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(Danmachi)To you who have my heart
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(danmachi fan-fic)
Mark lost everything, the past he lived, the present he was living and the future he would live, all because of one bad decision, but his story didn't end there. Making a deal with the "god" who rules the cycle of reincarnation, Mark now had a new chance to be reunited with his beloved, but would he make it? or would he become just a pawn on a bigger board?
Disclaimer: I do not own the rights to danmachi or its characters.
The cover used was taken from google and all credit goes to the artist who made it.
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Hi readers here is the author, I hope you like my story, for more information go to the first chapter of the auxiliary volume which will be updated from time to time
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
I love it really good and can't wait for more ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ 😮😮😮😮😮😲😲😲😲😲😮😲😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the story is good and love story between mark and selene is awesome 👍 and pls dont dont the story like the others
I have to be honest, I don't mind the story. I'm not saying the plot is super original but it still attracts interest and the character interaction is smooth and not at all forced. Also, the fact that the Mc gradually becomes strong and doesn't start op immediately is an extra score. The only downside would be the grammar of the first few chapters, but the author has started correcting them so I can't say much more.
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story is bad. a lot of weird problems going on. it is like mc doing both imposibble job and total waste. it is not a fantasy, it is a conspiracy. totally wortless.
Solid MC personality, Solid goal and the skills which are not that overpower but fast growth. I really like the way author handle the emotional problems and the fighting style of MC is really is my cup of tea. Thank you author for writing such a magnificent and cool fanfic of danmachi.
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
GJ and please review my novel: It is wrong to abuse psionic abilities in a Dungeon? Danmachi FF PSIONICDANMACHI It is wrong to abuse psionic abilities in a Dungeon? Danmachi FF PSIONICDANMACHI
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Volumen 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volumen 1 : the world of Gekkai
- 1 Prologue 1(corrected) 2 years ago
- 2 Prologue 2(corrected) 2 years ago
- 3 Prologue 3(corrected) 2 years ago
- 4 Epilogue 4(corrected) 2 years ago
- 5 'God' and agreement (corrected) 2 years ago
- 6 notifications 2 years ago
- 7 A new world (Corrected) 2 years ago
- 8 Promise(corrected) 2 years ago
- 9 End of the first day(Corrected) 2 years ago
- 10 'Heart of golem'(corrected) 2 years ago
- 11 Lets hunt(corrected) 2 years ago
- 12 'Limit break' is broken(corrected) 2 years ago
- 13 Orario(corrected) 2 years ago
- 14 The guild and Eina(corrected) 2 years ago
- 15 Who is Syr?(corrected) 2 years ago
- 16 Dungeon and the problem with 'limit break' (Corrected) 2 years ago
- 17 First step towards magic(corrected) 2 years ago
- 18 Spoiler(corrected) 2 years ago
- 19 Spoiler(corrected) 2 years ago
- 20 Their determination(corrected) 2 years ago
- 21 It's broken(corrected) 2 years ago
- 22 A world without you(corrected) 2 years ago
- 23 Be my son(corrected) 2 years ago
- 24 5% of corruption(corrected) 2 years ago
- 25 Officially a new member(corrected) 2 years ago
- 26 Memories(corrected) 2 years ago
- 27 Progress(corrected) 2 years ago
- 28 Realization(corrected) 2 years ago
- 29 1st day of training/torture(corrected) 2 years ago
- 30 The importance of technique(corrected) 2 years ago
- 31 Let's go to the monsterphilia(corrected) 2 years ago
- 32 Her plan(corrected) 2 years ago
- 33 Monsters in the city(corrected) 2 years ago
- 34 Spoiler(corrected) 2 years ago
- 35 The two aspects of Orario(corrected) 2 years ago
- 36 The mystery of the tenth monster(corrected) 2 years ago
- 37 Maybe, but I still need to do it(corrected) 2 years ago
- 38 High-level adventurers (corrected) 2 years ago
- 39 Spoiler(corrected) 2 years ago
- 40 Chaos in the village(corrected) 2 years ago
- 41 The mysterious woman and impotence(corrected) 2 years ago
- 42 End of the battle(corrected) 2 years ago
- 43 Hunting on the 10th floor(corrected) 2 years ago
- 44 Create magic circles(corrected) 2 years ago
- 45 It's time to train with 'golem heart'(corrected) 2 years ago
- 46 11th floor and piercing a Hard Armored(corrected) 2 years ago
- 47 I didn't know that fog had hallucinogenic effects(corrected) 2 years ago
- 48 A new king of monsters is born(corrected) 2 years ago
- 49 The calm before the storm(corrected) 2 years ago
- 50 The appearance of the monster(corrected) 2 years ago
- 51 Mutation and beginning of the battle(corrected) 2 years ago
- 52 Spoiler(corrected) 2 years ago
- 53 Inside the subconscious(corrected) 2 years ago
- 54 Spoiler(corrected) 2 years ago
- 55 Level up(corrected) 2 years ago
Volumen 2 : volume002
- 56 information 2 years ago
- 57 Astraea and Zoe Elpis(1)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 58 Astraea and Zoe Elpis(2)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 59 Astraea and Zoe Elpis(end)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 60 Problems after problems(corrected) 2 years ago
