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Please keep writing! It’s very good! I really enjoy the concept and plot!
Sinceramente empecé sabiendo que el romance seria 100% forzado pero enserio ni siquiera sos capas de poner el mínimo de esfuerzo es como leer un Wikipedia donde te dice que el este personaje esta en un relación amorosa con este otro realmente ni lo poderes te esforzaste en darselos poco a poco ya que te saltaste todo el romance hacerlo entretenido con los poderes ... pero no ni eso
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well i think this story is good and I see many bad reviews and I don't get it why many say it bad really when some authors nerf the MC then hash reviews born but when some authors buff MC so he can stand with some big shot marvel then you don't even like it. Really for me this story great the op MC and good way view orther character. Some say his sister is bad but for me it ok about harem i don't hate that. So yes I like this story.
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Nice story good writing and development could use better grammar though but overall good love the story and characters and powers nice nice nice nice
great fanfic, everything is very cool, but the author, can you post on other sites. it is very difficult for people from other countries to read in an application where there is no translator
I'm typing this to encourage the author since he's getting spam reviews, i don't think this deserves 5.0 but like 4.7 based on the update stability but i think this fic is good
the story dsnt match with sinopsis. the mc is an OC not a reincarnated. and forced plot is a trash. forced plot is dumb. but, well u basically admit writing it with forced plot, so u ar writing dumb and trash story.
need more chapters please 🙏!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a review of 29/5/2022, the story so far isn't bad, but it isn't good either, it's fine. I give it 3.6, I had fun reading it but there were also a lot of bad stuff to give it 4, at around chapter 70 it gets better in my opinion but it can't cover for everything that happened before. I would recommend trying it. First chapters are super bad, they are too forced, but after that it is a decent harem, the characters know each other for a lot of years so there is time to build feelings before they start being together and they are in a society that harem is pretty common especially among the royal family so for them harem is normal which again makes it not feel forced unlike if it is in normal earth where it is kind of uncommon in most places, it feels a bit forced when there is harem cause I don't think anyone wants to share their lover. So there is good stuff in this fan fic but there is also bad stuff, the first 70 chapters mc feels extremely weak, he didn't really have a lot of battles, but in all of them he was shown weak, first battle he had was against a giant snake, and he would have died if he didn't have help, even when he became stronger he still needed help to kill giant snakes, and the second time was in the war, where he had to use his mother's illusion magic and cannons to win it, he also keeps saying that he is weak so it just feels that there is no growth at all in the power aspect since we never see him win with his strength so it keeps feeling like he is at the same level of when he started, but that changes after chapter 70, after he leaves to the outside world we start seeing that he is stronger. Another bad/annoying thing, is that mc doesn't use his knowledge, what I mean by that is, he has a lot of knowledge from novels/manga/anime/movies, but he doesn't try them out to see if he can use stuff from there which makes him having that knowledge in the first place useless, it is worst than him not having it since he does have it but does almost nothing with it, and I say almost because he did use it once and it did work with making him stronger so I don't get why it isn't being used more. Overall, give it a try, you might like it and you might not, but it is worth trying.
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When I read the title of this fan fic I expected someone in marvel with kings abilities, that would have been okay. But honestly the ideas your throwing around here and the abilities / items he is receiving (for free) is turning this fan fic into a normal wish fulfilment with a slow fan fic title. really the only thing that fits right about the title is his kingdom, looks and weapon. (From what I’ve noticed, there probably is more.) Personally, I’d rather you enhance his abilities so it actually works around king and not just give him abilities that do not really fit with his character. For example he has the sin of sloth, maybe he gains strength over time as long as he is slothful. Or perhaps his disaster ability can be boosted to universal effects. Where he can mess with some physics mumbo jumbo and use it to teleport or something else crazy. At least that would stick near the king idea. Don’t get me wrong, your writing is fantastic, I can’t fault how you write. Just what you’re writing is in every wish fulfilment fan fic. It was false advertising.
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The story started out well but the time skips ruined the whole story it started feeling rushed at chapter 30-40 from thier it went downhill it became the definition of trash rushed work. This is a disappointing work that had potential but the author ruined it because he rushed it
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Lots of harsh reviews based in nothing. The story takes it's time until it reaches the main events of marvel, but otherwise it's a nice story. People complain about the character not being a reincarnated person. I mean, he does not have all his memories, but he has knowledge of marvel so he still can be considered as reincarnated. Also people say it's a cultivation novel. We the way he describes his increase to power can be seen as such, but is not really cultivation.
Me encantó esta historia, no encontré ni una sola cosa que pudiera criticar. El desarrollo de personaje, la historia de fondo, el paso del tiempo, el romance y desarrollo de personaje de sus novias, todo es perfecto. Me gustó mucho el harem y está muy bien hecho. También me gusta la personalidad del MC y como fue fortaleciéndose a lo largo del tiempo. También me gustó como construiste la relación del MC con otros personajes de Marvel como Odin o Agamotto entre otros.
