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Why you gotta make this a harem my guy. I saw it coming but it still hurts… other than it’s pretty good, not great but a fine popcorn read
Asian MC. Copy and pasted. MC idiot. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
This FF is pretty mediocre, the MC has little to no presence changing almost none of the main story. His quick is stagnant and constantly is outdone yet everyone keeps saying he's better than most pro heroes. Honestly I'd rather just go read MHA on its own because this FF just feels like bloat that adds literally nothing of interest.
Too much nerfing... If you don't want him too be too strong too fast, just choose another quirk. And the sister thing......no words.
Bem, lá vai algumas opiniões. Como leitor, é normal perceber que as coisas possuem uma certa linha a seguir, ainda mais no gênero fanfiction. MAS, tem coisas que se repetem, repetem, repetem... ATÉ DEMAIS! Como por exemplo, cada vez que algum personagem é mencionado, NÃO é necessário O NOME COMPLETO da criatura! TODOS sabem quem os referidos São! Todos conhecem o personagem, até melhor que eles mesmos! (bem, a maioria suponho). Repetir o nome completo é o cúmulo da irritação, ainda mais em uma história bem escrita. Sim, É BEM ESCRITA, e olha que sou crítico ao máximo por causa do sistema e harém (tags que Odeio) mas em determinadas histórias, ficam bem! Outro exemplo, específico nas fics de BNHA: MOMO. Mano, TODAS, repito TODAS! as fics que ja li, é sempre, SEMPRE ela que aparece com o mc. Sério que (desculpe a sinceridade) a falta de criatividade em colocar uma outra personagem feminina é tamanha que, só optam por uma? Acho que existem muitas outras garotas na turma 1-A, quem dirá na UA em si. Bem, no demais, gramática boa, escrita boa.
after seeing there is honkai impact i give it five stars but how is the tag not tragedy well i'll just find it out after reading btw do the mc have honkai resistance?
The only thing i can complain about would be the writing quality and even then it is not even that bad.
Renault... that's a bloody 🚗 🚘 honestly some of these authors have a bad naming sense.
pretty great fic. the mc isn't a god from the start, but he is pretty powerful. The interactions feel dynamic and real, and the dialog is fluent. A lot of people are complaining about vector manipulation being nerfed, but in my opinion the story wouldn't have been as interesting if he had the full power of the original Accelerator from the start. overall great story, looking forward for more!
Thanks to the author for this beautiful job. I really like this one and look forward to the future updates. I am inquisitive about the future direction of Mc and the battle between High End.
Who gives one of the most op powers and then a system? Your personality is too cocky, let go of the cocky a bit and also the interactions, the rest of the characters are about to crawl. You did not put gods or wishes so there is a good job
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Pretty good fic for about 25 chaoter until the usj incident. The author made such stupid plot choices that I have to Thea break from this one for a while.
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The story is about how much the author want to Nerf the MC and bringing a random sister that the MC never meet but suddenly care for her even when she is a maniac villain…
Interesting Idea and character. Here is a rating for support. Interesting Idea and character. Here is a rating for support. Interesting Idea and character. Here is a rating for support.
Couldn't even tell this was being translated, Grammar is 5 stars easy. MC doesn't have any knowledge of the anime, normally not a fan of that but it's written really well here. Also Vector Manipulation as QUIRK is explained and used really well.
It's a very stupid thing for it to be haram in a modern world. I can't even understand how cocky it is. besides, the series is a mixture of tooru and mha and this becomes a minus. one person cannot handle 2 different holly things in such detail. and it becomes clear when it starts to deteriorate after about 20 episodes in this series. Besides, the series is still readable in my opinion and I will write it down in my personal notebook. It is a plus that the system is not in sight.
This fic is quite fun and enjoyable to read, it follow MHA storyline quite well. I read the MTL version in the past but stopped halfway because the MTL was unbearable. I understand that there are a lot of questions of why MC didn't/can't use that or this, and author also not explaining the reason clearly but I think it's clear from early chapter that he got vector manipulation as quirk of mha verse not the esper power of OG Accelerator from toaru verse, the way/concept of how their power work also different. And the world power scale difference also too big. Is the strongest in MHA All For One? If so he will be dead by just a sneeze of Magic God from Toaru, though I'm not sure if Magic God is the strongest, because it's a long time ago I followed Toaru's story. IIRC, MC will get Misaka and Momo near the middle of the story and later added other girls too. I hope you will translate this till the end, cheers 👍
Revelar spoiler
Its good the mc knows about other anime but doesn’t know about mha.He also has a lottery system I believe but it’s secondary so far, but his quiek takes the protagonism.
system is unneeded his power is already strong the ultraman suit doesn't need to be from a system it would have been better if it was developed by the granparents before death and have one retired member of hero support to explain how they were able to develop it the system is just lazy especialy when its not needed half the time its not even mentioned for like 50 chapters then it suddenly pops up breaking the sory it doesn't help any part of the story the character is op enough
Why you gotta make this a harem my guy. I saw it coming but it still hurts… other than it’s pretty good, not great but a fine popcorn read
Asian MC. Copy and pasted. MC idiot. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
This FF is pretty mediocre, the MC has little to no presence changing almost none of the main story. His quick is stagnant and constantly is outdone yet everyone keeps saying he's better than most pro heroes. Honestly I'd rather just go read MHA on its own because this FF just feels like bloat that adds literally nothing of interest.
