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Berserk Stick System

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[WARNING MATURE CONTENT]
NOTE: YANDERE IS HERE

Some Heroine might love MC too soon. But does love need a reason or time? If you already love someone, this reason is useless.
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What happens if the game you've been playing for a long time turns out to have a world of its own?
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A boy who experienced death in a strange way.
Reincarnated into the eroge game he had played before.
Reincarnated as the protagonist's best friend character in the story, who will be killed by the protagonist himself to make the protagonist strong, doesn't make him give up, with help of the system he has now.
Watch his journey in conquering the hearts of heroines and saving the world.

Character image sees on my discord server.
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Warning: This Novel is only FICTION, don't compare it with the real world.

Strict warning!!!!!! if you don't like where the 10-year-old MC has puppy love. Don't read this novel. You know, a lot of novels start very young, and mine is one of them.

The MC in this novel has very slow character development. You probably won't like this.

You Have Been Warned.

Notice: There are no genres like Yuri or LGBT here. I also don't write genres like Netorare and others. I'm not a person who likes things like that.
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Grammar might be a bad thing in this novel but bear with it.

The beginning of the novel is a disaster, this is my first novel, plus English is not my first language.
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[English is not my first language, so if there are any wrong words, please forgive me.]

[The image above is not mine. If the owner doesn't want me to use it, you can tell me and I will change it.]

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8ightbit

Here's my opinion of this novel. it started out fine, the character building wasn't very bad, and the world building was good too and I enjoyed the beginning. But then the MC became "Bipolar" what he does and what he says, keep jumping all over the place. Sometimes doesn't even make sense and the comedy skits, becomes cringeworthy. I mean, If you're 10 years old you might like it.. which isn't realistic as this is an 18+ novel, but me as an adult, I can't. So the big question is, who is the target audience for this novel?. Idk.. This is just my opinion/review Writing Quality - 3/5 SOF - 5/5 Story Dev - 2/5 Character Design - 3/5 World background - 4/5 Overall 3.4/5

3yr
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Zontal_Zev

I'm now a shameless review writer. This is the second novel that I have written. Actually, this is a remake of my previous novel, so you can consider this my first novel. Because the previous novel that I made used my first language and the story I felt was not satisfactory.I finally decided to remake. I can't say that my novel is good but I'll let you guys judge for yourself If you see a mistake I'm sorry, English is not my first language. I would really appreciate it if you guys support me, thank you.

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WoofWoof

It is pretty good. but the english is really bad. Better than MTL. There are a few things being inaccurate, anatomy doesnt seem to agree with author.

3yr
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ThighLover

The protagonist is a boy for the ones who were confused on the synopsis. The story is also good so far, hoping to see more updates. [img=update][img=update]

3yr
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Lord666Acedia

Its not even funny anymore how much pedo this novel is, only going for children 10-16 yrs old exclusively

3yr
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Seikai

What can I say? Chinanumbawan is written all over this. It's a tad higher than those MTL Novels but still... it's something like a High Mid-tier Tr@sh.

3yr
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Avengtank

every encounter seems forced , i read upto 50+ chapters and its seems like i am reading something with no proper background or any interesting story development . After reading the synopsis i though if a story is inspired by Little Tyrant how bad the story progression can go? But the Author showed that , he can make is so bad that even an interesting plot can be made into lackluster and girls collection story. I guess Author did not remember the Little Tyrant story part but just the wet dreams he had after reading Little Tyrant . I had high hopes while reading 20+ chapter which was going quite well , but it took a nose dive.

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ArmoredNT

The book started out decently and just got worse and worse as it went along. The relationships and the comedy just feel forced. The mc waisted all his time during a six year time skip resulting in no progression. The mc also doesn’t use his points properly making it quite frustrating

3yr
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WarrantyW

Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Jinzou
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the novel characteristic are heavily on a game mechanic rather than a reality mechanic so u can expect 'all u can do mc' without proper progress battle experience and reason

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LawWillOblivionK

This novel has potential.It develops characters and has no sudden forced plot.Tha author has improved a lot from the beginning as I know because I was reading this book from the beginning .Keep Going

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surface_reed

Anyone know what the discord link is? This is just to reach the word count. dhtejdudbdjchdudjfhuxejjfidhricododofo39e9 re ciifkd0

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DaoistKPR

Writing quality is bad, mc is really creepy, in his previous life he was 18 and now he's 10 and is falling in love with 10/9 yo girls. On the other hand adults act really weird (like letting 10yo kids go hunting in the forest), maybe we should just be like "eh it's eroge game world logic" but for me there is no logic in this novel. I got only up to chapter 10, think what you want.

