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A estória é muito boa e segue um ritmo cadenciado, mas é doloroso quando o mc fala, que personagem merda, ele ser alguém ruim que melhora com o tempo seria louvável se isso acontecesse, mas o cara é uma criança birrenta que simplesmente não revisa os próprios passos, alguém que não reflete sobre si não é inteligente, é só prepotente mesmo.
I don’t get what the whole hype is about. The mc is pretty unlikeable and a stupid egois who sleeps with the fantasy of revenge every night while what the heroes did was valid. And don’t get me started with his parents they feed into his ego and make it a god complex. Overall not my cup of tea.
The best fanfic I've read about MHA ﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠﾠ
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Best fanfic on the app hands down. This book is what got me to start reading fanfics started reading this novel from chapter 10 been reading for a year and will continue reading for as long as the author makes chapters. I’m pretty sure I’ve made a review before a few months back
It's a really great fanfic, with a unique mc that makes the BNHA world, show it's hidden beauty.
these fanfic could be considered the best mha fanfic out there it took me a while but i love the mc's god complex and the author writing is great everything is so natural and these fanfic could have been a stand alone novel
It's an ok junk food type novel but the character is a pretty trashy power fantasy type with a pretty unlikeable personality that seems to only get worse over time.
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Wait the author is from Trinidad and Tobago🤣🇹🇹man your work is insane and keep it up bro all tho I don’t like harem novels this one is good
Honestly 92 chalters in and this just feels more and more like the Mac or author is an Andrew Tate fanboy
Véi, a melhor história que vc vai encontrar de my hero academia. Só lê, vc não vai se arrepender. O autor é incrível demais no desenvolvimento da história, dos personagem, e os plots, às lutas, às tensões é outro nível.
(Google Translate) This story is very good, the characters, the writing, the story, absolutely everything in this story is very good. Maybe the only thing I don't like at all is Horizon's attitude, but that's personal taste, so it doesn't matter. The only thing that matters is that this story could enter my top 3 best stories I have read or am reading.
Alguien me puede decir quién es su pareja o interés, reso para que no sea Mirko es muy cliché y meh (no es alguien de mi agrado esto es personal) pero la historia asta donde voy es 10/10 es mejor que la mayoría de aquí🎈😔👍💜💜
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I did liked the story and the main character is very entertaining also the changes to the story are good too but I’m dropping because the main characters cruelty just started to leave a bad taste in my mouth so far the mc is not even cruel to villains compared to allies. Might pick it back up and still would recommend it is a good story. ( If you wondering I don’t mean him being cocky and rude I mean what he did to shoto and midnight very unnecessarily)
So, it's a pretty interesting story, but the author doesn't really understand how to use commas and positively refuses to use grammar checkers (e.g., Grammarly, Quilbot, etc.); this makes it so that pretty much every chapter has at least 1-2 spelling errors, way too many run-on sentences, and awkward-sounding dialogues as a result of the lack of commas and proper punctuation. Now, while I'm slightly annoyed that the author is willing to spend so much time writing and planning out a pretty good story but isn't willing to spend an extra 3-5 minutes to drastically improve the final product, I have to say that I've enjoyed the story. Law as a character improves as a person, the side characters don't feel too 1-dimensional, though I do think they could've used a lot more development, and the setting and MC's powers are interesting enough. Edit (CHAPTER 285 (Classroom Tension)): I think this needs to be stated as well: the author is pretty bad at bringing emotional scenes to life; they just tell us people are sad in the blandest ways possible, with little to no nuance or, well, weight, for a lack of a better term, behind the scenes (so, in summary, this is an issue of too much tell and too little show when it comes to character nuance and motivation). Overall, I'd give this a read but know that the above flaws are prevalent throughout the book and barely improve as the book progresses.
The closest description I can can come up with for this novel is "Homelander in MHA", and I like it! -------------------------------------------------
After receiving so many comments about how good this fanfic was, I decided to give it a try, but seeing how the main character gets resistance to mind control due to his big ego at the beginning made my desire to read more drop a lot. I don’t know what will happen next, but seeing such a scenario at the beginning, there is not much hope for something worthwhile
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This book is great but I am giving it 5 star for one reason chapter 26.....
