In Danmachi with Plasmids

LV 6

TFH

Honest?... Well, it needs to be edited, again. The grammar on its own its fine, but its full of syntaxis and redaction issues. not to mention the author uses ' to on almost every line. Next is the mc, author tries to make it seem to be an extremely, genius level of intellect, but fails spectacularly at it. MC arrives to danmachi world but because author did not want to write a mc under the age of 18 fighting in the dungeon, he made the MC waste 18 F whole years before deciding leave his family and go to orario... Its a complete waste of time. Next is powers. MC seems to have all bioshock powers and he says... lets train this powers for 2 years before going to orario. But its hard because he has very low mana since he has no falna..... MC should have gone to orario when he was 12 or earlier. Hunt, increase his magic stat while training, as putting more magic stats, means he can cast more bioshock spells before faiting.

2yr 34

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LV 1

Ba_La

No beta mc=> check No cruel psycho Mc => check No collectable but sensible harem => check No cringes=> check MC with brains and brains =>check Unique=> check What more do you need for now.

2yr 27

LV 5

PhectMaphter

So. I don't usually review, and I tried to be unbiased with ratings, since the problems are difficult to place. Sentences are pretty simple, more like a half-effort summary most of the time. The idea is well - it's nothing special, though it seems cool in theory. The thing is, it's unreadable. You get more POV changes in one short chapter than mosy fics have through their whole length. And that's every early chapter. I couldn't stomach more than 10 chapters. Every other sentence is a POV change between 1st and 3rd person. Sometimes it switches to another person, with barely any indication. As for the rest: stability no idea, probably ok. Story and world background are average, since it's a fanfic. A little bit of originality at the start, but from a brief look into later chapters indicate standard Danmachi stuff you saw in every other fic, with slight personal spin at most. Characters were rather flat, uninteresting, and forgettable. The only reason it's a 3/5 because I don't want to hate on this and give you the benefit of doubt that the characters get better later, or that it's only OCs that are like this.

2yr 22

LV 4

Konrad_The_Fourth

Great read and highly recommended for new readers to try, But I don't like hestia and how the author kinda lied that he wouldn't have the mc join her familia I skipped my sleep just to see who's goddess's familia he's going to join(The waiting is killing me lol) and got an unpleasant surprise so I didn't finish the chap and just dropped it there, And I kinda can't trust the authors word anymore even if i decided to continue reading and got paranoid when i remember the author saying the mc wouldn't cuck himself on one of his comment on the same chap fearing that he would actually gonna get cucked in the future(However unlikely that is?) Anyway that's all sorry for the rant just wanted to vent my frustration a bit

3yr 15

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LV 14

ArizonaRanger

This review is a bit early but I think its going pretty well. He provides a good amount of background and information and shows everything in a good planned out manner thats seems to balance the story and background amazingly well. If this is representative of how the story will be this will be in the future, this very well may be a smasher.

3yr 15

LV 13

Nydre

Overall, it is very boring, it became a chore to read with the long and drawn out internal monologues and lengthy explanations. The power scaling is a mess, the character interactions and the characters themselves are plain and uninteresting, and the pace is incredibly slow. A slow pace is not necessarily a problem if it weren't accompanied by some major pitfalls. Firstly, the development of the characters' relationships are poorly conveyed and the general dialogue format is very shallow and unpolished. Dialogues between the Mc and other characters always come off as aimless and very impersonal, always maintaining the level of casual banter or small talk one would have with an acquaintance. This is highlighted by a striking lack of detail and emphasis given to non-vocal character communications, something I attribute to the story's strange narration style, as body language and facial expressions aren't explored above a primitive application. Secondly, relationships are developed at an extremely slow pace as well. As a result, everything aside from the occasional fights feels very mundane, aimless, and passive. I personally find this very boring, I cannot stand a slow paced story with so little character development, especially when everything aside from that is the Mc doing chores, ceaseless internal monologues, and the author's constant fights with his power scaling. The power scaling is sloppy, the Mc kills an armored level 3 berserk floor boss at lvl 0 and then loses to a lvl 3 human at lvl 2. Onto the main character's character, I find it extremely disappointing. I will keep it short, but he certified that he would win the war game with 100% certainty just to get beaten by a lvl 3. If the lvl 3 hadn't forfeited without fighting for some god forsaken reason like he did, then not only Hestia, but he himself would have become a sx slave due to his unrestrained arrogance, All self inflicted as he himself provoked the situation. Nuff yap bye.

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8mth 14

LV 4

BobTheRob

This should give you official rating~

3yr 12

LV 3

Bosu_san

I love this fanfic because unlike other Auther is doing his homework and he make foundartion of story so good and so detail so for me this is number 1 gem of this wed

2yr 9

LV 5

TriPlatinum

I read this too early, I don't know what to do now and can only wait for each chapter to release. Pain. .

3yr 8

Ver 1 respuestas

LV 13

GodTheeOG

I don't leave reviews at all. But to see a Author that is open to criticism and Perfecting their work. Its rare and great thing to see. Its not often You get to see such great deals in a Author these days. Authors that are always willing take in criticism and Grow off it is truly a great thing that to many Authors don't do.

2yr 7

LV 5

InfinityAndBeyond

Good and an interesting danmachi fanfic👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

2yr 7

LV 1

Librarian_Heroen

Interesting, fun and exciting. The Plasmids were really well used, the mc and the other characters are really doable and cool. Thanks, I'll be waiting for more! (Google Translate)

3yr 7

LV 3

Vitrialia_Amermes

as alpha and fellow reader that's will come asking stupid questions about harem then I m asking for you all , thank to me later so author this novel it's harem ? Meh I didn't care about all girl cause I only care about ais ,ryuu and Artemis other than that you can reject but well up to you And if you asking me ais or Artemis ,I choice Artemis . In movie when she die make me emotional and then she become my waifu even she die huk huk ಥ‿ಥ

3yr 7

LV 4

Iteq24_24

At the start this story was progressing in a good pace but now it seems everything got incredibly slow, so now I wait for like 5 chapters before reading it again and I don't give it my stones but it is still a good story to read overall

1yr 6

LV 5

GenYase

Overall ranking 3.4* ---------------------------------------------------------------- Writing Quality: Really good, you dont have to use your brain to decipher what author means, not really a lot of mistakes. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Stability of Updates: 5* - often ---------------------------------------------------------------- Story Development: 2* - The story is quite interesting for first 80-100 chapters but after that it becomes really boring, Silver (the MC) seems to do the same thing again and again and again, author introduced at first like few females who are clearly into relationship (Hestia and the other goddes i forgot (Astrea or something i think) and then barely metions this romance. Romance is clearly lacking in this story and the story itself lacks something that would keep me entertained, reading it a lot of times feels like a chore. -------------------------------------------------------------- Character Design: 2* Silver (the MC) is quite a good character, but i absolutely hate how passive he is in a lot of times. (poachers for example, romance, ishtar). Girls are a lot of times just skimmed through -------------------------------------------------------------- World Background: there's some kinda weird world but what about it in 180 chapters we've seen it only like 3-5 times so im giving it a 3*

1yr 5