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I'm only 25 chapters in and thats all I can do. I just don't like when the mc is an idiot and does nothing but whine all the time. He's just weak minded and so far I don't like how deals with any situation. not going to say much just that its mediocre and for the mc is the biggest turn off. should have given him Elise's personality.
simply review from me– in the beginning it good but here and there some twist keep pop-up till the king death it made the feeling that u just forced the plot because u want it to have more mysteries??. i think author made the story to teast us feeling not focused on made the story, the world mc live has some more colours not that u just want to play with readers feeling when we read. there are many novels this type out there that played with readers feeling unreasonable thus ruined the story line : conclusion is that u want more mysteries ruin u novel when u not answers some of mysteries u made.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
author when you are going to upload a New chapter for this novel. It is a good novel. We want more of this kind of work. Please upload New chapters.
Bardzo fajna opowieść wygodna i przyjemna dla oka na nudne dni mimo że jestem na 102 rozdziale widzę Że autor pozostawił ten fanfik szkoda piposad:;'';;':
It’s not bad but like, not much really happens throughout 200 chapters. It’s a good book but not worth the coins since there hasn’t been updates
author, is this book worth a read??????? let me know if I'll invest, hope there's harem!!
i am new here can i ask author? will elise and rin be together or they will sperate ways?
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It is still surprising that out of 2 million people, only 39 (at the time of writing the review) left a review, well, let's go. I like everything, I wonder how the relationship will develop, and at the time of chapter 200, events take the most pleasant turn for me, as if the author has finally raised the level of his writing, or the thoughtfulness of the plot, I SUPPORT,
The story is a captivating and immersive isekai adventure that plunges readers into a world overrun by demon from other realm. From the very beginning, the author showcases their talent for storytelling, weaving a prologue that tugs at the heartstrings and sets the stage for a thrilling journey. Rin, the relatable protagonist, finds himself transported to a game-like world where he strives to become the strongest and reclaim what he believes he has lost. Accompanied by the alluring and enigmatic Elise, their relationship blossoms amidst the challenges they face. The author deftly balances elements of romance, action, and suspense, leaving readers on the edge of their seats. I found myself devouring this book in a single day, unable to put it down. The author's ability to craft compelling characters and maintain a gripping plot is commendable. However, I would encourage the author to consider incorporating more adult chapters in future instalments. This would further deepen the emotional connection between the characters and add an extra layer of intimacy and intensity to the story. For fans of the isekai genre seeking a blend of adventure, romance, and a touch of sensuality, This is a must-read. Support the talented author and eagerly anticipate their future works, with the hope that they continue to explore and expand upon the adult aspects of their storytelling as well because I need more lemon chapters as man of culture.
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The prologue to the story is much more interesting than the story itself, there is no reason for the heroines to be able to hear his thoughts and the mc despite his well written past he is to me boring
I think it's just me, I find how the story played annoying, I didn't like how they deal with the characters, to the story etc. please don't mind my commen I just had to vent what I felt after reading 60+ chapters of this novel, I just don't like how the author wrote the plot and how the mc deals with the "mc"
Read 7 chapters and can already tell this will be an absolute gem of an novel.
