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I give you all the stars and I only bother translating it because you are the only crazy person who is not afraid of the demand of the big N
Love any botw fan fic. I didn’t like how he gets killed by goblin and that the hatred for goblin, doesn’t have development. Second powers and ability should be explained.
Revelar spoilerEs un muy buen fanfic, realmente lo recomiendo, lo unico que me molesto un poquito, es que al principio no puede comunicarse con las personas de otro mundo. Si, tiene sentido que no hable su idioma, aún asi me parecio engorroso. Actualmente eso esta solucionado asi que los tiempos oscuros son cosas del pasado.
I almost never see any good fics, but this amazing. Though link did act a bit weird in SL world but wow, i overall love how this was made.
The writing could use some fixing bit overall you can understand it, for the story development its getting there as the story still hasn't picked up yet so looking forward to it.
me encanto!. el titulo es atrayente, la conviccion del personaje me gusta y su desarrollo con los capitulos que llevo leidos me enxantaron y encima se usa una rencarnacion no muy utilizada lo que le da un contexto muy bueno para poder desarrollae
So far (chapter 16) so good, i like the writing its actually normal and i have seen only 2 errors, the story is progressing nicely and the mc does not get op instantly. Although for the gate rune author should make it so that different worlds get different doors example: one door leads to hyrule the other is random just so that the mc gains access to small worlds like the original link or majoras mask
The story and system are interesting along with the setup of how we can expect the plot to progress in the future. Still, the author makes repeated grammatical errors and keeps on changing up the gender pronouns of the character (for example our MC who has been introduced as a male often is referred to as 'her'). I see great potential for this but I hope you use a simple spelling and grammar check. It is available in most apps like MS Word, Pages, and Google Docs, or better yet, use the help of Grammarly to point out mistakes to fix. All the apps mentioned are free but don't relly on them too much as you still need to proof read it in case the words get completely changed.
I absolutly love this story to it's deepest parts. I hope you continue making more chapters and not stop on this story, Author. This is a rare gem between the countless other garbage copies of eachother out there.
I guess new readers will find just the mere idea of the MC interacting with all those characters so awesome that they don't notice how garbage this story actually is. This is a story without a story. The MC basically appears before all kinds of different awesome MCs from different universes only to show off a little bit but in the end change nothing and have no impact on anything. The MC himself doesn't have a story and is just all around the 3rd wheel in any situation he appears in.
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I give you all the stars and I only bother translating it because you are the only crazy person who is not afraid of the demand of the big N
Love any botw fan fic. I didn’t like how he gets killed by goblin and that the hatred for goblin, doesn’t have development. Second powers and ability should be explained.
Revelar spoilerEs un muy buen fanfic, realmente lo recomiendo, lo unico que me molesto un poquito, es que al principio no puede comunicarse con las personas de otro mundo. Si, tiene sentido que no hable su idioma, aún asi me parecio engorroso. Actualmente eso esta solucionado asi que los tiempos oscuros son cosas del pasado.
I almost never see any good fics, but this amazing. Though link did act a bit weird in SL world but wow, i overall love how this was made.
The writing could use some fixing bit overall you can understand it, for the story development its getting there as the story still hasn't picked up yet so looking forward to it.
me encanto!. el titulo es atrayente, la conviccion del personaje me gusta y su desarrollo con los capitulos que llevo leidos me enxantaron y encima se usa una rencarnacion no muy utilizada lo que le da un contexto muy bueno para poder desarrollae
So far (chapter 16) so good, i like the writing its actually normal and i have seen only 2 errors, the story is progressing nicely and the mc does not get op instantly. Although for the gate rune author should make it so that different worlds get different doors example: one door leads to hyrule the other is random just so that the mc gains access to small worlds like the original link or majoras mask
The story and system are interesting along with the setup of how we can expect the plot to progress in the future. Still, the author makes repeated grammatical errors and keeps on changing up the gender pronouns of the character (for example our MC who has been introduced as a male often is referred to as 'her'). I see great potential for this but I hope you use a simple spelling and grammar check. It is available in most apps like MS Word, Pages, and Google Docs, or better yet, use the help of Grammarly to point out mistakes to fix. All the apps mentioned are free but don't relly on them too much as you still need to proof read it in case the words get completely changed.
I absolutly love this story to it's deepest parts. I hope you continue making more chapters and not stop on this story, Author. This is a rare gem between the countless other garbage copies of eachother out there.
I guess new readers will find just the mere idea of the MC interacting with all those characters so awesome that they don't notice how garbage this story actually is. This is a story without a story. The MC basically appears before all kinds of different awesome MCs from different universes only to show off a little bit but in the end change nothing and have no impact on anything. The MC himself doesn't have a story and is just all around the 3rd wheel in any situation he appears in.