Unbound Familiar

LV 14

50ShadesOfAss

Familar Zero. The anime that started my hate for “Beta”, lame and Garbage main characters Unfortunately it is no different here. Possibly worse because this is a fanfiction and you expect something different This mc is so fûcking lame it hurts. I dont like using the word Beta or simp anymore, but thats exactly what this mc is He becomes Louis familiar and just accepts becoming a slave. He pervs on girls then acts like a loser once he Gets caught Simps on Louis as she proceeds to beat him up, abuse him while calling him her personal dog. what happens after though? Like the loser he is, Mc just blushes cause shes naked and continues to get beat up Dont bother reading this trash

LV 12

Zetsway

The MC is just plain bad. He accepts being a rag even easier then Satou. While I could understand his need to play along at the start since he had no power, why is he a slave after he got stronger? And, even if Loise is 16, she looks like a gradeschooler, how can he perv on someone like that? All in all, it's a subpar work.

LV 3

lord_couchpotato

The story is not that bad TBH, writing is good and from what i can see is that author is consistent. Most of the people here are just giving it 1-2 stars just because they think mc is beta or simp. But you need to understand it's author's story and that's how he wants to write. If you want to read about an virgin otaku teenager who suddenly becomes alpha dominant male just because he is reincarnated to another world go read dozens or so other wish-fulfillment novels on this site. This world is set up where cards are already against mc, People are complaining about how satou dealt with being a slave better than mc well that's a idiotic way of thinking being a slave and trying to show you are not obedient towards your master would have been death sentence for sure if this anime was not a kid friendly one and if the master was not a teenage girl but rather a cruel one he would have been whipped to shape. I mean c'mon people are complaining how wish-fullfilment novels are not real enough but when someone is trying to make it a bit real people are complaining that mc is not dominant enough. I too like a cool and dominant mc but i would not just hate every other personality that the author's try to cook up. Rating a novel based on just mc's personality is not fair to the author. If the personality is not constructed properly or erratic to the point it breaks immersion i can understand that but giving it 1 star just because mc is not a dominant alpha male is just stupid.

LV 2

_Medeiros

the story comes down to stupid MC 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

LV 14

Sword_1mmortal

Bro, he's even worse than Saito. This is practically an even worse version of the familiar of zero. The original mc at least had somewhat of a spine, this one is trash. He's a loser, "Beta of Zero" should be the title

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Chapter 1 to Chapter 30, Mc is pathetic. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 5

_James_Jones_

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LV 5

DvD_007

well not enough words cam describe how much of an annoyance this mc is so i will leave it at that. you know how people just throw the world beta to any character? well this mc truly deserves it, even saito looks like a chad compared to this mc

LV 5

Inkywolf

one of my favorite writers ,with daily updates and evolving writing style , here for a new beginning to a great story cheers [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

LV 4

Whitestair_Ivory

It's one of those novels where the author does everything in his powers to make the mc suffer and nerf him, from start to recent 120 chapters he was nothing but what you would call a stupid mc, but this time it's not biased he really is stupid. His power gains are so inconsistent one chapter its said that the least he gets in agility by killing is 0.1 and the more powerful the enemy is the more he gains yet he only gains 7-9 for killing over a hundred soldier, dozen mages and couple of dragons.... and 8lvls. MC can do everything better but right where it matters he just turns into an anime character and just silently watches as things happen. Ohh and he's literally a virgin simp at the level of japanese mc can't even set boundaries and tell a suicidal bîsh no and let's her do whatever.

LV 4

XxPedroxX

Intelligent , Manipulative , Neutral , Alpha loving people like me stay away from this book . The summary of the story is a BETA MC STORY who is humiliated by a flat-chested loli who can't quite resist (and somehow doesn't reciprocate?).

LV 4

Zero_Speed

Reading this story was a waste of time ( ch 73) mc has the original cheat and a Dota2 system and is still weaker than the original mc form the show, his character and power progression are far too slow for me with current pass it'll be in the three hundreds before it gets anywhere the plot with the pink haired girl is more interesting than what the MC is doing

LV 13

HazardBlitzs

I have no clue how to write a review but, I do know one thing. That is, if this is anything like your other works, then I'm gonna have a good time reading.

LV 4

Demzer_FF

This has been an interesting story but it is painful to read at times. The MC just can't get a break and it has reached he point where it isn't any fun to read anymore. For all his abilities he just gets beat down for no reason than plot convenience. The worst part is knowing he has had a really good fight that was fun to read only to immediately get intercepted by sheer luck. The MC isn't enjoyable as a character at this point, he just doesn't grow and I don't care anymore despite the potential of this story. If you like a story where the MC fails everytime it matters then here you go. I just can't muster the will to continue reading this story right now. This is one of those stories where it might be great after 100 chapters but good luck getting there.

LV 5

Dobrillo

I read it on patreon, but I leave the review here to support the author. SW was great and the one before this too. And he is my favorite writer. It's another exciting journey with Nagross. So sit back and relax.

LV 3

UnholyMorning

Beta MC