Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse

LV 6

InHisName

Has great potential, but alas, soon into the story there's a possible trigger for many. So here's a warning for those whom personally find such things to be nauseating. In chapter 6 MC is imprinted with a guardian seal by Mito. What's a guardian seal you might ask? A slave seal that enslaves him at the whimsy of the Uzumaki clan, or rather Kushina in specific. What's even worse is that the MC has had his suspicions months ago (in-story time) but still willingly paved the path to this event. Willingly paved the path to his own servitude. Power is meaningless if in the end of the day you're just a slave. If you don't mind this particular caveat then this is actually a rather unique story. The author's writing style in particular is engaging.

LV 14

Gabbu_Xul

Truely good story like the rest of Fanharem's work. One of the few authors that continously puts out good stuff. If you've read Jordinio's naruto story then you'll already know how the system works, for those that haven't, it's all about the grind. lol The story is set just before the second shinobi war and the MC is five years old. As alot happens in the war expect the first 60ish chapters to take place during this time period as the MC will be a kid, no lemons for you, yet. The author takes a more realistic view of the world and therefore what would happen in a war (I've already seen one review where they whine about 'everybody is r*ping') so if that's too much for you, sorry. But I will state that none of it is described or 'on screen' but heavily implied and discussed by characters. The world if filling out well, but the only gripe I have is that the MC has no real motivation outside of the harem, everything is for the harem, which is eternal. *Slightly spoilery* As to the supposed *slave seal*, the seal that the MC is given by a clan head is to basically insure that the MC doesn't kill or cause irreparable harm to the clan hier, who is the MC's charge. It's explicitly stated that all the seal does is keep the MC from thinking or acting maliciously agains the clan heir (who is the MC's friend). How that equals a slave seal to others, I'm not sure. The clan head requests the seal as they've only know the MC for a few weeks, at best, and they want a little bit of insurance while they try to make ties with the MC and their clan. The MC accepts as they will be rewarded with a ton of multiple clans secret techniques by the system and the MC knows that the seal doesn't cause any major restrictions and they could get out of it if desired. Which proves true as the seal is removed pretty early on. I write this as the number one review gives inaccurate and incomplete statements about the seal and I'd rather not see a reader that may enjoy this turn away because of false impressions. Really the seal is a non-issue and is almost forgotten until it's brought up again upon it's removal, it has zero impact on the story or character development.

LV 10

asaade

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LV 2

Thebestofall

Although several things are not canon, it is interesting so far. And I understand perfectly the decisions that the MC is making, they are intelligent. Even so, I hope that the MC will not be restricted by others, although restricting itself gives it some advantages. [img=recomendar] I hope relationships develop like your other Avatar FF, it's awesome.

LV 11

Pythia

It was going great before he was made a slave and branded, so i give it a three as the writing is pretty good as are updates....................

LV 13

ArtoriaPendragon_

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LV 11

DogLickerGods

Honestly, I missed a lot of monologues in each chapter, especially in the battle and politics chapters. I originally came to read this book to see the MC's romance, but it seems I read the wrong book. The plot goes a bit slow and the character development is made too real as if the author doesn't want someone to complain about the romance too soon. But hey after reading 80 chapters, I felt like it was a waste of time because the romance was only in a few chapters. And I felt nauseous looking at the very long monologues with trite dialog that didn't really entertain me. I regret reading this, and I'm confused why people love this book. Because of the action chapters? Because of the political chapters? Wow your taste is really mature or maybe I'm too childish to understand this book.

LV 13

TSO7

I want the Orochimaru idea. You must make it happen cdfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

LV 14

Simone007

I had high expectations after reading quest maker, but this novel just seems a bad copy of it. I couldn’t even continue reading it after the mc, who at that time was a 4 year old kid, was perfectly fine with being manipulated by the Uzumaki clan into becoming a slave and having his mind altered.

LV 14

skyhound

Thoroughly enjoying the novel, has the right amount of sweet system progress, good characterization and dialogue. I like the mc and can't wait to read more.

LV 14

L00P3R

I like how you make this fic fresh and unique with the OC MC and the Au plotline. Relationships between characters also feel very natural and overall entertaining to read. The gamer system is also well done. Not always more functions equals a better system. I like how your system is simple and easy to understand, yet there is still that excitement which comes with rising numbers in skill levels. You should definitely continue in writing this. I can't wait to see what this fic will look like with more chapters and a more developed plot.

LV 5

gman12567

So normally I wouldn't give 5 stars but it seems like a lot of edge lords have given this story bad reviews because he took on a guardian seal that the only negative effect is he can't kill kushina (his future wife) and its noted he's skilled enough to take it off at anytime (plus they offer to take it off if he wants) and in return he got access to the Uzumaki legacy (second best legacy in naruto), along with eventual access to the senju legacy (the best legacy in the nartuo verse) along with their protection and full access to their resources and full political support he's practically a second clan head. Now for normal people this is a deal that is unimaginably favored to him so it makes it esspecailly funny when I see the 15 year old edge lords come out of the wood work and get salty cause he took a great deal that has no actual negative effects because they need a mc that is the strongest in the verse at age 5, he's also got to face slap everyone, and get every girl before he hits puberty if you like that kind of trash ghostz has plenty of it go over and read his stuff. These people are why most of the books on this site are trash cause the edge lords try to project their trash taste to everyone else

LV 15

Zerus

A nasty beta mc the volunteer a slave became absolute trash. write better in the description that the mc voluntarily become a slave f*** it that oroshimaru maybe female. Beta Mc hate more people than gender change

LV 5

PsyLoRD

mc is still 6 after 47 chapters

LV 3

Targas

Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST Harem is the BEST

LV 4

PUERKO_Senpai

It is quite entertaining, although the first lemons have not yet occurred (chapter 10) .............................................................................................................................................................

LV 2

Genesis_999

Lol this people yeah it's a "guardian seal" and he took it cuz he can inherit both senju and uzumaki heritage but at what cost? Becoming kushina's plaything cuz he can't hut her or tsunade for that matter or nagato and karin too it's basically a slave seal just that they named it "Guardian" Seal. mind you in the anime kushina is trashy with how she treats naruto but in this she is a one he ll of a b i ch mc knew what he would get if he accepted the guardian seal that's what he got so welp yes this novel and author are trashy (a sf) and I read reviews says it doesn't matter lol what? Go take your {M} as s elsewhere he is basically a slave for life. And if it got removed even then this mc and fanfic is trash he would still choose kushina even after all the sh !ts she did to him now tell me is this a good fanfic too you? Lowlife frog with their disgusting world view

LV 4

Knight087

I am liking this fan-fic. Good overall grammar, nice conversations, just keep it up. I wanted to give you 5 stars after reading the synopsis only, but decided to give it a read first, and we'll I was not wrong.

LV 5

Wargram

Usually i hate systems but not this one Author manage to expand world very nicely No @#$%^&* like overpowered from start but slow and steady build And this novel feels like it all can happens Good job author

LV 12

Krypton71

Author is too big-brain. This is some good sh * t. I went through the reviews about the slave thing and it has me confused because besides actually putting the seal on himself, I can’t recall a single moment it was abused (let alone used). Yeah, I get the fact that even accepting the seal is annoying but idk… how do you expect an orphan to rise in the ranks without some sacrifice. Especially sacrifice of such a small significance. Author: I like how your works try to be logical instead of forcing your way through random ideas that come to you. I just remembered… I feel like I already reviewed this on scribble. Hm ima go check.