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Está muy bien el camino que está tomando el libro( fanfic), pero estaría bueno más continuidad a la hora de actualizar y en el desarrollo de los personajes, también ahí que agregar que está muy bien redactado, lo cual lo hace fácil de entender y no perderse entre capitulo y capitulo
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Why would you even write that then? It's like you'll be forcing him to make foolish decisions. You'll be writing that on purpose. If that is yout attitude.. then don't write novels.
It's a great story!!! I never read "I am Number Four" fanfic, so this story pique my interest.. And I like it 👍👍👍 Please don't kill Number Three.. And there's a few wrong grammar, but I don't mind (I still understand it).. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁😁👍👍👍
This is the wrost I AM NUMBER FOUR FAN-FIC I've ever seen up until now. The mc says that he will not hurt them and they completely let their guard down, like there are no emotions in this fan-fic so, TRASH!!!!!
quite boring honestly, if you want a super op mc that it makes all the adventure like its just a slice of life genre then this is for you, honestly he can just finished the fic in 10 chapters with his powers but mehhh, just following the canon save some numbers who die or not, more of slice of life boring
I havent read this but the fourth symbol looks like ubisofts logo lol soooooo I might read this later
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no to killing number 3, but number 5 is fair game...he is a traitor after all...............................................................
This is the first lorien legacies i seen so far so it gets an automatically 5/5 from me. The writing isn't the best. The pacing feels too rushed and the dialogue feels off. The formatting and grammar needs more work. My biggest problem with the fic is that it's telling, instead of showing and because of that it's feels flat. But overall, I enjoyed it
please don't stay gone too long your story is good even if I disliked a few parts you are getting really good................your dope......
This brings back memories to my middle school days. I am number 4 all day. The movie did not do the books justice.llllllllllllllllllllllllhsjsjskskekejeksnsvsjsnshsiehejsnsnsndndnndndndjdjdjdjdndnndjdjdndndndndnndndjd. Mmm.
This novel is really good, like the legacies one, it starts off in a fast pace and go slow, the Mc can uses his brains more than his power, working from the shadow, overall I say its amazing
Here is 5* though I haven't read it yet, but I loved your "the 100" fic but I guess it was dropped like most of your fic's. Bruh this is depressing.
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Love it so far. Keep it up. Besides the grammar and the sometimes confusing dialogue. Everything else is perfect. Don't drop. Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.
Keep up the good work .................... ....................................... ........................................................
i need more lorien fanfics... so please IF POSSIBLE FASTER UPDATE AND PLEASE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE CHAPTERS....
I like the story .........................................................................................................................................
Está muy bien el camino que está tomando el libro( fanfic), pero estaría bueno más continuidad a la hora de actualizar y en el desarrollo de los personajes, también ahí que agregar que está muy bien redactado, lo cual lo hace fácil de entender y no perderse entre capitulo y capitulo
Revelar spoiler Why would you even write that then? It's like you'll be forcing him to make foolish decisions. You'll be writing that on purpose. If that is yout attitude.. then don't write novels.
It's a great story!!! I never read "I am Number Four" fanfic, so this story pique my interest.. And I like it 👍👍👍 Please don't kill Number Three.. And there's a few wrong grammar, but I don't mind (I still understand it).. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁😁👍👍👍
This is the wrost I AM NUMBER FOUR FAN-FIC I've ever seen up until now. The mc says that he will not hurt them and they completely let their guard down, like there are no emotions in this fan-fic so, TRASH!!!!!
quite boring honestly, if you want a super op mc that it makes all the adventure like its just a slice of life genre then this is for you, honestly he can just finished the fic in 10 chapters with his powers but mehhh, just following the canon save some numbers who die or not, more of slice of life boring
I havent read this but the fourth symbol looks like ubisofts logo lol soooooo I might read this later
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no to killing number 3, but number 5 is fair game...he is a traitor after all...............................................................
This is the first lorien legacies i seen so far so it gets an automatically 5/5 from me. The writing isn't the best. The pacing feels too rushed and the dialogue feels off. The formatting and grammar needs more work. My biggest problem with the fic is that it's telling, instead of showing and because of that it's feels flat. But overall, I enjoyed it
please don't stay gone too long your story is good even if I disliked a few parts you are getting really good................your dope......
This brings back memories to my middle school days. I am number 4 all day. The movie did not do the books justice.llllllllllllllllllllllllhsjsjskskekejeksnsvsjsnshsiehejsnsnsndndnndndndjdjdjdjdndnndjdjdndndndndnndndjd. Mmm.
This novel is really good, like the legacies one, it starts off in a fast pace and go slow, the Mc can uses his brains more than his power, working from the shadow, overall I say its amazing
Here is 5* though I haven't read it yet, but I loved your "the 100" fic but I guess it was dropped like most of your fic's. Bruh this is depressing.
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Love it so far. Keep it up. Besides the grammar and the sometimes confusing dialogue. Everything else is perfect. Don't drop. Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.
Keep up the good work .................... ....................................... ........................................................
i need more lorien fanfics... so please IF POSSIBLE FASTER UPDATE AND PLEASE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE CHAPTERS....
I like the story .........................................................................................................................................
Please keep posting more chapters. It's too good to be abandoned