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billy_hebert

if you can make it past chapter 10 you are a better(?) man than I. it is super cringe and turned me off for the whole story. good luck to you.

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Akane_Yamaguchi_

everything was fine before the author changed the system to a familiar and unreasonable system points income after that a lot of silly things happened Byee Drop

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Dragon_dick_6222

Read till cp 50,man I can understand you don't want the mc to be op but still you have to give him some abilities. Until now all he have is a chain which he can't use to it's full power, a skill that have a lewd side effect. He have mana but how much idk there no physical stat nor magical stat even though it's a system novle, give him some magic skill or branch skills to his innate skill his not evolving at all nor is his becoming versatile. And give him a specific class or path to walk to become stronger not just finding a ruins in hopes for treasure that he doesn't even know will be useful to him. And mc is a bit coward, he needs to kill strong monstars to become strong but he runs away when encounter a bit strong monstar . All in all it can be fixed inthe future and I hope further chapters are improved

3yr
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MrKarma
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Imma give u 4.0 star only because of the the Yandere, I don't really like wish fulfilment fanfic and that nonsensical "berserker stick system" is just stupid!

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Cabelinho

very interesting i really liked it, i liked the plot and the story, i also really liked the character of the protagonist he is the guy could only be less cowardly but it's getting better, more heroines so far they are good, they have a clarismatic personality, just a little loose screws, I recommend it a lot, you won't regret it

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Volumen 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. About Character 3 years ago

