Reviews of Lord of Mysteries:Fire of Destruction by TheWitnes - Webnovel

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Victor_7740

Awesome stuffs also more and im stocking chapters to bunge read

1d
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BlackD_Coto

A really good LOTM fanfic, i honestly have never read any other lotm fanfic so i cannot knwo whether this is the best or not, but judging by how good it is, it should be among the best. There are two things i like the most about this fanfic. The first being the fact that you threw canon by the window unlike other fanfics that just tell the same story and change very little. The second is the romance. I love mc's relationship with his lady wife A LOT, i believe you managed to write a really good relationship between the two of them.

4d
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Rex_Night_0783

Oye espera, me acabo de dar cuenta, el inglés no es tu lengua materna no?, en ese caso, cual es tu idioma natal?

15d
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Not_a_Deadra

Literally just peak.

1mth
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NASIR_OP

it was a good read until mc advanced to sequence 7 at this stage the whole idea of acting and digestion was thrown out of the window also it took too long to advance next step it doesn't even compare to klein who at least advance in every two hundred chapters it good read but in later stages you ruined it

2mth
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Owen_G_Turcios

el mc es gay? y si si es ponelo en las etiquetas porfavor

5mth
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Rex_Night_0783

sinceramente, el mejor fanfic que he leído, simplemente, una obra maestra

8mth
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Rex_Night_0783

Hey witness, I'm going to make some videos of novels and fics narrated in Spanish, and I wanted to know if you would mind if I uploaded your novel? Of course I'll give the respective credits and everything.

8mth
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ILikeSaltedEgg

please update more, I want to see him become a god 😭🙏🏻💯💯💯

9mth
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Deippy_Deippy

Pretty good but it is a bit boring at many points. The fights and character interactions but it just feels like it is missing something, original lotm had the tarot club meetings that made you want to keep reading despite all the exposition, explanations and boring things, this story has all that that but lacks that “tarot club” aspect (doesn’t need to be an actual tarot club, but I feel a fanfic of lotm needs something similiar)

1yr
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Sweet_Smile_4843

For me,this is my Best lotm fanfic so far. Character building is my favorite part ,I like the way adrayn acted, More like scammer than a clown. In part of writting that is good ,Even my bad english could read it smoothly. Downside of this novel?.. The named of Adrayn's beyonder items are so hard to remember When author came back to compose this story. Something tell me that i should write the review. Sorry for my bad english. I cant wait to read next chapter.👍

1yr
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Kentashiz22

I have to say it's one of the best fanfics out there based on LOTM. The journey of the MC from the start to what he has become recently is a joy to watch. Thank you so much for the story👏

1yr
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Kline_Morrite

يجدر بك الأستمرار يا صديقي بشكل موسف لم يعد هناك الكثير من روايات "LOTM" أامتى أن تستمر و أقرأ هذه الرواية الرائعة و شكرا لك على مجهودك تحية لك من الشرق الأوسط

1yr
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Lord_Hastur

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1yr
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PedagangSiput

Awesome, why didn't I find this fanfic earlier?. Each chapter makes me enter the story, the author also doesn't forget the mystery in it Saya dari indonesia! Ayo baca buku ini, menyenangkan melihat fanfic LOTM memiliki banyak bab seperti ini. Ah! Saya juga sudah mendukung penulis.

1yr
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Mysteries_

an interesting read if you have patience, I know it's a lotm fanfic but it's still a fanfic, the author dumps a lot of useless stuff at the beginning and forces many situations that shouldn't happen, besides making the mc be very stupid and putting elements that they are not from lotm, in fact sometimes it doesn't even feel like I'm reading a lotm fanfic since the way the author makes the characters interact is nothing like, really it's victorian england and all the characters are called by their first name name without even knowing each other, the mc should have continued at sea, there was no reason for him to go backlund.

1yr
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MetatronXII

Aku sangat menyukai ini, sangat bagus. Dari chapter awal hingga sampai saat ini tidak ada yang membuatku merasa ini ff yang buruk. Aku hanya berharap MC tidak menjadi genderbender, dan tetap menjadi pria.

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1yr
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TheGehrmanSparrow

Review: Writing Quality: 4 stars, it starts off okay with a few errors a chapter but it gradually improves to at most 1 error a chapter or 2 rarely. Stability of Updates: 5 stars, the author is consistent with when he updates his chapters. Story Development: 4 stars it starts off a little confusing but maybe that's because I finished LOTM 1 ages ago and am reading LOTM 2 right now. Character Design: 4 stars the author is great in how he expresses characters but sometimes he can have trouble expressing character's emotions, though he develops his character's amazing especially the MC. World Background: 5 stars (Its Lord of The Mysteries what ya expect?) Overall Rating: 4.4 stars out of 5, would reccomend.

