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Finished it. No need to read out of fear of missing out. Got tiring to read around chapter 350. The story progression comes to a grinding halt as we go into a 200 chapter arc that overstays its welcome. The drawn out fights are the worst part of this story. The author canon write combat, so dedicating multiple chapters works against them. Common tropes infest every chapter like a plague. Tropes in itself are not bad, but they get employed in uninteresting ways. The main character is a cookie-cutter MC. Supporting characters get pushed aside frequently. World building could have been good but the plot stalled.
Too many jab at system and definitely too many mentions of "I read this in novel and movies", " just like games i played" of previous life. I kind of may take a little understanding if its just few new chapters that mentions previous life similarity and stories. gave a little chance and still read but after more than 100 chapters i had to give up. This novel is not very innovative, funny nor it is adventurous which I personally think is necessary for a novel which this novel just doesn't have a correct way to display.
I have no choice but to leave a review this novel is badI stopped at chapter 339 I still don't understand why the heaven will have a will and isn't it suppose to be fair and just in the way it tackles a problem but this heaven is different imagine the heaven talking to the MC It looks like dis is the author self created heaven and not general heaven other author use
I just feel like I wasted some precious time reading this. The MC is not very vigilant in people he meets in a world where killing and betrayal runs rampant. The MCs IQ is a negative when women comes in the picture. Its a drop for me. The story may be better later but for me, the start was bad enough.
Overall the story is good, but they did not end the story. Don't read if you expect any type of proper ending to a story. It is in the middle of a conflict scene for the last chapter.
This novel is just bad. Straight bad. I don't expect a super smart or intelligent MC but come on. He should be atleast normal. This one is a retard. No commen sense. When there is someone trying to kill him, he just stands there looking at a beautiful female lead. The writing is just bad. The author probably thinks this is funny and there are joke's but it's honestly just bad. Dense, stupid, pervert, complaining to the system even though without it he wouldn't be able to survive 5 minutes in the cultivation world. It's like a monkey or a toddler holding a gun.
absolute garbage do not read do not waste your money don't even use your free chapters and they don't even finish it regret ever spending on it
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Worst translation I ve seen. ”he” becomes “she” on the next line and comes back to ”he” later. ”soul condensation” becomes “spirit refinement” then “soul refinement”. Can’t remember all but last is “ye cheng” becoming “ye city” and “flat river dynasty” becoming “ping jiang dynasty. The story is still pretty good but the translation is even worse than google translate
MC is actually acting like a fool in every single situation this makes the MC not suitable to be a good character for the story . Overall the story is very interesting for all the hard work goes in vain
the MC are dumb and author copy paste some story to make MC stupid. he know that the system need copper to get stronger yet MC been force to learn martial art to become stong since thia is martial artis story. meh.. MC are from other world so he much know how to raise money so why not be trader or sort? or even on sect/clan, why not try to train something that can raise more copper. this show how much the author want to force the story with whatever system in mind.
I'm so confused this is the second time it's in the free reading state? like that can happen????????? can anyone clue me in on this? like I'm so confused.
this is hilarious its like the face slapping inother chinese novels but alot of the time its not fighting. Instead it's showing off this together with this interesting sytem used is really nice.
This book keeps ending up in the limited free to read. The first 250 chapters were pretty good then I just lost interest in this. I tried reading it again every time it pops back up but it doesn’t hold any interest for me any more.
Only read to chapter 157. The concept is not too bad, The system is not too overly powerfull like those "sign in" systems, but The mc is portrayed so anoying and stupid that it ruins The novel. The grammar aswell is sometimes cancer inducing. and there are quite alot of contradictions of what has been written earlier. If you have a lot of coins to spend, then it's not to bad just to have something to read. I would rather recomend "Realizing this os a wuxia world after cultivating for 300 years" It is slow, but way more enjoyable than this one so far. The writing is atleast of good quality
a story ruined by the author who thinks treating his audience like idiots would make for a good story. Add to that a main character who despite being an adult has the mind of a 13 yr old boy with too many hormones raging through his system. Evey good looking girl has to be slobbered over in his mind, it is really disgusting and no wonder that women are completely fed up with guys who say these things out loud. Not all readers are male and not all readers enjoy the lewd thoughts of a guy who is supposed to have outgrown those thoughts long before he even transmigrated. The writing quality is horrible too because too often the author wants to explain how the world works through conversations that the main character has. The problem with this is that inevitably the questions are about subjects where the answer is fairly obvious as a result most of what is discussed just make the main character look dumb, look like someone who doesn't have the ability to make inferences from publicly available knowledge but most of all it make the reader look dumb because the author assumes that these are the questions that the reader wants answered, this is the knowledge the reader needs to know while the majority of it the reader already knows just from the author writing about the world. It is much better to let a narrator explain how it works and cover the mc's lack of knowledge with a simple 'he asked several questions' line that is than followed by the narrator explaining / stating how it works.