Volumen 1 : The Things That Make Me Strong

  1. 1
    Chapter 1-Raincarnation? Is That a Good Thing? 3 years ago
  2. 2
    Chapter-2 Meeting Heroine For The First Time 3 years ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3-Start To Move 3 years ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4-Battle Together 3 years ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5-Consuming Elixir 3 years ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6-Going To The City 3 years ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7-Angry 3 years ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8-Will Lightning Strike Me Again? 3 years ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9-To City With Celyne 3 years ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10-Cliche Scene 3 years ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11-Guild Master Plan 3 years ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12-Celyne's Willpower 3 years ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13-Late Hero 3 years ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14-How Could That Be? 3 years ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15-Solving Bella's Fear 3 years ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16-First Ero Skill 3 years ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17-Silvie's Meeting With Celyne 3 years ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18-Arrival Of The Ashleigh Family 3 years ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19-First Massage 3 years ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20-Two Sisters 3 years ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21-Faster Than Expected 3 years ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22-Celyne Is a Little Different Than Usual 3 years ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23-Becoming Strong Gradually 3 years ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24-I Was Struck By Lightning Again[Edited] 3 years ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25-Emergency Food[Edited] 3 years ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26-Unlock Berserk 3 years ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27-Pink Liquid 3 years ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28-Red Riding Hood (1) [R-18] 3 years ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29-Red Riding Hood (2) [R-18] 3 years ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30-Alice's Worst Memories (1) 3 years ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31-Alice's Worst Memories (2) 3 years ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32-Alice's Worst Memories (3) 3 years ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33-Who is My True Self? 3 years ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34-Lute, A-are We Going to Have Children Now? 3 years ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35-Is This The Difference in Luck? 3 years ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36-Unlimited Blade Room 3 years ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37-Secret of Bloodline 3 years ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38-Dowry 3 years ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39-Qilin Father's Thoughts 3 years ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 40-Calming Alice 3 years ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 41-It's So Big 3 years ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 42-Familiar Name 3 years ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 43-Mad Woman 3 years ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 44-Cute Woman 3 years ago
  45. 45
    Chapter 45-Blessing 3 years ago
  46. 46
    Chapter 46-Wrong Time 3 years ago
  47. 47
    Chapter 47-Pink Woman? [R-18] 3 years ago
  48. 48
    Chapter 48-Terrible Background 3 years ago
  49. 49
    Chapter 49-Worried 3 years ago
  50. 50
    Chapter 50-Quiet Type 3 years ago
  51. 51
    Chapter 51-Group Division 3 years ago
  52. 52
    Chapter 52-Yua's Transform 3 years ago
  53. 53
    Chapter 53-Dinner 3 years ago
  54. 54
    Chapter 54-Attack of the Enemy 3 years ago
  55. 55
    Chapter 55-First Killing 3 years ago
  56. 56
    Chapter 56-It Seems I Was Too Worried? 3 years ago
  57. 57
    Chapter 57-Eyes On The Sword 3 years ago
  58. 58
    Chapter 58-Battle Charming 3 years ago
  59. 59
    Chapter 59-Melusine 3 years ago
  60. 60
    Chapter 60-Appetite 3 years ago
  61. 61
    Chapter 61-Treasure Compass Vibrating 3 years ago
  62. 62
    Chapter 62-Invisible Miracle Stone 3 years ago
  63. 63
    Chapter 63-Body Transformation 3 years ago
  64. 64
    Capter 64-Shelly Confusion 3 years ago
  65. 65
    Chapter 65-Fireworks 3 years ago
  66. 66
    Chapter 66-Who is She? 3 years ago
  67. 67
    Chapter 67-Shocked [R-18] 3 years ago
  68. 68
    Chapter 68-Ability For Woli 3 years ago
  69. 69
    Chapter 69-Leila's Confession 3 years ago
  70. 70
    Chapter 70-Make Me Your Woman [R-18] 3 years ago
  71. 71
    Chapter 71-Playing Together 3 years ago
  72. 72
    Chapter 72-Karyn is Feeling Sad 3 years ago
  73. 73
    Chapter 73-Two Spectators [R-18] 3 years ago
  74. 74
    Chapter 74-Beautiful Morning 3 years ago
  75. 75
    Chapter 75-Shackles in Shelly's Heart 3 years ago
  76. 76
    Chapter 76-The Strange Gate and Woli?? 3 years ago
  77. 77
    Chapter 77-What's with this Love Point?? 3 years ago
  78. 78
    Chapter 78-Cute Shelly 3 years ago
  79. 79
    Chapter 79-I Will Make You Like Me 3 years ago
  80. 80
    Chapter 80-Woli Bored 3 years ago
  81. 81
    Chapter 81-Women's Talk 3 years ago
  82. 82
    Chapter 82-Journey to Sailos City 3 years ago
  83. 83
    Chapter 83-Fighting Demons 3 years ago
  84. 84
    Chapter 84-Finally Returns to Sailos City 3 years ago
  85. 85
    Chapter 85-New House 3 years ago