Revelar spoiler Please keep writing! It’s very good! I really enjoy the concept and plot!
Sinceramente empecé sabiendo que el romance seria 100% forzado pero enserio ni siquiera sos capas de poner el mínimo de esfuerzo es como leer un Wikipedia donde te dice que el este personaje esta en un relación amorosa con este otro realmente ni lo poderes te esforzaste en darselos poco a poco ya que te saltaste todo el romance hacerlo entretenido con los poderes ... pero no ni eso
Revelar spoiler well i think this story is good and I see many bad reviews and I don't get it why many say it bad really when some authors nerf the MC then hash reviews born but when some authors buff MC so he can stand with some big shot marvel then you don't even like it. Really for me this story great the op MC and good way view orther character. Some say his sister is bad but for me it ok about harem i don't hate that. So yes I like this story.
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Nice story good writing and development could use better grammar though but overall good love the story and characters and powers nice nice nice nice
great fanfic, everything is very cool, but the author, can you post on other sites. it is very difficult for people from other countries to read in an application where there is no translator
I'm typing this to encourage the author since he's getting spam reviews, i don't think this deserves 5.0 but like 4.7 based on the update stability but i think this fic is good
the story dsnt match with sinopsis. the mc is an OC not a reincarnated. and forced plot is a trash. forced plot is dumb. but, well u basically admit writing it with forced plot, so u ar writing dumb and trash story.
need more chapters please 🙏!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a review of 29/5/2022, the story so far isn't bad, but it isn't good either, it's fine. I give it 3.6, I had fun reading it but there were also a lot of bad stuff to give it 4, at around chapter 70 it gets better in my opinion but it can't cover for everything that happened before. I would recommend trying it. First chapters are super bad, they are too forced, but after that it is a decent harem, the characters know each other for a lot of years so there is time to build feelings before they start being together and they are in a society that harem is pretty common especially among the royal family so for them harem is normal which again makes it not feel forced unlike if it is in normal earth where it is kind of uncommon in most places, it feels a bit forced when there is harem cause I don't think anyone wants to share their lover. So there is good stuff in this fan fic but there is also bad stuff, the first 70 chapters mc feels extremely weak, he didn't really have a lot of battles, but in all of them he was shown weak, first battle he had was against a giant snake, and he would have died if he didn't have help, even when he became stronger he still needed help to kill giant snakes, and the second time was in the war, where he had to use his mother's illusion magic and cannons to win it, he also keeps saying that he is weak so it just feels that there is no growth at all in the power aspect since we never see him win with his strength so it keeps feeling like he is at the same level of when he started, but that changes after chapter 70, after he leaves to the outside world we start seeing that he is stronger. Another bad/annoying thing, is that mc doesn't use his knowledge, what I mean by that is, he has a lot of knowledge from novels/manga/anime/movies, but he doesn't try them out to see if he can use stuff from there which makes him having that knowledge in the first place useless, it is worst than him not having it since he does have it but does almost nothing with it, and I say almost because he did use it once and it did work with making him stronger so I don't get why it isn't being used more. Overall, give it a try, you might like it and you might not, but it is worth trying.
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When I read the title of this fan fic I expected someone in marvel with kings abilities, that would have been okay. But honestly the ideas your throwing around here and the abilities / items he is receiving (for free) is turning this fan fic into a normal wish fulfilment with a slow fan fic title. really the only thing that fits right about the title is his kingdom, looks and weapon. (From what I’ve noticed, there probably is more.) Personally, I’d rather you enhance his abilities so it actually works around king and not just give him abilities that do not really fit with his character. For example he has the sin of sloth, maybe he gains strength over time as long as he is slothful. Or perhaps his disaster ability can be boosted to universal effects. Where he can mess with some physics mumbo jumbo and use it to teleport or something else crazy. At least that would stick near the king idea. Don’t get me wrong, your writing is fantastic, I can’t fault how you write. Just what you’re writing is in every wish fulfilment fan fic. It was false advertising.
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The story started out well but the time skips ruined the whole story it started feeling rushed at chapter 30-40 from thier it went downhill it became the definition of trash rushed work. This is a disappointing work that had potential but the author ruined it because he rushed it
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Lots of harsh reviews based in nothing. The story takes it's time until it reaches the main events of marvel, but otherwise it's a nice story. People complain about the character not being a reincarnated person. I mean, he does not have all his memories, but he has knowledge of marvel so he still can be considered as reincarnated. Also people say it's a cultivation novel. We the way he describes his increase to power can be seen as such, but is not really cultivation.
Me encantó esta historia, no encontré ni una sola cosa que pudiera criticar. El desarrollo de personaje, la historia de fondo, el paso del tiempo, el romance y desarrollo de personaje de sus novias, todo es perfecto. Me gustó mucho el harem y está muy bien hecho. También me gusta la personalidad del MC y como fue fortaleciéndose a lo largo del tiempo. También me gustó como construiste la relación del MC con otros personajes de Marvel como Odin o Agamotto entre otros.
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