1yr
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ipot_1005

Easily the best lotm fanfic I've ever read. It's originally in english too meaning that there aren't any wierd translations and no machine translation. The MC is very interesting and his hax are all in-universe. There's no such cheat the MC has that feels unfair or like it doesn't fit in the verse

1yr
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Aboode

I am in chapter 197 It is good, but the progression is slow he rushed Hunter and Provoker but his drug in Pyromaniac for a while when he will promote to Conspirer.

1yr
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Project_Traveler

I want to say thank you for creating this awesome fanfic..

1yr
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Kurooof

Hahahahahahahahah Chapter 198 is my favorite chapter gahahagahahahahaa This is one of the best lotm fanfic Kudos for you

1yr
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Mileagr

I really like this fanfiction, it's a pity that the powers of the MC and the plot itself are a little slow, but I think that I'm just used to a faster pace, I hope you (the author) will be fine and you will continue to write this fanfic

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1yr
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christopher_Ekwu_5767

very good fanfic. but I've noticed that it's slowly turning into one of those books that claim to be non harem but have almost all female characters it's ruining the LoTM feel of the book

1yr
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SCP_3812

Good fan-fiction. Please continue, there are too few lord of Mysteries fan-fiction. Keep writing.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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Fatty_OtakuVariant

I’m just a supporter of people on the path of madness.

1yr
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noiceguy420

this could have been much better, don't get me wrong it's a fun read it it just could have been much better, but regardless I still thank the author for this one

1yr
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Nildred

Estou no capítulo 155 e sinceramente essa é a melhor fanfic de LOTM que eu li, A construção de mundo e as interações dos personagens dão vida a história, o formato de escrita é parecido com o LOTM mesmo e tem uma boa estabilidade de atualização. (Essa coisa do MC ser gay é fake e além de usar como um tema cômico foi feito para dar um peso maior a amizade, da mesma forma que não importa se quem morrer não for muito próximo do MC)

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1yr
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OceanoAzul

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1yr
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Imaslapurass

It is sooooo good! I cannot express it with words! This is the best LOTM fanfic i have ever read! I hope author wouldn't stop this midway because this is too good!

1yr
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Victor_7740

Awesome stuffs also more and im stocking chapters to bunge read

1d
Ver 0 respuestas
BlackD_Coto

A really good LOTM fanfic, i honestly have never read any other lotm fanfic so i cannot knwo whether this is the best or not, but judging by how good it is, it should be among the best. There are two things i like the most about this fanfic. The first being the fact that you threw canon by the window unlike other fanfics that just tell the same story and change very little. The second is the romance. I love mc's relationship with his lady wife A LOT, i believe you managed to write a really good relationship between the two of them.

4d
Ver 0 respuestas
Rex_Night_0783

Oye espera, me acabo de dar cuenta, el inglés no es tu lengua materna no?, en ese caso, cual es tu idioma natal?

15d
Ver 2 respuestas
Not_a_Deadra

Literally just peak.

1mth
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NASIR_OP

it was a good read until mc advanced to sequence 7 at this stage the whole idea of acting and digestion was thrown out of the window also it took too long to advance next step it doesn't even compare to klein who at least advance in every two hundred chapters it good read but in later stages you ruined it

2mth
Ver 0 respuestas
Owen_G_Turcios

el mc es gay? y si si es ponelo en las etiquetas porfavor

5mth
Ver 1 respuestas
Rex_Night_0783

sinceramente, el mejor fanfic que he leído, simplemente, una obra maestra

8mth
Ver 0 respuestas
Rex_Night_0783

Hey witness, I'm going to make some videos of novels and fics narrated in Spanish, and I wanted to know if you would mind if I uploaded your novel? Of course I'll give the respective credits and everything.

8mth
Ver 1 respuestas
ILikeSaltedEgg

please update more, I want to see him become a god 😭🙏🏻💯💯💯

9mth
Ver 0 respuestas
Deippy_Deippy

Pretty good but it is a bit boring at many points. The fights and character interactions but it just feels like it is missing something, original lotm had the tarot club meetings that made you want to keep reading despite all the exposition, explanations and boring things, this story has all that that but lacks that “tarot club” aspect (doesn’t need to be an actual tarot club, but I feel a fanfic of lotm needs something similiar)

1yr
Ver 2 respuestas
Sweet_Smile_4843

For me,this is my Best lotm fanfic so far. Character building is my favorite part ,I like the way adrayn acted, More like scammer than a clown. In part of writting that is good ,Even my bad english could read it smoothly. Downside of this novel?.. The named of Adrayn's beyonder items are so hard to remember When author came back to compose this story. Something tell me that i should write the review. Sorry for my bad english. I cant wait to read next chapter.👍

