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author are you ok ? I have a feeling some girl had hurt you so bad, that you were compeleled to write this fanfic. are you just getting over your complicated emotions through venting in this plot?
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No lean esta basura parece sacado de Mtl y la traducción es una completa basura Puro control mental es como estar teniendo sexo contigo mismo Además el mata a todas sus waifus para convertirse en un dios y ir a otro mundo Q completa basura novela de mrd como perdí mi tiempo en esto
I don't think this is bad , but I prefer Miku Yotsuba Itsuki Ichika Nino ... I don't think this is bad , but I prefer Miku Yotsuba Itsuki Ichika Nino ... I don't think this is bad , but I prefer Miku Yotsuba Itsuki Ichika Nino ... I don't think this is bad , but I prefer Miku Yotsuba Itsuki Ichika Nino ...
i dont get why some people like this so much other than their being paid or are all fake
Mc trash kills his harem. And he starts over every time . 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
MC SWITCHES BODIES SO I DROPPED AND HE KILL ALL HIS WIFES SO HE COULD GROW STROGER
the story is ok, but him just resting and killing all the world's is just trash, because he doesn't have growth, or consequences or to be more accurate, personality. unfortunately, the story doesn't have a timeline, to be honest, doesn't change either the mc, os the side characters, to be fair, just put in the summary that is a separate story each volume, just the character that is "the same"
I liked the date a live part the most , So I won't comments on brainwashing part . Best of luck and thanks for the novel!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously , don't drop this novel .
Summary of the fic are the sexual fantasies of the author. uses mind control to attack both his mother and other girls sexually
brainwashing people to gain their feeling this looks more like an ntr p*rn vibe than a reincarnation fanfic ...
... ... ok... grammar is not bad... but... you decided that for mc to travel to other animes... he MUST DESTROY THE CURRENT UNIVERSE. Killing all his lovers... are you F serious!?... you are literally using the lovers in each world as toilet paper!
Es cada vez peor............................................... .................................................... .................................................... ......................................
Well I have no problem with the power of MC (Mind Control)etc, If I find something that doesn't make sense I ignore it and think with my head {This is a work of fiction} So I can accept something that doesn't make sense here. I'm a reader who is neither smart nor stupid, I'm just a reader who can distinguish and enjoy a work of FanFiction and an original work. Sorry if my words offend you, it's not my intention.
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Absolutely VILE and disgusting this is the scum bag is LITERALLY BRAINWASHING CHILDREN f##king KIDS
Bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,Bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,Bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,Bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,
The main male lead is mister Edgy, but he is also a rapist. Postscript, search in google: edgy Urban Dictionary [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I hate brainwashing someone to feel different emotions or a certain way towards someone . Makes it not genuine imo. Plot makes no sense first few chapters and just gets worse when he makes his mother love him more through brainwashing.
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it's getting worse.........................................................................................................................................................................................
Another wet dream fanfic huh... i couldn't not help but excited and speechless at the same time... only thing I hate is brainwashing.....................................................
This story isnt really mine the Main Character is brainwashing with his mind controll That all the girls to love and Serve him i dont really have a problem with harem if They have some logic in them
[img=recommend]..................................................................................,....,....,.......,,..........................,.............,,,
the protagonist uses brainwashing a lot they shouldn't have given him that power it destroyed all logic and romance sucks................................
Todo apesta !! Y lo peor es el lavado de cerebro🤮🤮🤮🤮 estos fanfic dan asco en general una porquería mejor ni lo lean solo les dará asco Pinché fanfic basura, el que se le ocurrió esto debe estar bien urgido 🤢🤣🤣
Revelar spoiler author are you ok ? I have a feeling some girl had hurt you so bad, that you were compeleled to write this fanfic. are you just getting over your complicated emotions through venting in this plot?
Revelar spoiler No lean esta basura parece sacado de Mtl y la traducción es una completa basura Puro control mental es como estar teniendo sexo contigo mismo Además el mata a todas sus waifus para convertirse en un dios y ir a otro mundo Q completa basura novela de mrd como perdí mi tiempo en esto
I don't think this is bad , but I prefer Miku Yotsuba Itsuki Ichika Nino ... I don't think this is bad , but I prefer Miku Yotsuba Itsuki Ichika Nino ... I don't think this is bad , but I prefer Miku Yotsuba Itsuki Ichika Nino ... I don't think this is bad , but I prefer Miku Yotsuba Itsuki Ichika Nino ...
i dont get why some people like this so much other than their being paid or are all fake
Mc trash kills his harem. And he starts over every time . 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
MC SWITCHES BODIES SO I DROPPED AND HE KILL ALL HIS WIFES SO HE COULD GROW STROGER
the story is ok, but him just resting and killing all the world's is just trash, because he doesn't have growth, or consequences or to be more accurate, personality. unfortunately, the story doesn't have a timeline, to be honest, doesn't change either the mc, os the side characters, to be fair, just put in the summary that is a separate story each volume, just the character that is "the same"
I liked the date a live part the most , So I won't comments on brainwashing part . Best of luck and thanks for the novel!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously , don't drop this novel .
Summary of the fic are the sexual fantasies of the author. uses mind control to attack both his mother and other girls sexually
brainwashing people to gain their feeling this looks more like an ntr p*rn vibe than a reincarnation fanfic ...
... ... ok... grammar is not bad... but... you decided that for mc to travel to other animes... he MUST DESTROY THE CURRENT UNIVERSE. Killing all his lovers... are you F serious!?... you are literally using the lovers in each world as toilet paper!
Es cada vez peor............................................... .................................................... .................................................... ......................................
Well I have no problem with the power of MC (Mind Control)etc, If I find something that doesn't make sense I ignore it and think with my head {This is a work of fiction} So I can accept something that doesn't make sense here. I'm a reader who is neither smart nor stupid, I'm just a reader who can distinguish and enjoy a work of FanFiction and an original work. Sorry if my words offend you, it's not my intention.
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Revelar spoiler Absolutely VILE and disgusting this is the scum bag is LITERALLY BRAINWASHING CHILDREN f##king KIDS
Bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,Bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,Bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,Bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,bad romance,
The main male lead is mister Edgy, but he is also a rapist. Postscript, search in google: edgy Urban Dictionary [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I hate brainwashing someone to feel different emotions or a certain way towards someone . Makes it not genuine imo. Plot makes no sense first few chapters and just gets worse when he makes his mother love him more through brainwashing.
Revelar spoiler it's getting worse.........................................................................................................................................................................................
Another wet dream fanfic huh... i couldn't not help but excited and speechless at the same time... only thing I hate is brainwashing.....................................................
This story isnt really mine the Main Character is brainwashing with his mind controll That all the girls to love and Serve him i dont really have a problem with harem if They have some logic in them
[img=recommend]..................................................................................,....,....,.......,,..........................,.............,,,
the protagonist uses brainwashing a lot they shouldn't have given him that power it destroyed all logic and romance sucks................................
Todo apesta !! Y lo peor es el lavado de cerebro🤮🤮🤮🤮 estos fanfic dan asco en general una porquería mejor ni lo lean solo les dará asco Pinché fanfic basura, el que se le ocurrió esto debe estar bien urgido 🤢🤣🤣
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