. Character Design: Getting passed the horrendous confusion in story telling, all the characters turn out bland. Little character development occurs masked by the chaotic writing. World Background: Yeah, unless you're used to visualizing your own world, this story does little to give you even hints of the world. Things just happen, somewhere, somehow and readers are FORCED to focus on interactions that came up out of nowhere as- "that's all there is". There is no build-up which would be main source of worldbuilding and everything just directly goes from one climax to another. Overall: I recommend the author to go through a basic writing course or review it if he already took one. Please review the narrative structure, understand what Exposition, rising action, climax, falling action and resolution means. If you do this you could quickly apply it to your chapters, storyboarding and planning. I could see potential in the fact that you were able to complete this book so I do hope you improve your writing.
Vale, este es, con diferencia, la mejor historia que he leido de DC+Bleach, (he leido otras 2) me gusta el personaje, tiene a la MEJOR WAIFU de DC (Raven) como pareja del MC. Me encanto los poderes que tuvo e incluso la personalidad de su Zanpakuto es graciosa y creible, teniendo en cuenta lo que representa. El final me parece muy abierto pero espero la secuela o como sera el futuro en esta historia. En definitiva: "Me atrapaste, si es Literatura" . . . PD: Por como lo pinta en la historia, siento que el Autor tiene un problema personal u odio hacia el personaje de BATMAN, no me arruino la historia o algo asi, solo me parecio curioso.
Revelar spoiler >Saw Nagoriyuki, >clicked >read that synopsis >realize mc is not Nago >profound sadness
at first i dropped this bcos it got boring but then I saw it randomly while scrolling n decided to give it a try once more n boy I'm not regretting♥️♥️♥️ i really came to love the characters especially last shiva😏
Yoh Author 👋🏾 why'd you stop updating this book man,,,I need new chapters come on please 😭
The story is good and the writing quality is amazing. What is dont like is that ni matter how much training MC does and how much powerful he gets, he doesnt feel that powerful when it comes to real fight even when against humans and loose control and needs rescuing every time so far. I understand good challenges for character growth but that shouldnt happen every time he fights.
the story is all over the place. it's just like some Chinese novels kill one enemy another one appears and power scaling is too bad, MC went from almost being killed by Croc to creating a universe by himself in a really short time the author was creating villains for MC forcefully like MC has so much power that almost no one can match then the author gives a lantern ring to Batman, creating a hollow vandal savage and so on it's too bad
La historia es muy buena, no voy a mentir, está bien escrita, tiene un buen mc, podría decir que es bastante genial, pero se pasa de largo con las tragedia, primera mata a Raven, sin duda el primer y único amigo del mc después de la reencarnacion, y luego se la pasa lanzando al mc a una tragedia tras otra, la pobre liga fue asesinada un par de veces, y amigo y enemigos mueren a cada segundo, el desarrollo de personaje estuvo bien al inicio, pero cuando estás en el capítulo 300 y el desarrollo de personaje sigue, ya terminas cansado, en ese punto deberían ser batallas normales contra enemigos normales, no matar a todos los amigos del mc otra vez!! Bueno, como dije muy buena historia,aunque no es lo que buscaba, buscaba un rato divertido, y me fui con un trauma, así que me caigo de esta historia, bye.
Revelar spoiler I read until chapter 152, and man after chapter 70, everything went downhill, strong enemies, the mc also never trains '-', and there's the issue of drama too, he could have eliminated the obstacles a long time ago, but he didn't do it because of the author, worst dc and bleach fanfic....
One of the fics out there and the perfect example of a fic that brings powers of other universes into other universes
The start was great, amazing even, yet it all fell as the story progressed, the mc become a full-fledged anime like character by 150 chapters...
Its trash pain and simple characters dont act like themselves and you litterly cant undertand anything in the beginning... . . . . . .. .. . . . . . .. . .. . .. . .. . . . .. . . .. .