Видно что автор постоянно улучшается во многом, Редко можно увидеть как персонаж растёт и в плане сил и в плане характера, видно что автор старался объяснить многое логикой в плане сил главного героя и думаю отлично получилось 👍 Таких авторов как ты очень мало к сожалению, те у которых есть опыт и которые хорошо описывают саму историю, к сожалению очень мало проектов у вас, которым можно было наслаждаться, надеюсь что будете и дальше писать, хотелось бы увидеть дальнейшие ваши проекты в таких аниме как - Блич, JJK, Теневой раб (новелла) и т.д ;) удачи автору!!
the story is superb. i enjoyed it but author can u please tell that horizon will find out what pantu did to his leg.
10/10 best fanfic ever I could re read this whole thing in a day just to pass the time for the next chapter to release I can’t get enough of it. I have a very short attention span and the only novel that has kept me this excited about what happens next is this one definitely worth to read.
Top 3 Fanfictions I have ever read. Great writing quality, a great background, a great plot, great characters, and realistic interactions. Pretty much everything you can ask for in a fanfiction.
Great grammar, tbh I don't know how stable the updates are, story development is great, not afraid to have the 'original timeline' change because of the butterfly effect. Character design imo is great, I love arrogant, narcissistic, confident and extremely intelligent characters and the romantic side of the story is quite well done too. Characters are good, fight scenes are good... Ye good stuff! Does anyone have any recommendations for novels with an arrogant, narcissistic, confident and/or intelligent mc? Thanks in advance!
Love the novel but I just want to know I’m on chapter 141 when does he solve his quirk issue
Revelar spoiler Очень понравилось!! Надеюсь на дальнейшие работы автора. Хотелось бы, чтобы вы написали фанфик по Bleach, временной промежуток думаю до 100 лет основание готей 13, пусть главный герой не будет сразу OP и также надеюсь что характер будет более беззаботным, будет очень интересно наблюдать за развитием сюжета до основание готей 13 и раскрытие 1 первых капитанов готей 13, думаю будет очень интересно в этом плане.
Does horizon know yet that his parent are dead and if so in what chapter👌👌
A estória é muito boa e segue um ritmo cadenciado, mas é doloroso quando o mc fala, que personagem merda, ele ser alguém ruim que melhora com o tempo seria louvável se isso acontecesse, mas o cara é uma criança birrenta que simplesmente não revisa os próprios passos, alguém que não reflete sobre si não é inteligente, é só prepotente mesmo.
I don’t get what the whole hype is about. The mc is pretty unlikeable and a stupid egois who sleeps with the fantasy of revenge every night while what the heroes did was valid. And don’t get me started with his parents they feed into his ego and make it a god complex. Overall not my cup of tea.
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Revelar spoiler Best fanfic on the app hands down. This book is what got me to start reading fanfics started reading this novel from chapter 10 been reading for a year and will continue reading for as long as the author makes chapters. I’m pretty sure I’ve made a review before a few months back
It's a really great fanfic, with a unique mc that makes the BNHA world, show it's hidden beauty.
these fanfic could be considered the best mha fanfic out there it took me a while but i love the mc's god complex and the author writing is great everything is so natural and these fanfic could have been a stand alone novel
It's an ok junk food type novel but the character is a pretty trashy power fantasy type with a pretty unlikeable personality that seems to only get worse over time.
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Wait the author is from Trinidad and Tobago🤣🇹🇹man your work is insane and keep it up bro all tho I don’t like harem novels this one is good
Honestly 92 chalters in and this just feels more and more like the Mac or author is an Andrew Tate fanboy
Véi, a melhor história que vc vai encontrar de my hero academia. Só lê, vc não vai se arrepender. O autor é incrível demais no desenvolvimento da história, dos personagem, e os plots, às lutas, às tensões é outro nível.
(Google Translate) This story is very good, the characters, the writing, the story, absolutely everything in this story is very good. Maybe the only thing I don't like at all is Horizon's attitude, but that's personal taste, so it doesn't matter. The only thing that matters is that this story could enter my top 3 best stories I have read or am reading.
