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the quality of the story looks good, only in terms of writing that needs to be considered, especially the point of view and others, the rest is worthy of a contract[img=recommend][img=recommend]
the story is good, hope it gives a romantic scent to the MC. Hopefully the work goes smoothly and can be signed by Webnovel soon, Thor's spirit [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
100th reincarnation, it was tantamount to exceeding a God. And in the 100th life wanting to relax being an Academy student, hmmm makes people curious and interested.
in terms of story, plot and so on, it's good, but in terms of writing, it needs a little improvement, especially the point of view used. the rest is worthy of a contract 😁😁
The story is good, it makes the reader curious and asks where it will go next. However, in terms of writing, there are a few problems, especially the point of view that often changes. Hope it can be fixed
overall everything is good, only in terms of writing that must be considered. nothing is perfect, but at least the lessons that make us perfect
my head hurts just by reading it, the MC is supposed to be a man of 99 lives and wants to live in peace.... he speaks at the age of 2, I pass him, he beats his teacher with unknown magic, I pass him, he behaves like a child, I umm I pass him, he beats his director, this I can't stand anymore... where a child can beat an adult (and that adult doesn't question anything, as if it doesn't matter that a child has that power) , then use advanced-level space magic or something to break a barrier in a children's match, in a children's match (he wasn't supposed to stand out).... and finally and to drop this, the MC is a BETA that does not know about relationships, another child approaches the love interest of the MC and it seems that they had something, I do not know if I have read much, but these are symptoms of netorare ..... netorare = (MC beta /third character /dissatisfied woman) ----10----
the storyline is good, the character development is also cool, only there are flaws in the writing.. this seems to be the result of Thor's translation, right? need to be considered again in writing, the rest is satisfying [img=recommend][img=recommend]
the story is good, not boring and boring... there are only a few writings that are still lacking, more than that it is satisfactory for the readers [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hi there, Sharon here, FL Editor from Webnovel. This is regarding your Bronze win for WPC268. Kindly reach out to me on Discord at sharonyap#0439 for your rewards. Thanks!
the quality of the story looks good, only in terms of writing that needs to be considered, especially the point of view and others, the rest is worthy of a contract[img=recommend][img=recommend]
the story is good, hope it gives a romantic scent to the MC. Hopefully the work goes smoothly and can be signed by Webnovel soon, Thor's spirit [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
100th reincarnation, it was tantamount to exceeding a God. And in the 100th life wanting to relax being an Academy student, hmmm makes people curious and interested.
in terms of story, plot and so on, it's good, but in terms of writing, it needs a little improvement, especially the point of view used. the rest is worthy of a contract 😁😁
The story is good, it makes the reader curious and asks where it will go next. However, in terms of writing, there are a few problems, especially the point of view that often changes. Hope it can be fixed
overall everything is good, only in terms of writing that must be considered. nothing is perfect, but at least the lessons that make us perfect
my head hurts just by reading it, the MC is supposed to be a man of 99 lives and wants to live in peace.... he speaks at the age of 2, I pass him, he beats his teacher with unknown magic, I pass him, he behaves like a child, I umm I pass him, he beats his director, this I can't stand anymore... where a child can beat an adult (and that adult doesn't question anything, as if it doesn't matter that a child has that power) , then use advanced-level space magic or something to break a barrier in a children's match, in a children's match (he wasn't supposed to stand out).... and finally and to drop this, the MC is a BETA that does not know about relationships, another child approaches the love interest of the MC and it seems that they had something, I do not know if I have read much, but these are symptoms of netorare ..... netorare = (MC beta /third character /dissatisfied woman) ----10----
the storyline is good, the character development is also cool, only there are flaws in the writing.. this seems to be the result of Thor's translation, right? need to be considered again in writing, the rest is satisfying [img=recommend][img=recommend]
the story is good, not boring and boring... there are only a few writings that are still lacking, more than that it is satisfactory for the readers [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hi there, Sharon here, FL Editor from Webnovel. This is regarding your Bronze win for WPC268. Kindly reach out to me on Discord at sharonyap#0439 for your rewards. Thanks!