Chapter 1-50 Review ***Possible Spoilers*** First things first, I applaud and thank the author for putting themself and their creation out there for us to read, enjoy, and criticize. The purpose of this review is not to bash the author in any way but solely to equip potential readers with a better understanding of whether this novel is a right fit for them. First I will start with the pros: 1) The Writing is well done. Sure there my be a few typos here or there but there really is no issue with being able to both read and understand the author's intentions. 2) At the time writing this review its seems that the novel is being updated on a regular bases. 3) The author has "hinted" at a large world (or worlds in this novel) that should hopefully provide many chapters worth of world building and entertainment. 4) I like that the MC is not a sociopath, borderline psychotic, or straight up evil as that seems to be the trend lately. CONS: 1) The MC is pretty dense and I 'personally' have a hard time with dense MCs, especially if the book carries the romance and harem tags. 2)If you came to the book because of the Romance and Harem tags you will need to be very patient. The only "romance"(if it can be called that) we see is very one sided, or does not involve the MC at all. And while there is more than one girl that is interested in him, 'Harem' implies for more than just interest and multiple women following him around. With the MC's current mindset I don't see true romance or a harem even remotely close. 3) The MC is more of a 'damsel in distress' MC, meaning he is always the one being saved not doing the saving. 4) The MC fails the 'litmus test". The MC, who is loved by a goddess who secretly wants the MC to become a god so she can be with him, gives him a super powerful god's powers and to top it off he also has a system at his disposal, yet, he is still the weakest character in the book while at the same time being told that he is meant to be the strongest and a ruler.... it's more than a little frustrating. Also, he is slave to both his system and his power has he has no control over either and both will and/or has, punished him in some way and neither have helped in any significant way. So far the system is really just there for the MC to banter back and forth with. As you can see most my issues stem from the main character. It just feels like the author is not in the MC's corner. Also, not necessarily a CON, but it almost seems that one of the heroines is being introduced as a second lead, who basically is "favorite" child of the author, as the benefits she gets from the smallest of tasks put the MC to shame. He spends 3 or 4 days doing quests as well as completing a dungeon just to rank up one stat. She gets her first quest, completes it in 5 mins and gets enough to rank up two stats. As everyone's opinions differ on different topics please take this review with a grain of salt. I have come to realize I am pretty picky when it comes to a stories MCs so it's possible I could be being a little too harsh. Reviews tend to always be heavy on the negatives, but overall the premise of the story is good and has a lot of potential, so with that in mind I suggest you read the free chapters and decide for yourself, you may find it very enjoyable.
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I enjoy this type of story similar to heavenly villain type of novel, to me its quite fun and this is the second novel where the Heroines can hear the main character and I'm really liking it. -Also to the author could you please update the discord link, it hasexpired and I would like to join the server
Dropped at ch 110. This is a very average story, with lots of non-cohesive plot. Random things happen a lot, and even after 100 chaps, nothing is answered even a bit. I think this story will be like other Chinese stories, where nothing will be answered even after thousands of chapters. So dont waste time on this story.
Hmm the explanation of chapter 3 is not the sadness that I got but whether the MC's head has been kicked by a horse I mean why his mindset is so ridiculous. It was true that what had happened couldn't be repaired, but why didn't he just leave the group was the MC an idiot masochist. Hope his character got developed ASAP, well nobody wants to see MC beta and idiot
Españoreseña. Osea, según el autor el protagonista tiene la habilidad de uno de los dioses más fuertes del multiverso existencial. Pero casualmente el primer misterio a resolver es un asesino que tiene su misma habilidad. De ese nivel es la historia. Y otra cosa, lo de que viven en una novela es puro clickbait como con otras novelas porque es un recurso que no notarás, también la lectura del pensamiento del protagonista deja mucho que desae porque sirve aleatoriamente cuando al autor se le da la reverenda gana. En fin, es frustrante lo idiota, débil y los primeros capítulos igual puro relleno inútil que no sirve para nada.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
I really like the character devolpment and world building, I also am a big fan of how you are doing the magic system. Really good work author, keep it up!
