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garbage. where is this story going..i dont even want to write anything else apart from garbage...skip this novel. ,.........................
I really like these kind of novels. but the problem with all of them is that the writing is awful, there is always sentences that don't make sense and always make the mc sound stupid af. and another thing is that they explain the same thing 2 or more times in different words
The story is meh the plot is weird and the mc gets betrayed by someone that hired him and the evil person basically does the I’m gonna explain my evil plan to you and the mc goes full retard and thinks maybe he didn’t mean to attack me
Thanks to you all for the reviews if not I would have wasted my money on what I wouldn't like..............................................................[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Honestly, at first I thought this was a good novel. But after reading a few pages I realized that this novel was too classic, and the plot was predictable. I'm slowly getting bored. When I was in my tens I didn't really want to read any more, this oath was really bad.
To be completely honest, I don't even know why I tried this novel. It's like a copy of every generic cultivation novel. Does webnovel take money form these authors to make them win the competition?
It's surprising how a single chapter can ruin everything. If you wonder why then check out the "falling off the cliff" chapter. I can't be even bothered to check the chapter number smh
Don't bother reading this story, it's a waste of time. System is horrible and incomprehensive, MC is brain dead and useless. Bad plot development.
Very good character development and suggest you all to read it was a nice time reading itVery good character development and suggest you all to read it was
Very good character development and suggest you all to read it was a nice time reading itVery good character development and suggest you all to read
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For me although a lot of people are saying this is bad i enjoy idk maybe it's because im so bored but i kinda enjoy reading this its not bad
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Me encantó muy buena lectura, me encantó muy bien la lectura scc Me encantó muy buena lectura, me encantó muy bien la lectura scc Me encantó muy buena lectura, me encantó muy bien la lectura scc.
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lo mejor de este libro es la trama. me encanta como van llevando cada historia. al nivel que la intriga lleva al cerebro a pensar mucho mas de lo que deberia
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A decent webnovel. Lacks tension, likeable mc or driving plot other than easy leveling up to the next stage, without trial. A decent concept but needs refinement to become an amazing story.
I fr dont understand these people i dont see stories like this often although Its similar to the others i still really enjoy it a lot i Dont understand how people dont like this genre
muy buena me gustó demasiado todo lo que hace y pasa, wow quiero que desbloqueen capitulos porque soy pobre como entra en contexto todo lo que sucede es de lo mejor
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It’s a boring system novel that takes the worst of the jokes. unleash level 6 dragon fist, elders: there is a new godly body talent within our sect that only comes 1000 years. Who cares, mc hating the system for being annoying then loving it bc it op. Avg joe that has handsome main character personality absolutely simping over the first girl he finds, 6 sense know who is the bad guy, saving a kid then hiding away, having a female senor.
Revelar spoiler
another impulsive retard of an mc...........................................................................................................
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I'm not really sure how to say this...but all in all this novel isn't too bad. With the exceptions of a few misunderstandings with a girl (maybe more), it's doesn't really follows the cliche trope to a tea. Of course, when I said that, I mean it in the way that the MC himself doesn't follows the said trope. Why did I say you wonder? The things is, MC isn't too smart, but he isn't dumb either. When came the time to compliment the usefulness of his system and its advantageous, he compliments it. When the time came for him to curse it for its seemingly ridiculous desire for money, he curses it. Someone that, in my opinion only, is a perfectly normal person. Not to mention that MC also has a pretty good moral code and in that chapter where he found that someone were literally kidnapping children in broad-daylight while the other people turns a blinds eye to it (for various legitimate reason, unfoetunately), he took it upon himself to try to catch that guy even though his Cultivation level at that time is still barely at the 6th level. Yes, I could be just putting too much thoughts into it as the novel didn't really put into perspective MC's personal hatred of such a terrible things to happen, but I suppose even THAT is a good thing because it means that even without thinking too much on the possible danger, one of the first things that came into my his mind is to save those children and capture the bad guy.
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4 I only gave 4 because this is a translated work and not original so no matter how much someone complains, it has to do with thw translator unless it's about quality. Personally, i like the story but i didn't expect much from a Chinese system thing. (which i was right not to) So i enjoyed it a lot more than most people fot sure.
garbage. where is this story going..i dont even want to write anything else apart from garbage...skip this novel. ,.........................
