Ryan makin jatuh cinta
pengen deh punya seperti ini
akhirnya rilis juga cinta anak Sekolah menengah atas, selalu suka dengan karya Thor Si_Koplak, jaya selalu Thor. Salam dari Sumatera 🙏🙏🙏🙏
The story is good, it makes the reader curious and asks where it will go next. However, in terms of writing, there are a few problems, especially the point of view that often changes. Hope it can be fixed
The story is good, it makes the reader curious and asks where it will go next. However, in terms of writing, there are a few problems, especially the point of view that often changes. Hope it can be fixed
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keren
segi penulisan sedikit kurang rapi, jadi berharap kedepannya bisa diperbaiki lebih baik. Thor Si_Koplak yang selalu menawarkan Perjalanan petualangan [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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