BurritoBarbarian

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I probably read a little too much

2022-05-14 Se unió Canada
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2 months ago
Commented

It's kind a shame to rush DxD considering how lore rich it is but that also means if you really invested in that verse it would be a long arc,it also has top tier waifus if we're expanding the harem(team Yasaka rise up). Honestly the Transformers idea seems the most outta pocket but I'm super curious what that would look like so that's my vote. RWBY would be the runner up since I have such a soft spot for it. Happy to hear your taking sometime to yourself can't wait for the next arc whatever it may be. :)

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2 months ago
Replied to Jovami6729

It may have been better to just end the arc and take a few days off to start the next one. Just my personal opinion but if it messes with how it's monitzed I get padding it out to give yourself more time.

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2 months ago
Commented

thank you for the chapter!

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2 months ago
Posted

it's pretty good the main flaws are the constant changing identities which gets old, and the personality shift went from a more goofy driven character to a serious control freak who infects everyone with parasites to control them. It's stops being interesting to read when everyone around the MC is stripped of their freewill and any emotion just feels mind controlled to feel that way. As a side note parasites? really? that's just straight up gross couldn't have just left it as a technique that makes people to think positively of the MC.

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2 months ago
Commented

thank you for the chapter! if I had one complaint the whole mongrel was fun and all in the beginning but now it just feels out of place? like a discount bin Gilgamesh.