Reading this novel feels like winning the lottery, or a fair game lol. Writing Quality: Author definitly knows how to write in English, and write well. Besides the occasional mishap reads well and easy and has a great flow. TIP FOR AUTHOR: When writing try to avoid moving/changing point of views (POV) within a chapter. Also make sure what you are saying fits POV of character. (i.e. don't state emotions of other characters, rather their physical reactions) both of these will add a bit more depth to your POV writing. Story Development: Author plays with time well. Skims when necessary, provides flashbacks/dreams to explore past, and draws out the intense action. Author also seems to have a plan already and has set some foundations for the plot. Not much advice to give here. My only worry is about how long this story can get and if the author has already planned far enough ahead. Character Design: This is a big thing for me, to often the MC is the only character that has depth and changes. This author breaks that stereotype and provides depth to many characters (will not spoil it). Each character has their own goal and vices/problems. AUTHOR TIP: some of the flashback info seemed to come out of nowhere. Make sure to foreshadow or show the eefects of what has happened. Updating Stabability: As long as the writing quality stays as good as it has been the updates can change...(though I would reeeeally like to read more now.) World Background: This seems to currently be the weak link, though recent chapters are suggesting otherwise. While the monsters are unique, the world is currently your average magic/fantasy/academy city world. However, as I said before, recent chapters have started to unveil more info about the world...might be more apt to say teasing. My concern is that it is more to do with the plot, and less with the world itself. AUTHOR TIP: for some good examples of built worlds that deviate from the norm check out Brandon Sanderson's books or Robert Jordan's. One suggestion (especially for worlds with different tech/magic from ours) how does that affect society at large (maybe all those with magic become nobles). I know there is a generic framework that many novels have gone off of but find what makes your magic system unique and what effect it's had on society. Thanks for the great read!
ngl...author u f*ckwd up the mc's anti hero character...first 50 chs were all amazing but then u ruined it....why make the mc suddenly trust Emelia after knowing her for a few weeks that he gives out a big secret to her....u have also made the mc a pervy(a little) shonen hero instead of the anti hero ... seriously this book would have been wonderful with a harem of just 3 to 4....but with the voice hearing part there are gonna be a lot ..I hope u will remove the heart voice from the book soon as the story currently would do even better without it or at least make Elise also hear him ...I still like this book and hope to read more with a bit better fm leads... update soon
Overall i like this novel, i just hope there is an update about what happen to our mc "friend" back on earth
I reviewed previously around 100 chapters and now that i go further the story really comes full circle, the romance is fluffy and action sequences are done justice, shame it has been dropped but it was a good read.
I'm only 25 chapters in and thats all I can do. I just don't like when the mc is an idiot and does nothing but whine all the time. He's just weak minded and so far I don't like how deals with any situation. not going to say much just that its mediocre and for the mc is the biggest turn off. should have given him Elise's personality.
simply review from me– in the beginning it good but here and there some twist keep pop-up till the king death it made the feeling that u just forced the plot because u want it to have more mysteries??. i think author made the story to teast us feeling not focused on made the story, the world mc live has some more colours not that u just want to play with readers feeling when we read. there are many novels this type out there that played with readers feeling unreasonable thus ruined the story line : conclusion is that u want more mysteries ruin u novel when u not answers some of mysteries u made.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
author when you are going to upload a New chapter for this novel. It is a good novel. We want more of this kind of work. Please upload New chapters.
Bardzo fajna opowieść wygodna i przyjemna dla oka na nudne dni mimo że jestem na 102 rozdziale widzę Że autor pozostawił ten fanfik szkoda piposad:;'';;':
It’s not bad but like, not much really happens throughout 200 chapters. It’s a good book but not worth the coins since there hasn’t been updates
author, is this book worth a read??????? let me know if I'll invest, hope there's harem!!
i am new here can i ask author? will elise and rin be together or they will sperate ways?
Revelar spoiler It is still surprising that out of 2 million people, only 39 (at the time of writing the review) left a review, well, let's go. I like everything, I wonder how the relationship will develop, and at the time of chapter 200, events take the most pleasant turn for me, as if the author has finally raised the level of his writing, or the thoughtfulness of the plot, I SUPPORT,
The story is a captivating and immersive isekai adventure that plunges readers into a world overrun by demon from other realm. From the very beginning, the author showcases their talent for storytelling, weaving a prologue that tugs at the heartstrings and sets the stage for a thrilling journey. Rin, the relatable protagonist, finds himself transported to a game-like world where he strives to become the strongest and reclaim what he believes he has lost. Accompanied by the alluring and enigmatic Elise, their relationship blossoms amidst the challenges they face. The author deftly balances elements of romance, action, and suspense, leaving readers on the edge of their seats. I found myself devouring this book in a single day, unable to put it down. The author's ability to craft compelling characters and maintain a gripping plot is commendable. However, I would encourage the author to consider incorporating more adult chapters in future instalments. This would further deepen the emotional connection between the characters and add an extra layer of intimacy and intensity to the story. For fans of the isekai genre seeking a blend of adventure, romance, and a touch of sensuality, This is a must-read. Support the talented author and eagerly anticipate their future works, with the hope that they continue to explore and expand upon the adult aspects of their storytelling as well because I need more lemon chapters as man of culture.
