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Well I was really interested in this story…too bad it paywalls. Guess I’ll just go find a new story instead. That doesn’t hit a paywall with 35 chapters.
I read upto chapter 97 so far. And so far I would say the story is developing really well. The only complain I have so far is the protagonist of the world getting spared from suffering every time while troubling our Mcs Rin and Elise. It's kinda feels frustrating to see that delusional and disgusting protagonist suffering no consequences at all. I hope Elise and Rin could put that protagonist in his place soon.
so far so good I'm at chapter 70 story is starting to get really good, (btw I love academy arks) so I'm hyped for this everything is pretty good not much to complain about tbh I just hope you don't over do it with the fluffy.
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Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31 Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
Spoilers I don't know how to use the spoiler tag so this is your warning also my review isn't that good I am loving what you are doing so far. My only problem being I feel with the heroines hearing the protagonist voice they were kinda to calm and accepting of it rather quickly especially if how the sister just accepted the person she loved her og brother gone and being replaced. Other than that keep up the good work I'm enjoying it.
Revelar spoiler I read upto to 45 chaps till now and this novel has been great so far, world building and action parts are done very well, the battles were thrilling and exciting and plots are interesting and it's fun to read. And as for the romance and harem part it's nice but Mc seems a little dense but I hope that changes with time, since for a harem novel he got to be proactive to manage his harem in future as the girls seems to be yandere-ish. Hope there will be a romance arc for both Elise and Aria and each of the potential harem members in future. Last but not the least the thought reading part was done well, so I am looking forward to how aria and others use that for their own and mcs benefits. Overall this book is amazing so far. Keep up the good work author 👍.
I like the 2 different protagonists, not something I’ve seen before much, especially in apocalyptic novels I like that there is little grammatical errors I like the character development, first few chapters were exceptional I like the world background, 10 different worlds to write about sounds like a handful but I definitely hope to see you pull it off I like the update stability, around 14 a week is optimal Hoping to see more heroines that can hear is thoughts and use it in unique ways, although Aria is a a amazing character, the way she uses his thoughts is kinda bland. Hoping to see Elise and Rin falling in love, it would be kinda awkward to have to different protagaimsts going on different paths Although there hasn’t been,a completely lewd scene, the ones that are available now are definitely not disappointing Some referemce images for the main characters would definitely help with the immersion in the story This novel has tones of potential and I hope that you continue to write, your definitely a good author Merry Christmas btw
i like that in this novel FMC is going to get her own part with system and also feels like she has her own revenge story which will be interesting to read. mc is cautious one which is good and i wanted to know what happens in old world so hope author make a chapter to tell the ending on earth. Update is also good and great novel give it a try
so there are two mc in the novel each having there own system and i know that both will be lovers in future . until now i am enjoying this novel and can say that it has great potential. and yeah certain girls(most likely heroines) can hear his voice but i think the main FMC can'
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Good novel nothing to criticize right now apart from the fact that Elize reincarnated with the Mc, they are not even lovers and the First World Rin came from was interesting.
I have to say that I was fairly surprised at how much I just couldn't put this down. It's like similar novels in a certain sense but for the most part it's been very original. I really look forward to the future and I honestly can't tell where it's going because the author does such a good job keeping you on your toes.
Well I was really interested in this story…too bad it paywalls. Guess I’ll just go find a new story instead. That doesn’t hit a paywall with 35 chapters.
I read upto chapter 97 so far. And so far I would say the story is developing really well. The only complain I have so far is the protagonist of the world getting spared from suffering every time while troubling our Mcs Rin and Elise. It's kinda feels frustrating to see that delusional and disgusting protagonist suffering no consequences at all. I hope Elise and Rin could put that protagonist in his place soon.
so far so good I'm at chapter 70 story is starting to get really good, (btw I love academy arks) so I'm hyped for this everything is pretty good not much to complain about tbh I just hope you don't over do it with the fluffy.
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Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31 Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
Spoilers I don't know how to use the spoiler tag so this is your warning also my review isn't that good I am loving what you are doing so far. My only problem being I feel with the heroines hearing the protagonist voice they were kinda to calm and accepting of it rather quickly especially if how the sister just accepted the person she loved her og brother gone and being replaced. Other than that keep up the good work I'm enjoying it.
Revelar spoiler I read upto to 45 chaps till now and this novel has been great so far, world building and action parts are done very well, the battles were thrilling and exciting and plots are interesting and it's fun to read. And as for the romance and harem part it's nice but Mc seems a little dense but I hope that changes with time, since for a harem novel he got to be proactive to manage his harem in future as the girls seems to be yandere-ish. Hope there will be a romance arc for both Elise and Aria and each of the potential harem members in future. Last but not the least the thought reading part was done well, so I am looking forward to how aria and others use that for their own and mcs benefits. Overall this book is amazing so far. Keep up the good work author 👍.
I like the 2 different protagonists, not something I’ve seen before much, especially in apocalyptic novels I like that there is little grammatical errors I like the character development, first few chapters were exceptional I like the world background, 10 different worlds to write about sounds like a handful but I definitely hope to see you pull it off I like the update stability, around 14 a week is optimal Hoping to see more heroines that can hear is thoughts and use it in unique ways, although Aria is a a amazing character, the way she uses his thoughts is kinda bland. Hoping to see Elise and Rin falling in love, it would be kinda awkward to have to different protagaimsts going on different paths Although there hasn’t been,a completely lewd scene, the ones that are available now are definitely not disappointing Some referemce images for the main characters would definitely help with the immersion in the story This novel has tones of potential and I hope that you continue to write, your definitely a good author Merry Christmas btw
i like that in this novel FMC is going to get her own part with system and also feels like she has her own revenge story which will be interesting to read. mc is cautious one which is good and i wanted to know what happens in old world so hope author make a chapter to tell the ending on earth. Update is also good and great novel give it a try
so there are two mc in the novel each having there own system and i know that both will be lovers in future . until now i am enjoying this novel and can say that it has great potential. and yeah certain girls(most likely heroines) can hear his voice but i think the main FMC can'
Great novel don't give up on it 👍 great novel don't give up on it 👍Great novel don't give up on it 👍 great novel don't give up on it 👍Great novel don't give up on it 👍 great novel don't give up on it 👍
Good novel nothing to criticize right now apart from the fact that Elize reincarnated with the Mc, they are not even lovers and the First World Rin came from was interesting.
I have to say that I was fairly surprised at how much I just couldn't put this down. It's like similar novels in a certain sense but for the most part it's been very original. I really look forward to the future and I honestly can't tell where it's going because the author does such a good job keeping you on your toes.