I actually kinda liked this story...and then they stopped translating it. Now they are using MTL or something because it's basically unreadable. genders, names, basic grammar, they all change without any pattern or reason:(
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trash novel honestly like the idea of the system started good but it literally went downhill in 1 chapter by making the mc so stupid its amazing how he could even say his name without making mistakes also the power levels became so stupid later like the guy was literally lvl 5 and got it in like 5 years i know he got a system but literally in 1 week he became lvl 28 and the people around him was like wow so talented no thats not talen he literally goes afew levels every day like that trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel
the MC is basically... not a person? has no motivation, randomly goes to where The Plot is happening, and the story just feels cheap? like I could not care any less about any of the characters, they all just feel super flat
supremely cliche. a complete copy cat with a idiotic writing and no sense of humour. it's as bad as a webnovel can get.. every other characters are idiots with the mc being the biggest one.
Bad just horrifically bad. I almost never leave reviews but this story is bad to the point that I feel the need to leave one. The system is overly complicated to the point of not needing a cheat sheet. The mechanics behind everything is even worse. The MC is so dumb I feel like I am less intelligent for having any insight into his thoughts. The cliches are ridiculous without being funny. This is a few hours of my life I will never get back and I am mad about it
I love the mass release💙💙💙 and how OP the main character is and I also love their brotherhood. I also like how fast the pace is, the background, how strong the MC is and not dumb/stupid and not easily attracted to girls/women (FYI it's just my opinion). Overall, it is a very good story for me and I can't wait to read it to the end!
Ight so this story is bad don’t waste your time everything is written like a funny parody without the funny the mc lived for five years saving money so he could activate the system but as soon as he activated it he instantly became a wasteful idiot. I had high hopes but all I received was endless cringe and dumb characters
DId not worth my 10 minutes reading First 3 caps… por history, lack of creativity… A total deception. Save your time and just skip this novel.
The ultimate problem with this story is that the system is too all-encompassing and intrusive. There are many moments where something urgent is happening RIGHT NOW in front of the MCs face, but then there will be paragraphs of digression because of the system. The feeling that the MC is just standing and staring slack-jawed off into space (interacting with his system) while important plot events happen around him appears just a few too many times for my taste. Moreover, the system really just has too many features (just like a real pay-to-win shop). There's a section for MCs cultivation, techniques, and body tempering, there's a section for mounts, for battle pets, for random daily events like parkour, for a "trial tower" he can climb for rewards, for an instance space where he can fight "bosses" he's met in the real world(daily), for a gold farming space, for his personal equipment which he collects by killing monsters and getting "drops", for "synthesis" which can combine pills, techniques, or equipment to make them stronger/higher-grade, for a "gem" sub-section which includes a gem dungeon he can run daily to accumulate gems which can be socketed into his equipment for minor stat increases, for a daily sign-in reward, for a shop that sells items and limited-time gift-bags and not one, not two, but THREE separate currencies to make the whole thing run. And you know what all that stuff actually is? That's word count bayyybeeee~ Seriously, so much of the word count is just MC interacting with the system to get stronger, and so much of the plot just IS the system. The plot feels at once both rushed and like it's dragging because the MC gets stronger so quickly using the system (making it feel rushed) but "quickly" is only relative to time passing in-universe, we readers have to read chapter after chapter of system nonsense to justify his speedy power-ups (making it feel like the story is dragging). At least, that was my impression. The few good points of the story (like MC's bond with his two friends from the sect, which was actually written surprisingly well for a cultivation novel) all get drowned out by a torrent of different system-related shenanigans and its ever-increasing feature creep.
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the only review that matters. The book isn't finished and stops mid sentence!!! waste of time, money, etc.
