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Jon knows nothing because the author somehow considers 1-2 sentences, maybe a paragraph a full chapter. I mean making the title literal is a bit much lazy bones.
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The title is a bit misleading. But anyways story has potential but the lot of it felt rushed.......like very rushed. Even before he enters the academy he seems to have a lot of power compared to his peers. Well if the author took the time to explain MC's rise to power than it'll be a good enough read.
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I am reviewing my own work becase I Can i promise to udate stably I also only giving myself 4 stars Ghnjkkkkjjjjjjhgffdtyujiitffghjjhhhhhhhh
story feels rushed and you forcing malfoy to harassed the mc for no reason makes no sense at all. malfoy messes with grypghs not claws so he would not single a claw out for no reason. if you are going to use cannon for content please do a better job there is no way he could hear something from the 2nd floor bathroom on the 7th floor when they didn't hear it from the great hall and no way he could have made it in time since he would have to deal with the moving stairs. if you are going to abuse cannon for content atleast make it believe able.
Geat story ! But the chapter posting is bit slow, i know it is a lot of work but this story doesnt get so much views because of that and i dont want this story to disaper. But still great fic😍👍
Jon knows nothing because the author somehow considers 1-2 sentences, maybe a paragraph a full chapter. I mean making the title literal is a bit much lazy bones.
[img=empfehlen] _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The title is a bit misleading. But anyways story has potential but the lot of it felt rushed.......like very rushed. Even before he enters the academy he seems to have a lot of power compared to his peers. Well if the author took the time to explain MC's rise to power than it'll be a good enough read.
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I am reviewing my own work becase I Can i promise to udate stably I also only giving myself 4 stars Ghnjkkkkjjjjjjhgffdtyujiitffghjjhhhhhhhh
story feels rushed and you forcing malfoy to harassed the mc for no reason makes no sense at all. malfoy messes with grypghs not claws so he would not single a claw out for no reason. if you are going to use cannon for content please do a better job there is no way he could hear something from the 2nd floor bathroom on the 7th floor when they didn't hear it from the great hall and no way he could have made it in time since he would have to deal with the moving stairs. if you are going to abuse cannon for content atleast make it believe able.
Geat story ! But the chapter posting is bit slow, i know it is a lot of work but this story doesnt get so much views because of that and i dont want this story to disaper. But still great fic😍👍