hey arthur if your there can you resend a link to your discord because is expired pls pls pls pls[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The prologue to the story is much more interesting than the story itself, there is no reason for the heroines to be able to hear his thoughts and the mc despite his well written past he is to me boring
I think it's just me, I find how the story played annoying, I didn't like how they deal with the characters, to the story etc. please don't mind my commen I just had to vent what I felt after reading 60+ chapters of this novel, I just don't like how the author wrote the plot and how the mc deals with the "mc"
Read 7 chapters and can already tell this will be an absolute gem of an novel.
Chapter 1-50 Review ***Possible Spoilers*** First things first, I applaud and thank the author for putting themself and their creation out there for us to read, enjoy, and criticize. The purpose of this review is not to bash the author in any way but solely to equip potential readers with a better understanding of whether this novel is a right fit for them. First I will start with the pros: 1) The Writing is well done. Sure there my be a few typos here or there but there really is no issue with being able to both read and understand the author's intentions. 2) At the time writing this review its seems that the novel is being updated on a regular bases. 3) The author has "hinted" at a large world (or worlds in this novel) that should hopefully provide many chapters worth of world building and entertainment. 4) I like that the MC is not a sociopath, borderline psychotic, or straight up evil as that seems to be the trend lately. CONS: 1) The MC is pretty dense and I 'personally' have a hard time with dense MCs, especially if the book carries the romance and harem tags. 2)If you came to the book because of the Romance and Harem tags you will need to be very patient. The only "romance"(if it can be called that) we see is very one sided, or does not involve the MC at all. And while there is more than one girl that is interested in him, 'Harem' implies for more than just interest and multiple women following him around. With the MC's current mindset I don't see true romance or a harem even remotely close. 3) The MC is more of a 'damsel in distress' MC, meaning he is always the one being saved not doing the saving. 4) The MC fails the 'litmus test". The MC, who is loved by a goddess who secretly wants the MC to become a god so she can be with him, gives him a super powerful god's powers and to top it off he also has a system at his disposal, yet, he is still the weakest character in the book while at the same time being told that he is meant to be the strongest and a ruler.... it's more than a little frustrating. Also, he is slave to both his system and his power has he has no control over either and both will and/or has, punished him in some way and neither have helped in any significant way. So far the system is really just there for the MC to banter back and forth with. As you can see most my issues stem from the main character. It just feels like the author is not in the MC's corner. Also, not necessarily a CON, but it almost seems that one of the heroines is being introduced as a second lead, who basically is "favorite" child of the author, as the benefits she gets from the smallest of tasks put the MC to shame. He spends 3 or 4 days doing quests as well as completing a dungeon just to rank up one stat. She gets her first quest, completes it in 5 mins and gets enough to rank up two stats. As everyone's opinions differ on different topics please take this review with a grain of salt. I have come to realize I am pretty picky when it comes to a stories MCs so it's possible I could be being a little too harsh. Reviews tend to always be heavy on the negatives, but overall the premise of the story is good and has a lot of potential, so with that in mind I suggest you read the free chapters and decide for yourself, you may find it very enjoyable.