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Kentashiz22

I have to say it's one of the best fanfics out there based on LOTM. The journey of the MC from the start to what he has become recently is a joy to watch. Thank you so much for the story👏

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Kline_Morrite

يجدر بك الأستمرار يا صديقي بشكل موسف لم يعد هناك الكثير من روايات "LOTM" أامتى أن تستمر و أقرأ هذه الرواية الرائعة و شكرا لك على مجهودك تحية لك من الشرق الأوسط

1yr
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Lord_Hastur

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1yr
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PedagangSiput

Awesome, why didn't I find this fanfic earlier?. Each chapter makes me enter the story, the author also doesn't forget the mystery in it Saya dari indonesia! Ayo baca buku ini, menyenangkan melihat fanfic LOTM memiliki banyak bab seperti ini. Ah! Saya juga sudah mendukung penulis.

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Mysteries_

an interesting read if you have patience, I know it's a lotm fanfic but it's still a fanfic, the author dumps a lot of useless stuff at the beginning and forces many situations that shouldn't happen, besides making the mc be very stupid and putting elements that they are not from lotm, in fact sometimes it doesn't even feel like I'm reading a lotm fanfic since the way the author makes the characters interact is nothing like, really it's victorian england and all the characters are called by their first name name without even knowing each other, the mc should have continued at sea, there was no reason for him to go backlund.

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
MetatronXII

Aku sangat menyukai ini, sangat bagus. Dari chapter awal hingga sampai saat ini tidak ada yang membuatku merasa ini ff yang buruk. Aku hanya berharap MC tidak menjadi genderbender, dan tetap menjadi pria.

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1yr
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TheGehrmanSparrow

Review: Writing Quality: 4 stars, it starts off okay with a few errors a chapter but it gradually improves to at most 1 error a chapter or 2 rarely. Stability of Updates: 5 stars, the author is consistent with when he updates his chapters. Story Development: 4 stars it starts off a little confusing but maybe that's because I finished LOTM 1 ages ago and am reading LOTM 2 right now. Character Design: 4 stars the author is great in how he expresses characters but sometimes he can have trouble expressing character's emotions, though he develops his character's amazing especially the MC. World Background: 5 stars (Its Lord of The Mysteries what ya expect?) Overall Rating: 4.4 stars out of 5, would reccomend.

1yr
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ipot_1005

Easily the best lotm fanfic I've ever read. It's originally in english too meaning that there aren't any wierd translations and no machine translation. The MC is very interesting and his hax are all in-universe. There's no such cheat the MC has that feels unfair or like it doesn't fit in the verse

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Aboode

I am in chapter 197 It is good, but the progression is slow he rushed Hunter and Provoker but his drug in Pyromaniac for a while when he will promote to Conspirer.

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Project_Traveler

I want to say thank you for creating this awesome fanfic..

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Kurooof

Hahahahahahahahah Chapter 198 is my favorite chapter gahahagahahahahaa This is one of the best lotm fanfic Kudos for you

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Mileagr

I really like this fanfiction, it's a pity that the powers of the MC and the plot itself are a little slow, but I think that I'm just used to a faster pace, I hope you (the author) will be fine and you will continue to write this fanfic

img
1yr
Ver 3 respuestas
christopher_Ekwu_5767

very good fanfic. but I've noticed that it's slowly turning into one of those books that claim to be non harem but have almost all female characters it's ruining the LoTM feel of the book

1yr
Ver 3 respuestas
SCP_3812

Good fan-fiction. Please continue, there are too few lord of Mysteries fan-fiction. Keep writing.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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Fatty_OtakuVariant

I’m just a supporter of people on the path of madness.

1yr
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noiceguy420

this could have been much better, don't get me wrong it's a fun read it it just could have been much better, but regardless I still thank the author for this one

1yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Nildred

Estou no capítulo 155 e sinceramente essa é a melhor fanfic de LOTM que eu li, A construção de mundo e as interações dos personagens dão vida a história, o formato de escrita é parecido com o LOTM mesmo e tem uma boa estabilidade de atualização. (Essa coisa do MC ser gay é fake e além de usar como um tema cômico foi feito para dar um peso maior a amizade, da mesma forma que não importa se quem morrer não for muito próximo do MC)

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1yr
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OceanoAzul

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1yr
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Imaslapurass

It is sooooo good! I cannot express it with words! This is the best LOTM fanfic i have ever read! I hope author wouldn't stop this midway because this is too good!

1yr
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