Finished it. No need to read out of fear of missing out. Got tiring to read around chapter 350. The story progression comes to a grinding halt as we go into a 200 chapter arc that overstays its welcome. The drawn out fights are the worst part of this story. The author canon write combat, so dedicating multiple chapters works against them. Common tropes infest every chapter like a plague. Tropes in itself are not bad, but they get employed in uninteresting ways. The main character is a cookie-cutter MC. Supporting characters get pushed aside frequently. World building could have been good but the plot stalled.
Too many jab at system and definitely too many mentions of "I read this in novel and movies", " just like games i played" of previous life. I kind of may take a little understanding if its just few new chapters that mentions previous life similarity and stories. gave a little chance and still read but after more than 100 chapters i had to give up. This novel is not very innovative, funny nor it is adventurous which I personally think is necessary for a novel which this novel just doesn't have a correct way to display.
I have no choice but to leave a review this novel is badI stopped at chapter 339 I still don't understand why the heaven will have a will and isn't it suppose to be fair and just in the way it tackles a problem but this heaven is different imagine the heaven talking to the MC It looks like dis is the author self created heaven and not general heaven other author use
I just feel like I wasted some precious time reading this. The MC is not very vigilant in people he meets in a world where killing and betrayal runs rampant. The MCs IQ is a negative when women comes in the picture. Its a drop for me. The story may be better later but for me, the start was bad enough.
Overall the story is good, but they did not end the story. Don't read if you expect any type of proper ending to a story. It is in the middle of a conflict scene for the last chapter.
This novel is just bad. Straight bad. I don't expect a super smart or intelligent MC but come on. He should be atleast normal. This one is a retard. No commen sense. When there is someone trying to kill him, he just stands there looking at a beautiful female lead. The writing is just bad. The author probably thinks this is funny and there are joke's but it's honestly just bad. Dense, stupid, pervert, complaining to the system even though without it he wouldn't be able to survive 5 minutes in the cultivation world. It's like a monkey or a toddler holding a gun.
absolute garbage do not read do not waste your money don't even use your free chapters and they don't even finish it regret ever spending on it
Revelar spoiler Worst translation I ve seen. ”he” becomes “she” on the next line and comes back to ”he” later. ”soul condensation” becomes “spirit refinement” then “soul refinement”. Can’t remember all but last is “ye cheng” becoming “ye city” and “flat river dynasty” becoming “ping jiang dynasty. The story is still pretty good but the translation is even worse than google translate
MC is actually acting like a fool in every single situation this makes the MC not suitable to be a good character for the story . Overall the story is very interesting for all the hard work goes in vain
the MC are dumb and author copy paste some story to make MC stupid. he know that the system need copper to get stronger yet MC been force to learn martial art to become stong since thia is martial artis story. meh.. MC are from other world so he much know how to raise money so why not be trader or sort? or even on sect/clan, why not try to train something that can raise more copper. this show how much the author want to force the story with whatever system in mind.
I'm so confused this is the second time it's in the free reading state? like that can happen????????? can anyone clue me in on this? like I'm so confused.
this is hilarious its like the face slapping inother chinese novels but alot of the time its not fighting. Instead it's showing off this together with this interesting sytem used is really nice.
This book keeps ending up in the limited free to read. The first 250 chapters were pretty good then I just lost interest in this. I tried reading it again every time it pops back up but it doesn’t hold any interest for me any more.
Only read to chapter 157. The concept is not too bad, The system is not too overly powerfull like those "sign in" systems, but The mc is portrayed so anoying and stupid that it ruins The novel. The grammar aswell is sometimes cancer inducing. and there are quite alot of contradictions of what has been written earlier. If you have a lot of coins to spend, then it's not to bad just to have something to read. I would rather recomend "Realizing this os a wuxia world after cultivating for 300 years" It is slow, but way more enjoyable than this one so far. The writing is atleast of good quality
a story ruined by the author who thinks treating his audience like idiots would make for a good story. Add to that a main character who despite being an adult has the mind of a 13 yr old boy with too many hormones raging through his system. Evey good looking girl has to be slobbered over in his mind, it is really disgusting and no wonder that women are completely fed up with guys who say these things out loud. Not all readers are male and not all readers enjoy the lewd thoughts of a guy who is supposed to have outgrown those thoughts long before he even transmigrated. The writing quality is horrible too because too often the author wants to explain how the world works through conversations that the main character has. The problem with this is that inevitably the questions are about subjects where the answer is fairly obvious as a result most of what is discussed just make the main character look dumb, look like someone who doesn't have the ability to make inferences from publicly available knowledge but most of all it make the reader look dumb because the author assumes that these are the questions that the reader wants answered, this is the knowledge the reader needs to know while the majority of it the reader already knows just from the author writing about the world. It is much better to let a narrator explain how it works and cover the mc's lack of knowledge with a simple 'he asked several questions' line that is than followed by the narrator explaining / stating how it works.