Revelar spoiler I enjoy this type of story similar to heavenly villain type of novel, to me its quite fun and this is the second novel where the Heroines can hear the main character and I'm really liking it. -Also to the author could you please update the discord link, it hasexpired and I would like to join the server
Dropped at ch 110. This is a very average story, with lots of non-cohesive plot. Random things happen a lot, and even after 100 chaps, nothing is answered even a bit. I think this story will be like other Chinese stories, where nothing will be answered even after thousands of chapters. So dont waste time on this story.
Hmm the explanation of chapter 3 is not the sadness that I got but whether the MC's head has been kicked by a horse I mean why his mindset is so ridiculous. It was true that what had happened couldn't be repaired, but why didn't he just leave the group was the MC an idiot masochist. Hope his character got developed ASAP, well nobody wants to see MC beta and idiot
Españoreseña. Osea, según el autor el protagonista tiene la habilidad de uno de los dioses más fuertes del multiverso existencial. Pero casualmente el primer misterio a resolver es un asesino que tiene su misma habilidad. De ese nivel es la historia. Y otra cosa, lo de que viven en una novela es puro clickbait como con otras novelas porque es un recurso que no notarás, también la lectura del pensamiento del protagonista deja mucho que desae porque sirve aleatoriamente cuando al autor se le da la reverenda gana. En fin, es frustrante lo idiota, débil y los primeros capítulos igual puro relleno inútil que no sirve para nada.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
I really like the character devolpment and world building, I also am a big fan of how you are doing the magic system. Really good work author, keep it up!
Reading this novel feels like winning the lottery, or a fair game lol. Writing Quality: Author definitly knows how to write in English, and write well. Besides the occasional mishap reads well and easy and has a great flow. TIP FOR AUTHOR: When writing try to avoid moving/changing point of views (POV) within a chapter. Also make sure what you are saying fits POV of character. (i.e. don't state emotions of other characters, rather their physical reactions) both of these will add a bit more depth to your POV writing. Story Development: Author plays with time well. Skims when necessary, provides flashbacks/dreams to explore past, and draws out the intense action. Author also seems to have a plan already and has set some foundations for the plot. Not much advice to give here. My only worry is about how long this story can get and if the author has already planned far enough ahead. Character Design: This is a big thing for me, to often the MC is the only character that has depth and changes. This author breaks that stereotype and provides depth to many characters (will not spoil it). Each character has their own goal and vices/problems. AUTHOR TIP: some of the flashback info seemed to come out of nowhere. Make sure to foreshadow or show the eefects of what has happened. Updating Stabability: As long as the writing quality stays as good as it has been the updates can change...(though I would reeeeally like to read more now.) World Background: This seems to currently be the weak link, though recent chapters are suggesting otherwise. While the monsters are unique, the world is currently your average magic/fantasy/academy city world. However, as I said before, recent chapters have started to unveil more info about the world...might be more apt to say teasing. My concern is that it is more to do with the plot, and less with the world itself. AUTHOR TIP: for some good examples of built worlds that deviate from the norm check out Brandon Sanderson's books or Robert Jordan's. One suggestion (especially for worlds with different tech/magic from ours) how does that affect society at large (maybe all those with magic become nobles). I know there is a generic framework that many novels have gone off of but find what makes your magic system unique and what effect it's had on society. Thanks for the great read!
ngl...author u f*ckwd up the mc's anti hero character...first 50 chs were all amazing but then u ruined it....why make the mc suddenly trust Emelia after knowing her for a few weeks that he gives out a big secret to her....u have also made the mc a pervy(a little) shonen hero instead of the anti hero ... seriously this book would have been wonderful with a harem of just 3 to 4....but with the voice hearing part there are gonna be a lot ..I hope u will remove the heart voice from the book soon as the story currently would do even better without it or at least make Elise also hear him ...I still like this book and hope to read more with a bit better fm leads... update soon
Overall i like this novel, i just hope there is an update about what happen to our mc "friend" back on earth
I reviewed previously around 100 chapters and now that i go further the story really comes full circle, the romance is fluffy and action sequences are done justice, shame it has been dropped but it was a good read.