Alguien me puede decir quién es su pareja o interés, reso para que no sea Mirko es muy cliché y meh (no es alguien de mi agrado esto es personal) pero la historia asta donde voy es 10/10 es mejor que la mayoría de aquí🎈😔👍💜💜
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I did liked the story and the main character is very entertaining also the changes to the story are good too but I’m dropping because the main characters cruelty just started to leave a bad taste in my mouth so far the mc is not even cruel to villains compared to allies. Might pick it back up and still would recommend it is a good story. ( If you wondering I don’t mean him being cocky and rude I mean what he did to shoto and midnight very unnecessarily)
So, it's a pretty interesting story, but the author doesn't really understand how to use commas and positively refuses to use grammar checkers (e.g., Grammarly, Quilbot, etc.); this makes it so that pretty much every chapter has at least 1-2 spelling errors, way too many run-on sentences, and awkward-sounding dialogues as a result of the lack of commas and proper punctuation. Now, while I'm slightly annoyed that the author is willing to spend so much time writing and planning out a pretty good story but isn't willing to spend an extra 3-5 minutes to drastically improve the final product, I have to say that I've enjoyed the story. Law as a character improves as a person, the side characters don't feel too 1-dimensional, though I do think they could've used a lot more development, and the setting and MC's powers are interesting enough. Edit (CHAPTER 285 (Classroom Tension)): I think this needs to be stated as well: the author is pretty bad at bringing emotional scenes to life; they just tell us people are sad in the blandest ways possible, with little to no nuance or, well, weight, for a lack of a better term, behind the scenes (so, in summary, this is an issue of too much tell and too little show when it comes to character nuance and motivation). Overall, I'd give this a read but know that the above flaws are prevalent throughout the book and barely improve as the book progresses.
The closest description I can can come up with for this novel is "Homelander in MHA", and I like it! -------------------------------------------------
After receiving so many comments about how good this fanfic was, I decided to give it a try, but seeing how the main character gets resistance to mind control due to his big ego at the beginning made my desire to read more drop a lot. I don’t know what will happen next, but seeing such a scenario at the beginning, there is not much hope for something worthwhile
Revelar spoiler This book is great but I am giving it 5 star for one reason chapter 26.....
Видно что автор постоянно улучшается во многом, Редко можно увидеть как персонаж растёт и в плане сил и в плане характера, видно что автор старался объяснить многое логикой в плане сил главного героя и думаю отлично получилось 👍 Таких авторов как ты очень мало к сожалению, те у которых есть опыт и которые хорошо описывают саму историю, к сожалению очень мало проектов у вас, которым можно было наслаждаться, надеюсь что будете и дальше писать, хотелось бы увидеть дальнейшие ваши проекты в таких аниме как - Блич, JJK, Теневой раб (новелла) и т.д ;) удачи автору!!
the story is superb. i enjoyed it but author can u please tell that horizon will find out what pantu did to his leg.
10/10 best fanfic ever I could re read this whole thing in a day just to pass the time for the next chapter to release I can’t get enough of it. I have a very short attention span and the only novel that has kept me this excited about what happens next is this one definitely worth to read.
Top 3 Fanfictions I have ever read. Great writing quality, a great background, a great plot, great characters, and realistic interactions. Pretty much everything you can ask for in a fanfiction.
Great grammar, tbh I don't know how stable the updates are, story development is great, not afraid to have the 'original timeline' change because of the butterfly effect. Character design imo is great, I love arrogant, narcissistic, confident and extremely intelligent characters and the romantic side of the story is quite well done too. Characters are good, fight scenes are good... Ye good stuff! Does anyone have any recommendations for novels with an arrogant, narcissistic, confident and/or intelligent mc? Thanks in advance!
Love the novel but I just want to know I’m on chapter 141 when does he solve his quirk issue
Revelar spoiler Очень понравилось!! Надеюсь на дальнейшие работы автора. Хотелось бы, чтобы вы написали фанфик по Bleach, временной промежуток думаю до 100 лет основание готей 13, пусть главный герой не будет сразу OP и также надеюсь что характер будет более беззаботным, будет очень интересно наблюдать за развитием сюжета до основание готей 13 и раскрытие 1 первых капитанов готей 13, думаю будет очень интересно в этом плане.
Does horizon know yet that his parent are dead and if so in what chapter👌👌