I really like these kind of novels. but the problem with all of them is that the writing is awful, there is always sentences that don't make sense and always make the mc sound stupid af. and another thing is that they explain the same thing 2 or more times in different words
The story is meh the plot is weird and the mc gets betrayed by someone that hired him and the evil person basically does the I’m gonna explain my evil plan to you and the mc goes full retard and thinks maybe he didn’t mean to attack me
Thanks to you all for the reviews if not I would have wasted my money on what I wouldn't like..............................................................[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Honestly, at first I thought this was a good novel. But after reading a few pages I realized that this novel was too classic, and the plot was predictable. I'm slowly getting bored. When I was in my tens I didn't really want to read any more, this oath was really bad.
To be completely honest, I don't even know why I tried this novel. It's like a copy of every generic cultivation novel. Does webnovel take money form these authors to make them win the competition?
It's surprising how a single chapter can ruin everything. If you wonder why then check out the "falling off the cliff" chapter. I can't be even bothered to check the chapter number smh
Don't bother reading this story, it's a waste of time. System is horrible and incomprehensive, MC is brain dead and useless. Bad plot development.
Very good character development and suggest you all to read it was a nice time reading itVery good character development and suggest you all to read it was
Very good character development and suggest you all to read it was a nice time reading itVery good character development and suggest you all to read
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For me although a lot of people are saying this is bad i enjoy idk maybe it's because im so bored but i kinda enjoy reading this its not bad
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Revelar spoiler Me encantó muy buena lectura, me encantó muy bien la lectura scc Me encantó muy buena lectura, me encantó muy bien la lectura scc Me encantó muy buena lectura, me encantó muy bien la lectura scc.
Revelar spoiler lo mejor de este libro es la trama. me encanta como van llevando cada historia. al nivel que la intriga lleva al cerebro a pensar mucho mas de lo que deberia
muy buen lectura, es increhsjsjs jsjsjsj sjskslls jsjbxf kcidiis dksiisos skisosl dkslis. jsjsjjsks isksksk dicho sislisod idkdkkdks sisiisos fi
A decent webnovel. Lacks tension, likeable mc or driving plot other than easy leveling up to the next stage, without trial. A decent concept but needs refinement to become an amazing story.
I fr dont understand these people i dont see stories like this often although Its similar to the others i still really enjoy it a lot i Dont understand how people dont like this genre
muy buena me gustó demasiado todo lo que hace y pasa, wow quiero que desbloqueen capitulos porque soy pobre como entra en contexto todo lo que sucede es de lo mejor
db iuwgd gs fiusf g s fius g hf isgf lshdoas ;ashfa ais ;sugfas ;sg wg gd g ig wgf sf ha f g oh fef afg akjgdli f sgf asd sgf gf iasygfhd aa
hh hh h h hxhc oAHDan dh IUA GSI dia gIUGI DISUG isgdisbkjcbssidgsid usifhiskgdbisugdksb udhuksgdi sigdis isf disudgsuigdsndjkfhu euf iue friueg ak
It’s a boring system novel that takes the worst of the jokes. unleash level 6 dragon fist, elders: there is a new godly body talent within our sect that only comes 1000 years. Who cares, mc hating the system for being annoying then loving it bc it op. Avg joe that has handsome main character personality absolutely simping over the first girl he finds, 6 sense know who is the bad guy, saving a kid then hiding away, having a female senor.
Revelar spoiler another impulsive retard of an mc...........................................................................................................
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I'm not really sure how to say this...but all in all this novel isn't too bad. With the exceptions of a few misunderstandings with a girl (maybe more), it's doesn't really follows the cliche trope to a tea. Of course, when I said that, I mean it in the way that the MC himself doesn't follows the said trope. Why did I say you wonder? The things is, MC isn't too smart, but he isn't dumb either. When came the time to compliment the usefulness of his system and its advantageous, he compliments it. When the time came for him to curse it for its seemingly ridiculous desire for money, he curses it. Someone that, in my opinion only, is a perfectly normal person. Not to mention that MC also has a pretty good moral code and in that chapter where he found that someone were literally kidnapping children in broad-daylight while the other people turns a blinds eye to it (for various legitimate reason, unfoetunately), he took it upon himself to try to catch that guy even though his Cultivation level at that time is still barely at the 6th level. Yes, I could be just putting too much thoughts into it as the novel didn't really put into perspective MC's personal hatred of such a terrible things to happen, but I suppose even THAT is a good thing because it means that even without thinking too much on the possible danger, one of the first things that came into my his mind is to save those children and capture the bad guy.
Revelar spoiler
4 I only gave 4 because this is a translated work and not original so no matter how much someone complains, it has to do with thw translator unless it's about quality. Personally, i like the story but i didn't expect much from a Chinese system thing. (which i was right not to) So i enjoyed it a lot more than most people fot sure.