- 61 A serene day(corrected) 2 years ago
- 62 Another failure and the goddess in love(corrected) 2 years ago
- 63 The potential of the new equipment(corrected) 2 years ago
- 64 The tiring 13th floor(corrected) 2 years ago
- 65 Orario is not a safe place(corrected) 2 years ago
- 66 The day before the expedition(corrected) 2 years ago
- 67 It is impossible to reason with an Amazon(corrected) 2 years ago
- 68 His name is Bell Cranel(corrected) 2 years ago
- 69 They are too motivated(corrected) 2 years ago
- 70 Large Tree Labyrinth(corrected) 2 years ago
- 71 26 more floors(corrected) 2 years ago
- 72 To remain human(corrected) 2 years ago
- 73 An exhausting exploration(corrected) 2 years ago
- 74 Improvement of the aura(corrected) 2 years ago
- 75 White palace(corrected) 2 years ago
- 76 A white wall(corrected) 2 years ago
- 77 Not a lucky day(correcetd) 2 years ago
- 78 spoiler(corrected) 2 years ago
- 79 Denatus(corrected) 2 years ago
- 80 50th floor(corrected) 2 years ago
- 81 End of the expedition(corrected) 2 years ago
- 82 Monster parade(corrected) 2 years ago
- 83 Who are you?(corrected) 2 years ago
- 84 Definitely a dream(corrected) 2 years ago
- 85 Impossible to read(corrected) 2 years ago
- 86 Chaos and origin(corrected) 2 years ago
- 87 Man's romance(corrected) 2 years ago
- 88 Finally on the surface(corrected) 2 years ago
- 89 A challenge(corrected) 2 years ago
- 90 A new magic(corrected) 2 years ago
- 91 Problems in Melen(corrected) 2 years ago
- 92 I suck at this(corrected) 2 years ago
- 93 Against a level 4(corrected) 2 years ago
- 94 Sisters(1)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 95 Sisters(2)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 96 Sisters(end)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 97 Why you?(corrected) 2 years ago
- 98 For a tomorrow / Guilt(corrected) 2 years ago
- 99 Forcing the second phase of the aura(corrected) 2 years ago
- 100 Against Tione(1)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 101 Against Tione(2)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 102 Against Tione(end)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 103 Trust/Next prey(corrected) 2 years ago
- 104 Darkness under the city(corrected) 2 years ago
- 105 David and Goliath(1)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 106 David and Goliath(2)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 107 David and Goliath(end)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 108 New sides(corrected) 2 years ago
- 109 Level 3(corrected) 2 years ago
- 110 Spoiler(corrected) 2 years ago
- 111 Chaos for the War Game(corrected) 2 years ago
- 112 Preparation for the War Game(corrected) 2 years ago
- 113 Teacher for a week(1)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 114 Teacher for a week(2)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 115 Teacher for a week(3)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 116 Teacher for a week(4)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 117 Teacher for a week(5)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 118 Teacher for a week(6)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 119 Teacher for a week(end)(corrected) 2 years ago
- 120 It was kind of fun(corrected) 1 years ago
- 121 Broken magic stat 1 years ago
- 122 Let the War Game Begin 1 years ago
- 123 War Game(1) 1 years ago
- 124 War Game(2) 1 years ago
- 125 War Game(end) 1 years ago
- 126 Mother-daughter conversation 1 years ago
- 127 Start of the fall 1 years ago
- 128 Knossos(1) 1 years ago
- 129 Knossos(2) 1 years ago
- 130 Knossos(3) 1 years ago
- 131 Knossos(4) 1 years ago
- 132 Knossos(5) 1 years ago
- 133 Knossos(6) 1 years ago
- 134 Knossos(7) 1 years ago
- 135 Knossos(end) 1 years ago
- 136 Consequences 1 years ago
- 137 Let the hunt begin 1 years ago
- 138 Is it a sin to be weak? 1 years ago
- 139 An amazon in love 1 years ago
- 140 Mistake 1 years ago
- 141 Date with the wolf 1 years ago
- 142 Assassins 1 years ago
- 143 Will you promise me? 1 years ago
- 144 Basilisk venom 1 years ago
- 145 Feelings 1 years ago
- 146 His fang 1 years ago
- 147 You are not alone 1 years ago
- 148 New proposal 1 years ago
- 149 Getting closer(1) 1 years ago
- 150 Story continuation notice(July 18th) 1 years ago
- 151 Getting closer(2) 1 years ago
- 152 Getting closer(3)+Spoiler 1 years ago
- 153 Getting closer(4) 1 years ago
- 154 Author: The choice is yours 10 months ago
- 155 selected choice 10 months ago
- 156 news 9 months ago
- 157 news 2 9 months ago
I don't have any professional advice to give but I would like to ask a question, this story's title is 'to you who have my heart' now in the auxiliary chapter you said that there will be harem now it sounds contradictory. I mean I kind of understand that how you might portray the mc. But it really reeks of hypocrisy how protagonist loved his wife only and after going to another world he forgets her and gets a harem. BTW, I don't know what will the future direction of story will take place but let's say you that mc became strong and got back to his original world to get to his wife now then the harem will be the problem and if you don't go that route and mc gets harem and is not able to go to his original world then what meaning will the story's title hold?