I actually kinda liked this story...and then they stopped translating it. Now they are using MTL or something because it's basically unreadable. genders, names, basic grammar, they all change without any pattern or reason:(
simp simp simp. Author is a simp. Mc is a simp. Read this if u are a simp. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
trash novel honestly like the idea of the system started good but it literally went downhill in 1 chapter by making the mc so stupid its amazing how he could even say his name without making mistakes also the power levels became so stupid later like the guy was literally lvl 5 and got it in like 5 years i know he got a system but literally in 1 week he became lvl 28 and the people around him was like wow so talented no thats not talen he literally goes afew levels every day like that trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel trash novel
the MC is basically... not a person? has no motivation, randomly goes to where The Plot is happening, and the story just feels cheap? like I could not care any less about any of the characters, they all just feel super flat
supremely cliche. a complete copy cat with a idiotic writing and no sense of humour. it's as bad as a webnovel can get.. every other characters are idiots with the mc being the biggest one.
Bad just horrifically bad. I almost never leave reviews but this story is bad to the point that I feel the need to leave one. The system is overly complicated to the point of not needing a cheat sheet. The mechanics behind everything is even worse. The MC is so dumb I feel like I am less intelligent for having any insight into his thoughts. The cliches are ridiculous without being funny. This is a few hours of my life I will never get back and I am mad about it
I love the mass release💙💙💙 and how OP the main character is and I also love their brotherhood. I also like how fast the pace is, the background, how strong the MC is and not dumb/stupid and not easily attracted to girls/women (FYI it's just my opinion). Overall, it is a very good story for me and I can't wait to read it to the end!
Ight so this story is bad don’t waste your time everything is written like a funny parody without the funny the mc lived for five years saving money so he could activate the system but as soon as he activated it he instantly became a wasteful idiot. I had high hopes but all I received was endless cringe and dumb characters
DId not worth my 10 minutes reading First 3 caps… por history, lack of creativity… A total deception. Save your time and just skip this novel.
The ultimate problem with this story is that the system is too all-encompassing and intrusive. There are many moments where something urgent is happening RIGHT NOW in front of the MCs face, but then there will be paragraphs of digression because of the system. The feeling that the MC is just standing and staring slack-jawed off into space (interacting with his system) while important plot events happen around him appears just a few too many times for my taste. Moreover, the system really just has too many features (just like a real pay-to-win shop). There's a section for MCs cultivation, techniques, and body tempering, there's a section for mounts, for battle pets, for random daily events like parkour, for a "trial tower" he can climb for rewards, for an instance space where he can fight "bosses" he's met in the real world(daily), for a gold farming space, for his personal equipment which he collects by killing monsters and getting "drops", for "synthesis" which can combine pills, techniques, or equipment to make them stronger/higher-grade, for a "gem" sub-section which includes a gem dungeon he can run daily to accumulate gems which can be socketed into his equipment for minor stat increases, for a daily sign-in reward, for a shop that sells items and limited-time gift-bags and not one, not two, but THREE separate currencies to make the whole thing run. And you know what all that stuff actually is? That's word count bayyybeeee~ Seriously, so much of the word count is just MC interacting with the system to get stronger, and so much of the plot just IS the system. The plot feels at once both rushed and like it's dragging because the MC gets stronger so quickly using the system (making it feel rushed) but "quickly" is only relative to time passing in-universe, we readers have to read chapter after chapter of system nonsense to justify his speedy power-ups (making it feel like the story is dragging). At least, that was my impression. The few good points of the story (like MC's bond with his two friends from the sect, which was actually written surprisingly well for a cultivation novel) all get drowned out by a torrent of different system-related shenanigans and its ever-increasing feature creep.
,.......................................................................................................................................sucks
Revelar spoiler
the only review that matters. The book isn't finished and stops mid sentence!!! waste of time, money, etc.