Too much nerfing... If you don't want him too be too strong too fast, just choose another quirk. And the sister thing......no words.
Bem, lá vai algumas opiniões. Como leitor, é normal perceber que as coisas possuem uma certa linha a seguir, ainda mais no gênero fanfiction. MAS, tem coisas que se repetem, repetem, repetem... ATÉ DEMAIS! Como por exemplo, cada vez que algum personagem é mencionado, NÃO é necessário O NOME COMPLETO da criatura! TODOS sabem quem os referidos São! Todos conhecem o personagem, até melhor que eles mesmos! (bem, a maioria suponho). Repetir o nome completo é o cúmulo da irritação, ainda mais em uma história bem escrita. Sim, É BEM ESCRITA, e olha que sou crítico ao máximo por causa do sistema e harém (tags que Odeio) mas em determinadas histórias, ficam bem! Outro exemplo, específico nas fics de BNHA: MOMO. Mano, TODAS, repito TODAS! as fics que ja li, é sempre, SEMPRE ela que aparece com o mc. Sério que (desculpe a sinceridade) a falta de criatividade em colocar uma outra personagem feminina é tamanha que, só optam por uma? Acho que existem muitas outras garotas na turma 1-A, quem dirá na UA em si. Bem, no demais, gramática boa, escrita boa.
after seeing there is honkai impact i give it five stars but how is the tag not tragedy well i'll just find it out after reading btw do the mc have honkai resistance?
The only thing i can complain about would be the writing quality and even then it is not even that bad.
Renault... that's a bloody 🚗 🚘 honestly some of these authors have a bad naming sense.
pretty great fic. the mc isn't a god from the start, but he is pretty powerful. The interactions feel dynamic and real, and the dialog is fluent. A lot of people are complaining about vector manipulation being nerfed, but in my opinion the story wouldn't have been as interesting if he had the full power of the original Accelerator from the start. overall great story, looking forward for more!
Thanks to the author for this beautiful job. I really like this one and look forward to the future updates. I am inquisitive about the future direction of Mc and the battle between High End.
Who gives one of the most op powers and then a system? Your personality is too cocky, let go of the cocky a bit and also the interactions, the rest of the characters are about to crawl. You did not put gods or wishes so there is a good job
(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
Pretty good fic for about 25 chaoter until the usj incident. The author made such stupid plot choices that I have to Thea break from this one for a while.
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The story is about how much the author want to Nerf the MC and bringing a random sister that the MC never meet but suddenly care for her even when she is a maniac villain…
Interesting Idea and character. Here is a rating for support. Interesting Idea and character. Here is a rating for support. Interesting Idea and character. Here is a rating for support.
Couldn't even tell this was being translated, Grammar is 5 stars easy. MC doesn't have any knowledge of the anime, normally not a fan of that but it's written really well here. Also Vector Manipulation as QUIRK is explained and used really well.
It's a very stupid thing for it to be haram in a modern world. I can't even understand how cocky it is. besides, the series is a mixture of tooru and mha and this becomes a minus. one person cannot handle 2 different holly things in such detail. and it becomes clear when it starts to deteriorate after about 20 episodes in this series. Besides, the series is still readable in my opinion and I will write it down in my personal notebook. It is a plus that the system is not in sight.
This fic is quite fun and enjoyable to read, it follow MHA storyline quite well. I read the MTL version in the past but stopped halfway because the MTL was unbearable. I understand that there are a lot of questions of why MC didn't/can't use that or this, and author also not explaining the reason clearly but I think it's clear from early chapter that he got vector manipulation as quirk of mha verse not the esper power of OG Accelerator from toaru verse, the way/concept of how their power work also different. And the world power scale difference also too big. Is the strongest in MHA All For One? If so he will be dead by just a sneeze of Magic God from Toaru, though I'm not sure if Magic God is the strongest, because it's a long time ago I followed Toaru's story. IIRC, MC will get Misaka and Momo near the middle of the story and later added other girls too. I hope you will translate this till the end, cheers 👍
Revelar spoiler Its good the mc knows about other anime but doesn’t know about mha.He also has a lottery system I believe but it’s secondary so far, but his quiek takes the protagonism.
system is unneeded his power is already strong the ultraman suit doesn't need to be from a system it would have been better if it was developed by the granparents before death and have one retired member of hero support to explain how they were able to develop it the system is just lazy especialy when its not needed half the time its not even mentioned for like 50 chapters then it suddenly pops up breaking the sory it doesn't help any part of the story the character is op enough