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it isn't the greatest ff or the worst but its okay, there are things i don't like about something and the likes but meh, and also author delete the reviews with only 1 star hate or just spamming 5 star review they are ruining it for some people who just go to reviews and see real opinion bu got nothing but spams
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I give this a good review. Flow of the writing is disjunctive or jarring to read as there are certain terms in the present would not be condoned in the past. For example, when King had to stop Peggy Carter and Steve Rogers from kissing as he and Howard Stark watched, King slapped Steve Rogers in the neck while saying, “I like your Cut G.” The plot feels forced as more and more chapters go on even if this is a slice of life. There are inconsistencies in the novel as one of the sentences is of Howard piloting a helicopter in the 1940s as author left out any explanation of how there was a helicopter that was made way before its time. Honestly, idk if you should read this because I dont see the need to.
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É uma boa leitura, até o capítulo 75 aproximadamente eu gostei bastante, após ele houve um declínio, mas posso relevar isso, e pretendo continuar lendo pra ver se volta a qualidade. Por último gostaria de dizer para as pessoas que fazem uma avaliação ruim, apenas por que alguém votou várias vezes 5 estrelas, embora isso seja muito chato, devemos respeitar o autor da obra e dar uma avaliação para a 'história' e não para os comentários. As únicas situações em que considero válido essa conduta, é nas história de teste, uma vez que essas histórias futuramente podem ser escolhidas, devendo então ter uma avaliação mais justa (mesmo que saibamos que normalmente o webnovel gosta de escolher as piores histórias).
I only rrad synopsis and before i go to read chapters i wanted to write what i understood from synopsis (the true one) ---- MC and his patents get Batman treatment but MC dies with parents and he gets reincarnated... --- Did i miss something?
Amazing finally a mc with chastiefol and in marvel no less and far back in the past so that we don't have a repeat of fanfics that start in ww2 or in the modern era and many sexy ladies baby hehehehe
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Nobody is interested in reading the life of a baby ... except pedophiles or pediatricians. The story seems to be written by a Chinese virgin / chaste, who has never had a girlfriend. Besides the story is CULTIVATION ... 💩 SO: MC is Chinese character as protagonist Japanese of anime. + World Marvel + Cultivation 💩 = 💩
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It gives you what it offers. Read the synopsis and look at the tags. Can it be better? Absolutely. The fast relationship development of harem members can be a little forced but it is said at the synopsis that there will be clichés and forced romance to add girls to harem. But it's a good read nonetheless. Has good story development. Writing quality is pretty good with some mistakes here and there but nothing that can make your experience unenjoyable. One chapter a day is good but the chapters can be a little longer. And the characters are likeable. So don't just drop the novel after reading 10 chapters, don't mind the bad reviews and give it a shot. You'll probably end up liking it.
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grammar and writing quality was good but i felt some of the plot was forcefully trying to change.. ..........................................
I must say, people say this story is just trash and that it's an insult to marvel comics adnetc, but you do realize that we are far away from the start of the MCU and that the author is trying to make the story nice and not just a 5000 ts and nothing explained. The harem aspect is used in the correct way, not just pokemon, caunting that they used decades(even centuries) of relationship as a basis and love didn't just sprout from thin air. Now at chap 74 I think the story will start to get more active, cause Hanckock-Sama has just ened the centurie old training arc/introduction to family and background+ some adventures. So please, please read it and don't just stop at chap 10. And if you want to give a bad review, please at least tell the author what's wrong with the fic.
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Well saw some people bad reviewing it, so....I decided to review myself. Basically read it yourself and judge. Although the story has its own issue......it's still a good read. So read at your own discretion, I like it, doesn't mean that you should also. And some advice for the author, don't give up, and improve from your mistakes. That's all.
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the fic was pretty good. author give mc all the tools he need to become op one day if he world hard enough so it's my type of novel where mc start relatively weak but with the potential to be op with time. coupled with harem and all the perfect waifus this one become one of my favorite novel, that is until author decide to destroy this by giving mc a extreme op tool. this tool is a dog with the ability to go to any place in the multiverse including the past and the future. yeah this come out of nowhere, and sudenly make the fic completely boring and cliche. like why waste all the time giving mc good ability that only him op in the future to suddenly give him a op tool? the worst is how mc dont use the ability of the dog to try and becomes stronger. mc have knowledge of marvel verse and many other fic universe so why he simple dont use the dog to go to these place and uneasily become super op? the mc want and have a reason to become stronger so the time he gained the dog this fic become boring for me because I thought he would immediately use the dog power to go on and instantly become op. so when mc simple dont do anything and even forget about the dog I become even more disappointed in this fic because it show that the author is forcing the mc to forget about the dog so he dont instantly become op. of course I'm happy dont use the dog power to make mc op in such cheap way but this dont change the fact that a extremely plot hole that effect all the fic and it's concept exist. I'm really in acomplcated mood now
I generally dislike Harems as most of the time Authors revolve the whole story around the Harem Building, this story is the opposite, thought the Harem aspect is there it is not to the point where it outshines the opther happenings in the Story. The story is slow paced but a fairly enjoyable read.
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feels and reads like a chuunibyo Chinese man using Google translate to blurt out whatever first comes to mind. plot, character and world background are non-existent and the grammar is atrocious with terrible formatting.
This is a badly written Cultivation story and an insult to Marvel Comics. This story has very poor grammar. Time and Physical strength are extremely poorly characterized and often contradictory.
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Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.