Volumen 2 : Mervbanis Academy

  1. 86
    Chapter 86-Whisper 3 years ago
  2. 87
    Chapter 87-Relation 3 years ago
  3. 88
    Chapter 88-Dizzy Braine 3 years ago
  4. 89
    Chapter 89-Plan Against Bandits 3 years ago
  5. 90
    Chapter 90-Slums 3 years ago
  6. 91
    Chapter 91-Red Rose Gang Leader 3 years ago
  7. 92
    Chapter 92-Current Alice 3 years ago
  8. 93
    Chapter 93-Teasing Celyne 3 years ago
  9. 94
    Chapter 94-Bandits Attack 3 years ago
  10. 95
    Chapter 95-Pain In Heart 3 years ago
  11. 96
    Chapter 96-Help From Mervbanis Academy 3 years ago
  12. 97
    Chapter 97-Cold Woman 3 years ago
  13. 98
    Chapter 98-Scream 3 years ago
  14. 99
    Chapter 99-Alice Wakes Up 3 years ago
  15. 100
    Chapter 100-Gang That Alice Made 3 years ago
  16. 101
    Chapter 101-Reconnected [R-18] 3 years ago
  17. 102
    Chapter 102-I Feel Heavy 3 years ago
  18. 103
    Chapter 103-Shopping 3 years ago
  19. 104
    Chapter 104-Visit to Ashleigh Residence 3 years ago
  20. 105
    Chapter 105-Trecia's Hallucinations 3 years ago
  21. 106
    Chapter 106-Engagement 3 years ago
  22. 107
    Chapter 107-Fighting Nola Again 3 years ago
  23. 108
    Chapter 108-Trecia's Most Beautiful Day 3 years ago
  24. 109
    Chapter 109-Exam and Beginning of the Story. 3 years ago
  25. 110
    Chapter 110-Pearls In Every Area 3 years ago
  26. 111
    Chapter 111-What Happened to Elysia? 3 years ago
  27. 112
    Chapter 112-The Spectacle 3 years ago
  28. 113
    Chapter 113-Bunny Girl 3 years ago
  29. 114
    Chapter 114-Rank Group 3 years ago
  30. 115
    Chapter 115-Ability Check 3 years ago
  31. 116
    Chapter 116-10 Top Students 3 years ago
  32. 117
    Chapter 117-The Battle Begins 3 years ago
  33. 118
    Chapter 118- Huh? Why is She Here? 3 years ago
  34. 119
    Chapter 119-Disciplining Maids (1) 3 years ago
  35. 120
    Chapter 120-Disciplining Maids (2) 3 years ago
  36. 121
    Chapter 121-Mirror 3 years ago
  37. 122
    Chapter 122-Reply 3 years ago
  38. 123
    Chapter 123-Elyse Becomes Bolder 3 years ago
  39. 124
    Chapter 124-Challenge 3 years ago
  40. 125
    Chapter 125-Natalia VS Lute (1) 3 years ago
  41. 126
    Chapter 126-Natalia VS Lute (2) 3 years ago
  42. 127
    Chapter 127-Nervous Misti 3 years ago
  43. 128
    Chapter 128-Misti Fall 3 years ago
  44. 129
    Chapter 129-Need Explanation 3 years ago
  45. 130
    Chapter 130-Yasmine Half-Spirit 3 years ago
  46. 131
    Chapter 131-Being Transparent 3 years ago
  47. 132
    Chapter 132-Yasmine's View 3 years ago
  48. 133
    Chapter 133-The Unexpected Arrival of Someone 3 years ago
  49. 134
    Chapter 134-The Creepy Teacher 3 years ago
  50. 135
    Chapter 135-Meeting Lisa 3 years ago
  51. 136
    Chapter 136-Do you want to be my disciple? 3 years ago
  52. 137
    Chapter 137-Commotion in Girls' Dormitory 3 years ago
  53. 138
    Chapter 138-Marika's Invitation 3 years ago
  54. 139
    Chapter 139-Red Dungeon Appears 3 years ago
  55. 140
    Chapter 140-Test 3 years ago
  56. 141
    Chapter 141-Quest 3 years ago
  57. 142
    Chapter 142-Elyse's Wish 3 years ago
  58. 143
    Chapter 143-Hot Springs 3 years ago
  59. 144
    Chapter 144-All Men's Dreams [R-18] 3 years ago
  60. 145
    Chapter 145-Action Behind the Shadows 3 years ago
  61. 146
    Chapter 146-He is the Same as Us 3 years ago
  62. 147
    Chapter 147-Mind 3 years ago
  63. 148
    Chapter 148-Touching 3 years ago
  64. 149
    Chapter 149-Minerals in The Red Cliff 3 years ago
  65. 150
    Chapter 150-Slime Curse 3 years ago
  66. 151
    Chapter 151-Drowning 3 years ago
  67. 152
    Chapter 152-Strider 2 years ago
  68. 153
    Chapter 153-Red Cube 2 years ago
  69. 154
    Chapter 154-Meeting with Natalia 2 years ago
  70. 155
    Chapter 155-Ice Knight 2 years ago
  71. 156
    Chapter 156-Yua's Power 2 years ago
  72. 157
    Chapter 157-Voice From the Darkness 2 years ago
  73. 158
    Chapter 158-Danger 2 years ago
  74. 159
    Chapter 159-Appearance of a Necromancer 2 years ago
  75. 160
    Chapter 160-Difficulty 2 years ago
  76. 161
    Chapter 161-Cracks 2 years ago
  77. 162
    Chapter 162-Stop Here 2 years ago
  78. 163
    Chapter 163-Empty 2 years ago
  79. 164
    Chapter 164-Feeling So Happy [R-18] 2 years ago
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