This fic has too many negative reviews, I mean at first I get it since in the beginning i myself wasn't the biggest fan of the story but it gets better. The story, power scaling and the MC all improved to the point where I would consider this as one of the best DC fics I have ever read.
power levels don't make sense... sometimes he's bulletproof, sometimes he's not. writing is alright. mc's kinda stupid and impulsive, he gets better but only to become worse again when the plot demands it.
loves the story but really the nerfs man. The nerfs are insane. You'll have to power through and see the big picture to like it.
God that was plain bad. With how he lived in the past, you expect him to be more grown up and all that but when he arrived in DC, he turned up different. You also tend to be very vague a lot of times, expecting readers to just go with it. The character peovression also suffers. Just a disappointment.
Nice fanfic! Can you try to do a fanfic where MC has powers from Naruto, and implement that in a world of your choosing? Anyways, good luck with the story!
Mc always loses when Batman shows up. No matter how much more powerful he is than Batman......................................................
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Giving this 5 stars before reading just because of the cool story concept. The alternative synopsis was better than the main one in my opinion. I may come back later to change my review up, but I have high hopes for this one.
i loved it till you killed off like 30 characters with no character development, especially raven(there was character development when raven died but she was my favorite character)
Revelar spoiler Im only on the fifth chapter but I think this could be a very good carton,movie or anime
I've read all the chapters and apart from the slow pace .I'll say this is one of a kind
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Even as someone who has never watched bleach i am still able to enjoy this fic. The writing quality in this fic is pretty good and it has an interesting plot. The story progression and character development were a bit too slow in the beginning but the story gets better as you read. So overall a pretty good story and would recommend even to people who haven't watched bleach.
At first I did not understand anything at all, but after Doctor Fate, the story revived and became interesting to read.
The only thing good about this book is the stability of its updates and the fact that it was completed. Everything else is a dumpster fire, now before you delete this please read further as I explain myself. Writing: Like many had stated, the first chapter was great, it was interesting and made me want to read more but after that? Well it was just a confusing mix of random scenes, POV's and the MC being unconscious. It changes later but the chaotic writing style trying to be mysterious still continues. Heck, I even wonder at times whether the Author is an agent of chaos or not. I would like to recommend the author to try and understand what "Show don't tell" means. This read like the disjointed story telling of a ten year old child explaining what happened in an episode of Young Justice to his friends. The only difference is that the friend (We the readers) have no context what the hell is being explained. All we get is some random nonsense, where characters appear out of nowhere just because. You are writing a fiction that is going to be READ not a script. Focus on consistency, ground your perspectives and story telling. You can let other things happen in the background, then do a flashback in the next chapter leading to the event of the previous chapter. Example: Take the scene in Fate/Strange fake, where Gilgamesh and Enkidu meet. Not the animated version but the book version, read it, that is one textbook method of "Show not tell"... not whatever was done here was. Story Development: I was able to follow the story, being numb to brain rot at this point, I was able to make out a story based on my own understanding of the DC universe and the plethora of comics I've read and fanfiction out there. But that is the problem in this fanfic, readers not only need to have a deep understanding of DC, they also need to have experience reading fanfiction and be numb to confusing writing just to understand what the hell was going on. TLDR: IT is not friendly to people who want to read something to pass time and enjoy a brain dead fanfiction. Brain dead fics are written with actually thought to ensure easy internalization and visualization. This is just a textbook example of lazy writing. Character Design: Getting passed the horrendous confusion in story telling, all the characters turn out bland. Little character development occurs masked by the chaotic writing. World Background: Yeah, unless you're used to visualizing your own world, this story does little to give you even hints of the world. Things just happen, somewhere, somehow and readers are FORCED to focus on interactions that came up out of nowhere as- "that's all there is". There is no build-up which would be main source of worldbuilding and everything just directly goes from one climax to another. Overall: I recommend the author to go through a basic writing course or review it if he already took one. Please review the narrative structure, understand what Exposition, rising action, climax, falling action and resolution means. If you do this you could quickly apply it to your chapters, storyboarding and planning. I could see potential in the fact that you were able to complete this book so I do hope you improve your writing.