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it isn't the greatest ff or the worst but its okay, there are things i don't like about something and the likes but meh, and also author delete the reviews with only 1 star hate or just spamming 5 star review they are ruining it for some people who just go to reviews and see real opinion bu got nothing but spams
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I give this a good review. Flow of the writing is disjunctive or jarring to read as there are certain terms in the present would not be condoned in the past. For example, when King had to stop Peggy Carter and Steve Rogers from kissing as he and Howard Stark watched, King slapped Steve Rogers in the neck while saying, “I like your Cut G.” The plot feels forced as more and more chapters go on even if this is a slice of life. There are inconsistencies in the novel as one of the sentences is of Howard piloting a helicopter in the 1940s as author left out any explanation of how there was a helicopter that was made way before its time. Honestly, idk if you should read this because I dont see the need to.
Revelar spoiler É uma boa leitura, até o capítulo 75 aproximadamente eu gostei bastante, após ele houve um declínio, mas posso relevar isso, e pretendo continuar lendo pra ver se volta a qualidade. Por último gostaria de dizer para as pessoas que fazem uma avaliação ruim, apenas por que alguém votou várias vezes 5 estrelas, embora isso seja muito chato, devemos respeitar o autor da obra e dar uma avaliação para a 'história' e não para os comentários. As únicas situações em que considero válido essa conduta, é nas história de teste, uma vez que essas histórias futuramente podem ser escolhidas, devendo então ter uma avaliação mais justa (mesmo que saibamos que normalmente o webnovel gosta de escolher as piores histórias).
I only rrad synopsis and before i go to read chapters i wanted to write what i understood from synopsis (the true one) ---- MC and his patents get Batman treatment but MC dies with parents and he gets reincarnated... --- Did i miss something?
Amazing finally a mc with chastiefol and in marvel no less and far back in the past so that we don't have a repeat of fanfics that start in ww2 or in the modern era and many sexy ladies baby hehehehe
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Nobody is interested in reading the life of a baby ... except pedophiles or pediatricians. The story seems to be written by a Chinese virgin / chaste, who has never had a girlfriend. Besides the story is CULTIVATION ... 💩 SO: MC is Chinese character as protagonist Japanese of anime. + World Marvel + Cultivation 💩 = 💩
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It gives you what it offers. Read the synopsis and look at the tags. Can it be better? Absolutely. The fast relationship development of harem members can be a little forced but it is said at the synopsis that there will be clichés and forced romance to add girls to harem. But it's a good read nonetheless. Has good story development. Writing quality is pretty good with some mistakes here and there but nothing that can make your experience unenjoyable. One chapter a day is good but the chapters can be a little longer. And the characters are likeable. So don't just drop the novel after reading 10 chapters, don't mind the bad reviews and give it a shot. You'll probably end up liking it.
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grammar and writing quality was good but i felt some of the plot was forcefully trying to change.. ..........................................
I must say, people say this story is just trash and that it's an insult to marvel comics adnetc, but you do realize that we are far away from the start of the MCU and that the author is trying to make the story nice and not just a 5000 ts and nothing explained. The harem aspect is used in the correct way, not just pokemon, caunting that they used decades(even centuries) of relationship as a basis and love didn't just sprout from thin air. Now at chap 74 I think the story will start to get more active, cause Hanckock-Sama has just ened the centurie old training arc/introduction to family and background+ some adventures. So please, please read it and don't just stop at chap 10. And if you want to give a bad review, please at least tell the author what's wrong with the fic.
Revelar spoiler Well saw some people bad reviewing it, so....I decided to review myself. Basically read it yourself and judge. Although the story has its own issue......it's still a good read. So read at your own discretion, I like it, doesn't mean that you should also. And some advice for the author, don't give up, and improve from your mistakes. That's all.
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the fic was pretty good. author give mc all the tools he need to become op one day if he world hard enough so it's my type of novel where mc start relatively weak but with the potential to be op with time. coupled with harem and all the perfect waifus this one become one of my favorite novel, that is until author decide to destroy this by giving mc a extreme op tool. this tool is a dog with the ability to go to any place in the multiverse including the past and the future. yeah this come out of nowhere, and sudenly make the fic completely boring and cliche. like why waste all the time giving mc good ability that only him op in the future to suddenly give him a op tool? the worst is how mc dont use the ability of the dog to try and becomes stronger. mc have knowledge of marvel verse and many other fic universe so why he simple dont use the dog to go to these place and uneasily become super op? the mc want and have a reason to become stronger so the time he gained the dog this fic become boring for me because I thought he would immediately use the dog power to go on and instantly become op. so when mc simple dont do anything and even forget about the dog I become even more disappointed in this fic because it show that the author is forcing the mc to forget about the dog so he dont instantly become op. of course I'm happy dont use the dog power to make mc op in such cheap way but this dont change the fact that a extremely plot hole that effect all the fic and it's concept exist. I'm really in acomplcated mood now
I generally dislike Harems as most of the time Authors revolve the whole story around the Harem Building, this story is the opposite, thought the Harem aspect is there it is not to the point where it outshines the opther happenings in the Story. The story is slow paced but a fairly enjoyable read.
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feels and reads like a chuunibyo Chinese man using Google translate to blurt out whatever first comes to mind. plot, character and world background are non-existent and the grammar is atrocious with terrible formatting.
This is a badly written Cultivation story and an insult to Marvel Comics. This story has very poor grammar. Time and Physical strength are extremely poorly characterized and often contradictory.
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